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Posted: 11 years ago

So guys I am back with next chapter. Hope it will satisfy your GUTTER MIND for now!😳

Recap:

Jodha's POV (about future):

How sure I feel, how warm and strong and happy
For the future! How sure the future is within me;
I am like a seed with a perfect flower enclosed...
~D.H. Lawrence, "Wedlock"

Surya's POV (about future):

Tomorrow is fresh, with no mistakes in it. ~L.M. Montgomery

Jalal's POV (about future):

The future, according to some scientists, will be exactly like the past, only far more expensive. ~John Sladek

Ruqaiya's POV (about future):

I have seen the future and it is very much like the present - only longer. ~Kehlog Albran

My POV for their futures:

The course of life is unpredictable... no one can write his autobiography in advance. ~Abraham Joshua Heschel

I know not what the future holds, but I know who holds the future. ~Author Unknown

Part 12

Jalal who was fully drunk and heartbroken drives car nearly at full speed. He drinks continuously while driving. He loses his control on steering. And finally a sudden clash his car hits the tree and jalal loses his conscious. By god's mercy a man passing by the road sees him. His head bleeding heavily his pulse rate slowing down. He notices his phone is not damaged much. Without losing a second he calls ambulance.

**At hospital**

He admits him and asks doctor to start his treatment soon. The word boy takes him to the operation theater. Receptionist asks about patient. He says he found him on the road he was badly injured so he admitted him. She asks him about patient's family. I don't know him but I found his phone. We can call on last deal number. The man checks his phone. Last dialed no... Yes it's someone Cutiepie. I think it's his wife's number. He calls.

Tttrrriiinnnggg...Jodha is shocked Why he his calling me so late night. See sees in watch it's 11 pm.

Hello she receives the phone.

Man- Hello owner of this phone met with an accident. We admitted him in City Hospital. Please come soon.

Jodha- What? Wait there I am coming in 20 minutes.

Jodha changes her cloths and rushes towards the hospital. Without informing Surya about it she leaves for the hospital.

** At City Hospital**

Jodha runs towards the reception. She meets the man and thanks him for helping Jalal. That man returns Jalal's phone and leaves for his houses. Receptionist asks Jodha patients name.

Receptionist- Ma'am please tell me patient's name

Jodha- Mr. Jalal Mohammed.

Doctor comes and informs Jodha that he is out of danger. He had regained his conscious. He asks her not to worry and be with patient. Jodha thanks him. Receptionist comes to Jodha.

Receptionist- Mrs. Mohammed please sign here. Mrs. Mohammed... Jodha murmurs. Signs the paper.

Shocked Jodha enters Jalal's room. Finds Jalal is sleeping peacefully. She just smiles and turns to leave suddenly Jalal holdes her hand. Jodha looks at him in surprise.

"Hey sit with me. Please", Jalal requests. Jodha smiles and sits. "I hope your boyfriend will not get mistrustful", Jalal says in naughty tone. "My boyfriend? Who? Asks Jodha. "Mr. Accountant" answered Jalal. "Oh please he is not my boyfriend" Jodha answers in infuriating tone.

May I come in Mrs. Mohammed? Asks a nurse. Jodha feels uncomfortable. Jalal smirks. "Sorry to disturb you please can I give him medicines. "No my beautiful newly wedded wife will give me meds." Jalal answered. "Sure", the nurse giggles and leaves.

Jalal- Hello Mrs. Mohammed...He says in husky voice

Jodha- Cut the cackle. They misunderstood me as your consort...

Jalal without paying attention- Hey did we done our first night of marriage? Or it's not done yet?

Jodha gives him annoyed look- What? Are you out of your mind? She says angrily and pinches on Jalal's shoulder.

Jalal screams Aaahhh hearing his voice THAT nurse rushes towards the room. Jalal notices her arrival and quickly holds Jodha's hand who is unaware of nurse's presence. Jalal pretends to be unaware.

Jalal- Sweetheart I know you are angry on me because on our GOLDEN NIGHT I was busy in office work but it didn't mean that you pinch me on chest like that. I am injured.

Jodha looks at him with topsy-turvy face. What he is saying about? She thoughts.

Jalal continues his drama. I am really sorry for driving the car at high speed. Please don't divorce me I promise we will have a child in a year. Jodha looks at him with total jumbled face. Nurse leaves blushing and giggling.

Jodha- What you are talking about? Are you alright? I think accident affected you so much.

Jalal- I am joking. Don't take it personally. He laughs.

Jodha gives him dose and asks him to take rest. She sleeps on sofa. Due to medicinal effect Jalal falls asleep.

**Morning at Hospital**

Jalal is unable to find Jodha. He asks THAT nurse about her.

Jalal- Have you seen my wife?

Nurse- Yes! She had gone home to bring your cloths.

Jalal- Oh! She loves me a lot he smiles. Nurse smiles too and leaves.

Jodha comes to hospital. A nurse gives her bowl of soup for Jalal. Jodha enters the room.

Jalal- To tum wapas aa gai... he teases her.

Jodha- Kyu nahi aana chahiye tha?

Jalal- Humne aisa to nahi kaha.

When Jodha is about to say further nurse again comes with a bucket full of hot water and sponge.

Nurse- Madam please bathe him.

Jodha looks at her with a jerk. What? She questions.

Nurse- Yes madam he is your husband you can bathe him. Nurse smiles and leaves.

Jodha is still puzzled. Jalal smirks.

How can I bathe you? Jodha asks angrily. She said it's necessary. Please give me a bath.

