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Rutuja Deo

@Rutuja...

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Awesome OS dear 😳😳

I Loved Saiyyan song...

Thanxx for using it for Akdha 🤗🤗

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philantus01

@philantus01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dat was wonderful😊😊

loved it...👏👏

i m really impressed d way u wrote especially d flashback part...👏👏

i hope cv learns sumthing frm u😆😆

perfect song i wud sae for dis Os...😳😳

lub u nannu...muahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗🤗🤗

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trolldemortx

@trolldemortx

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Wow! well done!
well written hun :)
and the song choice is apt :)

and Jodha realises in a split second that she had gone and done something she never thought she'd do :) Fall for the King! :)

Loved it :) Keep up the good work :)

xxx

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Aashi

@--Aashi--

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Awesome os ...😊👏

Write many more stories 😃

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prachi153

@prachi153

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

👏thanks princess dont have little hopes from serial do keep on writing such OS 👏👏👏👏love u for this

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

I wish something like this would be shown in the serial too..

it was a lovely read and enjoyed that it was in English...

I liked the way you've kept it all so crisp and yet explained everything (events and emotions) that transpired within the last week...

Very well done!

Once again, I hope something like this is shown in the serial...

Only a small point - if you're interested - (please don't take offence)

She retorted - WHy the hell have you come in my chamber..How can you?? This is not Amer right!! Go from here..

I know in the serial there are many discrepancies in her characterization..however, as a Queen - this form of language might not befit one of royal blood - esp one of her status...especially when she's addressing the Shehenshah..

She can show her anger with her eyes, with her expressions, even her actions to an extent - but, her words would generally be more formal..😳

Just that small point I wanted to make...

Lovely lovely lovely lovely OS once again! 🤗