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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PupCat



In one go!!! OMG!! 😳 Take care of ur eyes!!! THANKS😳
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I will
Actually its all ur fault
You write all your updates so good that I was forced to read it in one go...😊😊
But continue to write such an awesome updates

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: san.gar



owww so cute... thanks😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KDR81

Wow...What an update...Thnx Dear...😛 Hospital mein Bathtub la diya tumne hum logo ke liye??...so so nice of u ...😆😆



lol yes tum logon ke lie laya!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: baubles

Radss🤗 This update just made me blush...I can't imagine how much that nurse would have blushed☺️ Jalal is plain naughty and Jo...well looks like she is quite attracted to him as well..Love them both!

Love u Radhuu...❤️ and thanks for postponing Ruqu's entry😆
Update soon!!!!



my dear bau bau bles bles thanks! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sw123

wow awesome update

waiting for ur next update
plzzz pm me when u update😊



owww thanx dear... srry i forgot to pm u! this time sure...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Radhika!!!!! JALAL IS SO Hillarious!! Entire chapter I laugh out loud!!!! I was blushing and laughing...I love it sweety!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

😳My gutter mind... Kiss missing?????😉
what a imagination jalal and jodha!!!! Hospital ...bath tub... Nurse...Sponge bath...chikguniya...and can't wait for next chapter
PANT CHANGING...hahahahhah lol🤣
Radhika funniest chapter of the month...
love it U ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤣



thanx di! vaise iske tutions aap hi se liye hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Omg omg omg rads!!!! 👏 You are A-M-A-Z-I-N-GGG !!!👏👏 Beautiful...Awesome..Brilliant...Yar..I m getting addicted to this story like a mad gal..You are simply superb my Rads!! Lol..what a hospital romance... Loved it to core..SO Hot ...😳😳 Very good..Keep itup!...Update plz!!❤️



welcome back... thanks and UPDATE DEAD LOVE FAST!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bit busy these days. Saw ur pm of this part.!! i will def comment on previous parts which i missed it. !! sorry.

When Jalal says golden night ,baby. i was literally ROFLing on my chair. Divorce added much to that.!!

Control Jalal Control 😆 😆

Thnku for PMing me eventhough i m not replying from few days.!!


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Recap: Jodha signs Jalal's discharging papers. Medical practitioner asks Jodha to take care of Jalal as he is quiet weak. And as his palms are still in plaster don't let him do heavy work... Jodha agrees. THAT Nurse comes to Jalal and says "Please postpone your plan of child for some days". Jalal smiles. Jalal leaves with Jodha.

Part 13

This part is recommended for 16+ buddies. ☺️

Jalal with Jodha reaches to JM mansion. Servants in the house start cleaning and rearranging Jalal's room as per Jodha's orders.

Ayyee.. Wait first of all throw all the alcohol out of the house...She orders.
Hey it's my home and you can't throw my important things... Jalal argues.
Jodha gives him angry look and throws all the bottles.
Ya allah Why you threw all the bottles? Asks Jalal angrily...
Shhh... Jodha

Jodha takes Jalal to his room and makes him sit on the bed. She calls all the servants. Now from today onwards..you will follow my orders. No non-veg from today. You people will cook food with Shudh Ghee.. stop using butter. Only healthy food will be served in this house. Junk food is banned from today. No one will throw food. Am I clear? Yes Ma'am all servants say in one tone.

Jalal claps his hands. Wowww so you will be in charge of this house. You changed everything in one go now call my lawyer and convert this house on your name. We will change the name plate too Mrs. JJM Mansion... Jalal teases.

Shut up... Jodha gives him meds before dinner. I will be right back in 10 mins... Jodha leaves and goes to the kitchen.

She comes with Khichdi and Yogurt. Chheee what is this? Jalal starts making faces.

Stop making faces and eat this. This is your food... Jodha orders Jalal.
No way I am not going to eat this. Bring Pasta for me. Jalal declines. Jodha muzzles him. She sees plaster in jalal's palm and asks him

Jodha- Open your mouth.

Jalal- What?

Jodha takes spoonful Khichdi and makes him eat it.

Jalal- Chhiii it's watered-down and unflavored. I am not going to eat this crap.

Ok... She pinches him and when he opens his mouth to scream she suddenly feds him.

Jalal- Oh gosh! Are you crazy?

Jodha makes him eat plateful Khichdi and gives him water.

Jalal smirks and says Why you are doing duties of a wife? Means are you interested in marrying me?

No I am not. I am completing duties of a friend. She smiles. Ouch when you became my friend?

Ummm... 2 nights ago... she replies.
Oh really wow... Jalal smiles. Jodha gives him medicines.

Jalal falls asleep and Jodha decides to sleep on couch. Suddenly she hears a roaring sound Jalal Jalal Jalal...

All servants gather in hall. She again hears same roaring sound. She goes down stairs and sees a man of age between 55-60 and a heighted muscular guy with him.

Yes who is this? Jodha asks.

First tell me who the hell are you?... asks the man.

Excuses me I am Jalal's friend. The guy looks at Jodha with utter lust. He eyes Jodha from to bottom. She feels unsafe. I am Jodha.