Jodha sits next to jalal with hot water bucket and sponge in her hand. Wait lets go to bathroom... Jalal suggests. Why Jodha asks arrogantly. Hey I don't want other ladies to see me bare. Jodha unwillingly agrees and helps him.

**Bath room**

Jodha and Jalal enter bath room and find an empty bathtub and a small stool. Hey let me remove my cloths... Jalal says. What?...Jodha. Yes abb kapde pehenkar to jum naha nahi sakte na. He removes his shirt. Jodha looks at him angrily. Hey don't drool over me...Teases Jalal. Jodha closes her eyes.

Open your eyes and give me a bath... Jalal orders Jodha.

She unwillingly makes sponge wet and starts rubbing it on his macho chest. Her soft touch puts him on fire. Her heavenly smooth silky touch makes him mad and full of sexual desires. Jalal closes his eyes. His eyes become heavy with sensation of desire.

Suddenly Jodha stops bathing him. Hey what happened? Jalal asks angrily. Finished now I am going you change the dress. Wait doctor asked me not to use my palms for any heavy work. She looks at his palms they are in plaster. Oh god what should I do now... She brings his ALL cloths and stands in front of him like a statue. Closes he eyes.

Jalal- Remove my wet cloths first. Jodha feels she is dying in shyness. She hangs his cloths on a hanger and goes near wet Jalal and slowly removes his pant. Jalal can't help but smirks. Jalal who is getting madder by her touch moves back and his leg hits the stool and he falls in the bathtub with Jodha. They have an eyelock.

Ooucchh shouts jodha. She becomes wet too. Jalal replies... "Sorry..."

Jodha gets up and halps him akso. You change inner cloths here. I will change in room and please don't come out without warning. She leaves and Jalal smiles.

Jalal manages to change inners and comes out wrapping a towel around his waist. He chokes when finds Jodha wearing a beautiful peach color saree with backless blouse. He drools over her back.

Her phone rings and she picks it up. Its Bharmal.

Jodha- Hello Papa

Bharmal- Hello bte kaise ho?

Jodha- I am fine. Actually Jalal sir met with an accident. He is not badly injured but I am here in hospital for his help.

Bharmal- That's nice bete. Help him and he don't have family members so please don't ask him about them.

Jodha- Ok papa. When you are returning?

Bharmal- We are staying here for three days more your aunty is admitted due to chikungunya.

Jodha- Oh take care of her. Don't worry. Bye

Bharmal- Bye

Jodha cuts the phone as turns to pin her pallu she collides with Jalal and duo falls on the bed. Jalal falls on Jodha's top. He tries to get up but due to weakness again falls with a bang. Nurse enters Ahmmm Ahmmm... Your discharge papers are ready please sign them so that you can get leave. Jodha realizes Jalal is still on top of her only in towel. She manages to help him and get him ready.

**Surya's house**

Surya becomes upset when Jodha informs him that she is with Jalal. His mother asks him to cool down. He cries in insecurity.

**At City Hospital**

Jodha signs Jalal's discharging papers. Medical practitioner asks Jodha to take care of Jalal as he is quiet weak. And as his palms are still in plaster don't let him do heavy work... Jodha agrees. THAT Nurse comes to Jalal and says "Please postpone your plan of child for some days". Jalal smiles. Nurse blushes. Jalal leaves with Jodha.

Precap: Jodha helps Jalal in wearing his Jeans☺️. Adham Khan and Jalal's father Mr. F Khan's entry.

Hey guys I have postponed Ruqu's re-entry for Baubles, Azz, Shreshtha, PrincessNancy and Mallika.123

Edited by PupCat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank god u postponed ruqaiyyas entry.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesomeee updateee thnx for the pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Radhuuu mmuuuaaahhh yaar...😃
kya winter season mei heater wali update di h yaar...👏👏👏

mindblowing...terrific...superbb...awesome...amazing yaar..

i luv all d akdha scenes a lot bt highlight for me was saari one...from bathtub to saari wwwooowww yaarrr...tttooo goooddd...excellent...
itna update ke liye tadhpa kar...itna intezaar kara kar mast update di h yaar...totally jhakaas...

btw waise bhale hi tu abhi shaadi ka track add nhi kar rhi bt happy with Mrs. Mohammed😆😆
super happy that nw jallu knows ki mr.accountant is nt bf of cutiepie...😃😃😃

And thanx a ton for nt bringing back rukku😡 soo soon...😉😛

really excited jodha taking care of jalal😃

yaar u r really awesome writer...fulfilling readers demand..a tight jaadu ki jhappi yaar🤗🤗...Luv you yaar radss❤️🤗...keep it up👍🏼

plz yaar next update ke liye jyada mat tadhpana...

Edited by SShreShthA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
loved it
thanks fr pm n update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
atlast u updated...thanx 😉

bus itna hi gutter😆

ko na agey zyada dena...waise mast update...ruku ki entry hogi kiya😕
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

Oye Radz! Weren't u suppose to update!



btw when r u updating tahniii...jaldi kar naaa
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: indudolai

atlast u updated...thanx 😉


bus itna hi gutter😆

ko na agey zyada dena...waise mast update...ruku ki entry hogi kiya😕



Hey gutter aayega... bcoz abhi abhi dey r bcomin frends... achanak to SR ni karva sakti na... 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is One of the best updates Dear:))))))
It was just awesomeee :)))))
Pls continue soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
What an awesome concept and chapter
I read all updated chapter of your story in one go and now my eyes are hurting...
But for good, we have to bear pain
Must say u r excellnt
And ur alll chapters are damn awesome
I luv mischivious Jalal
Plez update next part soonnn & pm me tooo

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