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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Aanchal my darling my love I am so sorry for the late review!!!🤗😭😭😭
I was studying but when I saw that you had updated I was so happy!! I loved the engagement and Humayun and Bharmal's friendship touches my heart more and more with each of your updates❤️
My favourite part was the engagement and the nteraction between Jalal and baby Jodha...
jodha and jalal were both sitting on their mothers laps,where jalal was quiet and listening very seriously to what the pandit ji was saying jodha on the other had was trying her level best to get out of her mother lap and go to hamida's...she wanted to play with jalal...mainavati was having a hard time controlling her daughter,she tried everything but when jodha would still not sit still she handed jodha over to hamida,jodha instantly quieted and started palying with jalal's fingers,sometimes puting them in her mouth,sometimes biting them,she was very fasinated with jalal's sherwani and wanted to pull the buttons on it,but jalal was trying to sit still...when he did not comply jodha let out a ear piercing scream and started crying,jalal instantly bend down to her and caught her hands in his and kissed her little fingers,this got jodha's attention and she started giggling...panditji had by now completed all the rituals now giving the gifts was left...
It was to0o0o0o0 cute!!! I love how they play with each other and I just wanna squish them!!😆😆😆
All-in-all... A beautiful update from one of the best writers ever!! My inspiration🤗 Please continue soon😛😛😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Az3003

Aanchal my darling my love I am so sorry for the late review!!!😭

I was studying but when I saw that you had updated I was so happy!! I loved the engagement and Humayun and Bharmal's friendship touches my heart more and more with each of your updates❤️
My favourite part was the engagement and the nteraction between Jalal and baby Jodha...
jodha and jalal were both sitting on their mothers laps,where jalal was quiet and listening very seriously to what the pandit ji was saying jodha on the other had was trying her level best to get out of her mother lap and go to hamida's...she wanted to play with jalal...mainavati was having a hard time controlling her daughter,she tried everything but when jodha would still not sit still she handed jodha over to hamida,jodha instantly quieted and started palying with jalal's fingers,sometimes puting them in her mouth,sometimes biting them,she was very fasinated with jalal's sherwani and wanted to pull the buttons on it,but jalal was trying to sit still...when he did not comply jodha let out a ear piercing scream and started crying,jalal instantly bend down to her and caught her hands in his and kissed her little fingers,this got jodha's attention and she started giggling...panditji had by now completed all the rituals now giving the gifts was left...
It was to0o0o0o0 cute!!! I love how they play with each other and I just wanna squish them!!😆😆😆
All-in-all... A beautiful update from one of the best writers ever!! My inspiration🤗 Please continue soon😛😛😛


azra sweety its not an engagement ,its a roka ceremony which is basically done before the engagement,like before the official announcement made for the couple,the familes accept the boy and the girl officially for each other...gifts are given to teh bride and groom along with the family,stating that now stating that now the boy and girl are officially a couple.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Oh thanks for clearing that up😆😆😆 Sorry... Still fantastic though🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
i love this story! Did Jodha and Jala get married a few days after she was born? it sounds like they got married a year or two after. please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
this is so cuuute and adorbale- love little jodha and jalal. I loved humayun and rb's friendship. I just hope jodha gives heir to jalal so he does not get married to someone else.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
loved it! i just read all the 5 part in one go
Jodha and Jalal are such cuties
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iheartpancakes

i love this story! Did Jodha and Jala get married a few days after she was born? it sounds like they got married a year or two after. please update soon


jodha and jalal had a roka done a few days after she was born...and no they r not married yet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 6(a)
hamida and mainavati were sitting on the terrace with jodha sleeping in a cot by their side...the sun was not as harsh as most mornings,a gentle breeze was flowing bringing in the summery fragrance of flowers...jodha had been fed and promptly put to sleep...raja bharmal and shehenshah humayun had gone out of the palace for sporting activities and had taken jalal with them...bharmal's family were consciously avoiding hamida,though they had grudgingly accepted this mughal-rajvanshi relation ,yet they still had not been able to digest it,every time they would see hamida it would become a forced obligation on their part to treat her with respect as a would be relative of their family...they had seen hamida's friendship with mainavati and could make out that hamida was a good person by heart ,but nonetheless she was a mughal,the enemity could not be forgotten esp after bharmal's decision ,this was a forced relation for them and they had every intention of making all efforts to not go through with it...