I am Jalal's father Mr. F Khan and this is my son Aadham.

Suddenly Jalal comes down stairs and orders the servants to leave to their room. He stands besides Jodha. Aadham licks his lips and Jalal notices it. Jodha you go to my room... Jalal orders.

Jodha starts going upstairs when Mr. F Khan says... So you have appointed a prostitute for your craving lonely nights... Aadham smirks.

Jodha who is going upstairs stops in mid way. Tears flows down her cheeks. Shut up your dirty mouth. She is my secretary. Ohhh secretary cum Sl*t... That's nice 2 in 1. Jodha feels more insecure. She literally starts crying.

Jalal- Jodha go to my room now! He shouts. Hey chic I am better than this Boy you can come to me this night...says Aadham. Jodha looks at Aadham with fearfull eyes.

Hey you mind your language. Jalal literally starts fight with Aadham when Jodha interrupts.

Please Jalal you are still weak. Please stop fighting. Aadham propels Jodha and she hits the ground. Jalal runs towards her and helps her in getting up. Are you ok? He asks with care.

I am fine... she smiles artificially. How dare you to touch her... Jalal yells at Aadham.
Ohhh my possessive little brother. Aadham slyly says.

Mr. F Khan interrupts with crocodile tears and says Jalal my son I was missing you a lot. So I decided to meet you. After all you are my son. Though you hate me I love you. Please forgive your father. Your mother's death was not my fault. We need you my boy.

Oh stop this fake concern I know how much you love my money and my fame. Alhamdulillah you are aware of the fact that you have two sons. Jodha looks at them with puzzled face.

Jodha lets go... He takes Jodha with him. Jalal sleeps on bed while Jodha on couch.

**At morning**

It's 10 am and Jalal is still sleeping. Sun rays falls on his charming manly face. He opens his eye and sees Jodha who is correcting her small Bindi. Jalal smiles cutely and walk towards her. He removes the Bindi. That's perfect... He compliments. Jodha thanks him shyly.

Please you get ready I will be back with break fast.

Jodha comes with sandwich and juice. She puts it on table and turns just to find Jalal in his T- Shirt and inners. She closes her eyes.

What? Haven't you ever seen a guy in inners? Idiot girl... He exclaims.
Now come here and help me in wearing my jeans. Jodha hesitates. Hey come on please... he asks for the help.

He wears the pant but is unable to close the zip. Help me come on... he asks her to help. She closes her eyes tightly and starts closing the zip. Jalal closes his eyes which are again full of sexual desires. Her long thin fingers slightly touch his appealing manhood. He suddenly moves backwards.

After a long silence Ummm... I am going to the office for final check of the presentation. Then I will go to Surya's home and bring my suitcase. Ok? She asks. Jalal appreciates. Jodha leaves for office.

**At office**

Jodha goes to office and finds Aadham sitting on Jalal's chair. You here? She asks.

Yes why are you so surprised? He licks his lips. Jodha feels more unsafe. She takes all important files and puts them in drawer and locks it. Jodha starts leaving when Aadham clutches her wrist. Jodha gets horrified. He pulls her towards him and whispers why you satisfy your thirst with my LITTLE brother. Come to me one night I will show you what is real love making. Jodha starts crying in fear. She pushes him back and runs away. He tries to misbehave with her but she runs away from his clutches.

**At JM Mansion**

Jodha returns with her suitcase. Aadham also comes at same time and winks at her. She sees Jalal coming downstairs and runs towards him.

Hey what happened? Why are you so much scared?
Aadham interrupts him... Nothing Jalal I asked her to spend just one night with me and she got scared. He laughs.
Jodha hides behind Jalal. Jalal slaps Aadham hard.

Just shut up you moron. Stay away from her. Aadham leaves in anger. Jalal shows Jodha her new room and says... You stay here. This is my favorite room. He smiles. She also replies with a beautiful smile.

Jodha opens her laptop and shows Jalal full presentation. Jalal is impressed with her skills. Perfect final it! Such a beautiful presentation you made. Thanks... Jodha smiles shyly.

Aadham throws all things here and there. How dare she to reject me? That bloody prostitute! Now I will show her who am I... She will pay for it! And my dear Jalal you will also pay for that slap I promise you. He laughs crazily.

Jodha makes Paneer Makhni and Roti's for Jalal. Jalal who is lost in her thoughts is interrupted by jodha.

Jodha- Dinner time.

Jalal- ummm nice smell... Whats it?

Jodha- Paneer Makhni for patient.

Jalal- Wowww!!!! You made my night... Thanks...

Jodha serves him food. He takes first bite. Ummm... delicious... Very beautiful... He licks his fingers. You are master chief.

Jodha- Thank god you liked it! Now stop talking and start eating.

After dinner Jodha gives him meds and both falls asleep.

Precap: Jalal dreaming about Jodha... HOT DREAM AGAIN

Hey guys hope u enjoying the FF... Please do like and comment...😳

Edited by PupCat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
*UnRes*
it was an awesOme part Radz👏
lOved it..!

Aww..jallu saved jodha ...super liked it😳
N Adham ...*no comments* just hate him😡

LOvely update..keep it up👍🏼
Edited by Sofia13 - 11 years ago

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