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--Janvie-- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
OMG Anchal!! 😲 What a Twist in the Tale!! 😲 😲 😲 Jodha is kidnapped by Bharmal's own Family!!! 😡 🤢 I'm requesting you That Don't Bring a Track of Dushmani and Revenge between Bharmal and Humayun!! 🤢 I just hate such tracks in Movies and Serials where Marriage gets fixed in childhood then due to some problem or misunderstanding between parents They break their Kid's Marriages!!!!! 🤢 🤢 I just hate Such Tracks In Stories like HELL So I beg you to Take any other track but This one!!! 😭 😭 😭
But At the End of The Day,It's Your Story So You Have Every Right To Take It whichever way you want!! 😊 😳 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: --Janvie--

OMG Anchal!! 😲 What a Twist in the Tale!! 😲 😲 😲 Jodha is kidnapped by Bharmal's own Family!!! 😡 🤢 I'm requesting you That Don't Bring a Track of Dushmani and Revenge between Bharmal and Humayun!! 🤢 I just hate such tracks in Movies and Serials where Marriage gets fixed in childhood then due to some problem or misunderstanding between parents They break their Kid's Marriages!!!!! 🤢 🤢 I just hate Such Tracks In Stories like HELL So I beg you to Take any other track but This one!!! 😭 😭 😭
But At the End of The Day,It's Your Story So You Have Every Right To Take It whichever way you want!! 😊 😳 😳


hun i wont disappoint u,but i am still waiting for ur update..when do we get that.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Aanchal! What a twist! Plz no dushmaani track! I really love the seer Jalal and Jodha relationship. I trust u.. Thankx for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NICE...LOVELY UPDATE DEAR...
HB LOVES JODHA SO MUCH...
AND WHAT A TWIST... REALLY EXCITED...
bt plz na no hate n revenge track... humayu and bharmal friendship luks auwsome...
bt still u r a brilliant writer excited to know u way...

plz continue soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
thank u guys...i'll try to give the next part soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
what a twist
hope there is no dushmani wala track
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Aanchal Babes!! Great going👏👏👏 I love suspenses.. maza ayega..😛😛😛 Love you for this update.. Jaldi update karo...m dying to know what will happen..Btw..I love the way u write dialoguies...Simply Fab👏👏😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg- what are they going to do? i really hope Hum and RB don't turn enemies and more than that i reallly hope jodha does not get kidnapped and raised somehwere else and rb's family brainwashers her.
u're killing us with suspense. plzzz update soon. and pm me when u do. thx
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpat

omg- what are they going to do? i really hope Hum and RB don't turn enemies and more than that i reallly hope jodha does not get kidnapped and raised somehwere else and rb's family brainwashers her.

u're killing us with suspense. plzzz update soon. and pm me when u do. thx


wait and watch.it will be interesting.
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 6(b)
mainavti went to see her MIL in her room,there was no other family member present there.after greeting her mainavati sat down besides her,knowing that the decision taken by her husbnd had not gone down well with her family

MIL-"MAINAVATI,HUM JANTE HAIN KI AAP BHARMAL KE KHILAF NAHI JAYENGI,PARANTU USNE JO NIRNAY LIYA HAI,WOH GALAT HAI,YEH AAP BHI JANTI HAI."

MN-"MAASA AGAR HAMIDA AUR SHEHENSHAH HUMAYUN HAMARE DHARAM KE HOTE TOH BHI KYA AAP YEHI KEHTI."

MIL-"TAB TOH HUMEIN BHI KOI AAITRAAZ NAHI HOTA MAINAVATI,PARANTU AAISA NAHI HAI.WOH MUGHAL HAIN."

MN-"MATLAB AAP SIRF EK DHARAM KI VAJAH SE YEH VIVAH NAHI HONE DENA CAHTI,KYA AAPKO PATA HAI KI WOH LOG KITNA PYAAR KARTEIN HAIN JODHA SE,APNI PALKON PAR BAITHA KAR RAKHENGE JODHA KO..AUR AB TOH HUMAYUNBHAISA NE YEH VACHAN BHI DIYA HAI KI RAJKUMAR JALAL KI SHAADI SIRF JODHA SE HOGI..TAB BHI AAP..."