BHARMAL'S FAMILY-"BHARMAL CAHE JO BHI KAHE,HUM YEH RISHTA KISSI KEEMAT PAR NAHI MANENGE...USS HUMAYUN KA KYA BHAROSA,AAJ BOL DIYA KI JODHA APNA DHARAM NAHI BADLEGI,KAL KO KISSI DABAV MEIN AA KAR KAHIN USNE APNA VADA TOD DIYA TOH?

CAHE KUCH BHI HO JAYE,HUM YEH SHAADI NAHI HONEIN DENGE,DOSTI TAK TOH THEEK THA MAGAR AB YEH RISHTEDARI,SAB RAJVANSHI THUKENGE HUM PAR...HUM KISSI KO MOOH DIKHANE LAYAK NAHI RAHENGE...BHARMAL KI ZID KI VAJAH SE HUM KYUN BHUKTEIN...SARE RAJVANSHI HAMARE DUSHMAN BAN CHUKEIN HAIN,AGAR HUMEIN APNE RAJYA KO BACHANA HAI TOH HUMEIN KUCH KARNA HOGA...AUR WOH BHI JALD..ISSE PEHLE KE BHARMAL AUR HUMAYUN MAHAL VAPAS AA JAYEIN...

BHALE HI HUMEIN YEH KARNA AACHA NAHI LAG RAHA HAI PARANTU ISS MUSEEBAT SE BACHEN KA AB EK HI TAREEKA HAI HAMARE PASS..."

ON THE TERRACE...
HB-maina,hum bahut khush hain,kal hamare bacchon ka rishta pakka ho gaya,hamara rishta aur bhi gehra ho gaya...ab bas yeh jaldi se bade ho jayein...humein toh bas intezaar hai ki kab inki shaadi hogi aur kan jodha hamare ghar aayengi.

MN-"haan hamida,hum bhi bahut prasann hain paramtu na jane kyun aaj ek ajeeb sa darr lag raha hai...aaisa prateet ho raha hai ki kuch hone wala hai...hum kuch theek nahi lag raha hamida...bas hamare bacche theek rahein,kali maa se yehi prarthna hai hamari."

HB-"kuch nahi hoga maina,kyun apna mann dkha rahi ho..allah hain hamare saath..woh sab theek karenge"

MN-"hum jantein hain hamida,parantu reh reh kar hamein shaguni bai ki bhavishyavani yaad aa rahi hai...yaad nahi unhone kahan tha ki jodha ko bahut si mushkilon ka samna karna padega...humein lagta hai ki kuch hone wala hai hamida,hum apne mann ko samjha hi nahi pa rahein hain"

before hamida could console her further a dasi comes and tells mainavati that her mother-in-law is calling her urgently...with bharmal being away the family needs to talk to mainavati about their decision ...

MN-"hamida humein jana hoga...aap jodha ko lekar hamare kaksh main ja kar aaram kar lijeye,aur kissi bhi cheez ki zaroorat hogi toh aap kissi dasi ko awaaz de dijeyega...hum thodi der main aate hain"

mainavati went to meet her MIL,and hamida took jodha in her arms and went towards mainavati's room..on the way jodha woke up a bit and began giggling looking at hamida..she started playing with hamidas necklaces..

HB-"aap uth gayi jodha beta...acchi neend aayi na hamari gudiya ko...arey aapko hamare haar ke saath khelna hai...theek hai..aap jaldi se bade ho jaeye phir toh hum aapko itne sundar zewar denge ki aap bilkul hoor pari lagengi..."

while talking to jodha,hamida did not realise that she was being followed...surprisingly there were no guards and no dasi's around either...hamida is still unaware about this and starts singing a lullaby for jodha to fall asleep again...

suddenly a hand comes around hamidas face and she starts struggling to get free...hamida is worried not only for herself but for jodha as well...she looks around but does not find even a single guard or dasi...the assailant makes hamida smell something and hamida looses her consciousness...the last thing on her mind is that jodha is now is the assailants hands and he is running away with her...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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o..ooo...now every one is going to turn against each other
i dont want them to fight with each other
suoerb upt
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you will get part 6(b) very soon.

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