OS - Teri Deewani - Page 4

Originally posted by: VincyAnne

Nancy , how do you do this ???!!! 😲

Your imagination is sooo Fantastic !!!! 👍🏼

Seriously you're talented yaar ... 👏👏👏

I really loved how Jalal actually took Jodha's dupatta and covered her ... ☺️

and the scene in the Diwaan-e-Khaas , brilliant esp the part where Jalal shouted ... 😳

Moti , glad that she explained everything that took place that night to Jodha 👏

The part I liked the most is when Jodha was removing her jewellery and she saw Jalal (halucination) smiling at her and she went and hug him but he disapears !!!!!!!! 😲😆

and the end where Jalal asked her why she's outside and asks her to go back to "room" as he's also going there and Jodha in return holds his hands and hugs him and Jalal understanding what Jodha is feeling at the moment ... My most fav part of all ... ❤️❤️❤️

OMG Vincy !! Thank You so much dear.. I am moved form your review!! Thanks a lot and I love you more darling😛😛😛 Thanks for appreciating it !!😛😛😊😊

Originally posted by: PupCat

Nancy lov u yaar

Love u too Jaaneman Radhika..😊😊

Originally posted by: pari_pooja

superb dear, loved it😃

Originally posted by: -Stephanie-

Wow! well done!
well written hun :)
and the song choice is apt :)

and Jodha realises in a split second that she had gone and done something she never thought she'd do :) Fall for the King! :)

Loved it :) Keep up the good work :)


xxx

Thanks so much!! I am really very happy!😊😊😊

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

beautiful os nancy...very nice...

Thanks dearo..😊😊

Originally posted by: Quboolhai1234

Awesome os ...😊👏

Write many more stories 😃

Thank u..I am really touched..😛😛

Originally posted by: shivalkar

👏thanks princess dont have little hopes from serial do keep on writing such OS 👏👏👏👏love u for this

Aww darling..tum ne rula diya yar..😭😭 thanks a lot😛😛 love u too..

Originally posted by: lashy

I wish something like this would be shown in the serial too..

it was a lovely read and enjoyed that it was in English...

I liked the way you've kept it all so crisp and yet explained everything (events and emotions) that transpired within the last week...

Very well done!

Once again, I hope something like this is shown in the serial...

Only a small point - if you're interested - (please don't take offence)

She retorted - WHy the hell have you come in my chamber..How can you?? This is not Amer right!! Go from here..

I know in the serial there are many discrepancies in her characterization..however, as a Queen - this form of language might not befit one of royal blood - esp one of her status...especially when she's addressing the Shehenshah..

She can show her anger with her eyes, with her expressions, even her actions to an extent - but, her words would generally be more formal..😳

Just that small point I wanted to make...

Lovely lovely lovely lovely OS once again! 🤗

Aww !! Thank You Lashy.. Yes..Even I realised that part after re-reading.. But I just wrote it so quickly. Couldn't mend it up..Thanks for amazing review.. I am glad you liked it !!😊😊😊 And ofcourse, I will never take criticism negatively.. I love my readers..n love u too..😛😛

Originally posted by: 1234philli23

AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dat was wonderful😊😊

loved it...👏👏

i m really impressed d way u wrote especially d flashback part...👏👏

i hope cv learns sumthing frm u😆😆

perfect song i wud sae for dis Os...😳😳

lub u nannu...muahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗🤗🤗

Aye haye...love u too darling..😛😛😛

I hope I managed to thank all...But I missed some.. Anyways, I want to thank all of you for such overwhelming response..Love u all😭😭😭😭 I am much happy..😊😊😊😊