AkDha FF ~Tum Dena Saath Mera~ch 2 updated (dec 17)

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

wonderful update!!! loved it..

thnkx for the pm n do continue soon..

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Omg!!!👏👏 This is Just a mindblowing storyline.⭐️👏..Wow..Jalal is so possessive and caring for her..He thinks for her so0o0 much..Lovely.😳😳. The fact that he tries to be happy and decides to find out about that guy who is marrying with Jodha..WOWW!!!😳😳 Lovely!! Now JOdha feels something uneasy hun! Lets see aage kya hota hai..Lovely Work Shreshu di n Tahni..Kepe rocking!!!⭐️⭐️👏

Kudos !!!👏👏👏

Update plzzz 🤣

Edited by PrincessNancy - 11 years ago

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SShreShthA

@SShreShthA

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: baubles
Shreshhh...my swetie!! I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw your PM that you had updated...I have been soo waiting for this!🤗🤗
Beautiful chapter yaar..I love Jalal n Jo's friendship, and ofcourse the insecurity and jealousy. I hope they both realise soon that they feel for each other, something beyond plain friendship..😳
Can't wait for more!!
Thankyou for dedicating this chapter to me yaar!! Love you..❤️
Sorry for bugging you sooo much for this..but no sorry, coz I'm gonna continue😆

AWWW SOMU U R MY SWEETEST DARLING...NO NEED TO BE SORRY I LUVED IT YAAR...🤗🤗🤗

THANX FOR LUVING DIS CHAPTER...

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

hey shreshtha di...😊

u chupi rustam...😲

what an awesome concept...👏👏👏

jalal and jodha...childhood friends...😳

jalal loves jodha but dint realize...jodha too have some feelings but unknown of them...

liked it very much...😃

tremendous plot ...keep it up...congrats to u and tanhi for a beautiful story line❤️

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

My Dear Shreshtha,

First U deserve a big hug for this Awesome FF🤗🤗🤗
Thanks Somya for inspiring her to write this excellent FF! U also deserve Hug and clap 🤗👏👏👏

Tum Dena Saath Mera...Awesome Title : Awesome Poster Very nice presentation... 😊😊😊

Oh my god " Chupi Rustam" I am surprise this is your first attempt. I love the intensity of the story. Their innocent friendship, unknow love for each other. ❤️ U really write very very good! The best part in your writing...is flow of the story...you captured me in the story. Jalal...Jealousy awesome!!! Beauty of Jodha the way your wrote is awesome... instead of her prising her beauty ...you mention how popular she was because of her beauty and talent... U Rock!!!!👏👏👏

Super Duper excellent first attempt ⭐️⭐️⭐️
I can't wait for next part... specially twist probably Jalal will fight to get Jodha... Can't wait... Now I will love to request for

Update Pljjj🤣🤣🤣

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago

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kanika

@kank_dah

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

great story.sweet bonding between the two.plz update soon

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swetha

@sw123

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

wow fabulous ff 👍🏼

update soon and pm me when u update

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@--Janvie--

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Awesome Update Shreeshtha di and Tahni.👏 👏 ⭐️Simply Fab.Just Loved it.❤️ I have got a sure shot feeling Jalal will realize his love first.😳 Want to kill Suryabhan of your FF.😆 God I don't want any rift between My Akdha😔 ,What type of big MU will happen?! 😕 😔 😭 And Ya Jodha don't know that Jalal is Shenshah-E-Hindustan,She'll be shocked when get to know,I think the twist may be connected with this also.😳 I always love the Possesive Jalal alot.❤️ 😳 ❤️Hope to See more possesiveness of him here.😉 😳 Pls Continue Soon.😊 P.S.:-Why didn't I get any PM when I have asked for one in the beginning days of this FF while commenting?! 😕 😔 😭 😭 😭 Pls Do PM me next time.😃 😳

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Radz

@...Radhika...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Shreshu Nd Tahni AWESOME UPDATE!!👍🏼👏
MUST SAY U R ONE OF THE BEST WRITERS!!

SORRY I DIDNT COMMENTED ON 1ST CHAP SORRY FOR DAT!!
LOVE U GUYS!

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SShreShthA

@SShreShthA

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Pallavvi
hey shreshtha di...😊
u chupi rustam...😲
what an awesome concept...👏👏👏
jalal and jodha...childhood friends...😳
jalal loves jodha but dint realize...jodha too have some feelings but unknown of them...
liked it very much...😃
tremendous plot ...keep it up...congrats to u and tanhi for a beautiful story line❤️

awww...thanks so much luv...so sweet of u...

bt i would luv to say its u guys luv and inspiration and Tahni d forum's one of awesome writer support ki i tried it...thanx so much yaar🤗🤗🤗