MIL-"TUM SAMAJH KYUN NAHI RAHI HO MAINAVATI,SAB RAJVANSHI HUM PAR THUKHEINGE..EK RAJPUT LADKI KI SHAADI EK MUGHAL SE,YEH NAHI HO SAKTA"

MN-"YEHI JODHA KI KISMAT HAI MAASA,AAP KYUN NAHI SAMAJH RAHI HAIN,ACCHA EK BAAT BATAEYE KYA AAP SHAGUNI BAI PAR VISHWAS KARTI HAIN"

MIL-"YEH KYA POOCH RAHI HO,UN PAR TOH HUM AAKH BAND KARKE VISHWAS KARTE HAI"

MN-"TOH BAS YEH SAMAJH LIJEYE MAASA KI YEH SAB UNKE HI KAHE MUTABIK HO RAHA HAI"

MIL-"TUM KEHNA KYA CAHTI HO,VISTAR SE HUMEIN SAB BATAO"

Mainavati told her MIL about shaguni bai's bhavishyavani,about how jodha and jalal are meant for each other,about how their destinies have brought them together,about how jodha and jalal will one day rule hindustan as the greatest king and queen there ever will be.

MIL-"YEH TUMNE HUMEIN PEHLE KYUN NAHI BATAYA MAINAVATI,HUMSE ITNA BADA PAAP HO GAYA HAI"

MN-"KOI BAAT NAHI MAASA ,AB TOH AAPKO PATA CHAL GAYA NA,AB HUM CAHENGE KI AAP SAB ISS RISHTE KO KHUSHI KHUSHI SWEEKAR KAR LEIN"

MIL-"TUM SAMAJH NAHI RAHI HO,,HUM WOH..."

before she could complete her sentence a dasi comes to inform mainavati that hamida is lying on the floor and is unconscious .

DASI-"ranisa aapki mitra mallika-e-hind behsh ho gayi hai,humne unhe yahan aate hue dekha hai,aap jaldi chaliye"

mainavati rushes to see hamida who had been shifted to her room...she rushes in to see hamida unconscious,and no jodha with her...

MN(loudly)-"MARI JODHA KAHAN HAI"

DASI-"HUMEIN NAHI PATA RANISA,JAB HUM YAHAN SE GUZAR RAHE THE TOH HUMNE MALLIKA-E-HIND KO BEHOSH DEKHA,PARANTU RAJKUMARISA UNKE SAATH NAHI THI"

MN(crying)-"HEY BHAGWAN,HAMARI BETI KAHAN HAI.JALDI SE SAINIKON KO AUR DUSRI DAASIYON KO PAIGAM BHEJO KI PURA MAHAL DHOONDEIN,HAMARI BETI HUMEIN JALD SE JALD VAPAS CAHIYE"

the dasi goes from there to convey this message to other dasis and sipahis...mainavati comes and sits near hamida,holding her hand and crying her heart out.

MN-"HAMIDA UTHO NA,AB TUM HI HUMEIN BATA SAKTI O ,KI HAMARI JODHA KAHAN HAIN...UTHO HAMIDA"

mainavati sprinkles some water on hamidas face to awaken her...hamida slowly opens her eyes and sees a crying mainavati in front of her..she gets up slowly and hugs mainavati and starts crying...

HB-"HUMEIN MAAF KARDO MAINA,HUM JODHA KO BACHHA NAHI SAKE"
mainavati breaks the hug,looks at hamida with worry and asks her what she means...

HB-"HUM JODHA KO AAP KE KAKSH MAIN LE JA RAHE THE,KI ACHANAK SE KISSI NE HAMARA MOOH BAND KAR DIYA,HUMNE BAHUT KOSHISH KI APNE AAP KO CHUDVANE KI MAGAR VAHAN HAMARI MADAD KE LIYE BHI KOI NAHI THA,AUR JODHA BHI HAMARE SAATH THI,TABHI USNE HUMEIN KUCH SUNGHAYA AUR HUM BEHOSH HO GAYE,AUR WOH JODHA KO LE GAYA MAINA,WOH JODHA KO LE GAYA"

part 6(c),coming soon...

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