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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Awesome update ...👏
Loved H n RB's frndship...

Nw eagerly waiting 4 Jodha's birth...😉

Do cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
ausome update...
totally different which is making it more interesting and increasing eagerness to know how it unfolds...
u r fantastic writer...
plz continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Oh my word Aanchal darling👏👏👏 This is amazing! This story is so unique and I'm just loving the friendship between Bharmal and Humayun! 😳I'm dying to see where this story will lead please keep up the excellent work!!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏👏👏👏👏Another brilliant piece by Aanchal!! keep writing!! Waiting eagerly!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome
loved it
totally different concept
eagerly waiting for next update

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey dear eagerly waiting for ur next update... Jaldi update karo na...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey!
awesome update's dear, jus loved it to the core
friendship between Bharmal and Humayun is really nice,
the cancept is different but it's beautiful
please do continue soon
eagerly waiting o read next part
& please pm me if possible
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
This is an excellent story Aanchal!! Please continue!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
part 2
mainavati was nearing her 9th month,she was told to take total bed rest...humayun had left for agra as he had some urgent work to attend to but hamida had decided to stay back with mainavati...hamida used to tak care of mainavati like she was her own sister..from taking care of her food ,to the amount of exercises she should do ,to how much rest is required,and even taking her out once in a while..

bharmal had to leave to a neighboring rajput state to settle some dispute but he was very much relieved that hamida was there with mainavati,not that his family was not there but the care that hamida gave mainavati none of his sisters or sister-in-laws could give her,bcoz mainavati was very very close to hamida...

it was during the time when bharmal and humayun both were away that one fine morning after returning from her prayers and finishing her breakfast that mainavati suddenly felt a sharp and sudden pain around her abdominal area...she was alone in her room bcoz hamida had gone for her morning prayers...she decided to take some rest ,thinking its still early for a full fledged labour and she dint want to disturb hamida in the middle of her prayers...she clutched her stomach ,walked to her bed and lied down...her inlaws had all gone to visit a nearby temple and were due to return in the afternoon...her vaidya had also gone out for 2 days after taking her permission,she was due to return today evening,but it looked like her baby had no intention of waiting for anyone...the moment mainavati lied down she felt another stab of pain in her abdomen ...she cried out and sat upright...tears fell from her eyes,one side she knew that her daughter would be in her arms soon and on the other she was terrifed to the core,with no inlaws,no vaidya and not even her husband to support her...she caught hold of the railings of her bed and got up to walk to the entrance of her room...not being able to bear the pain any longer she fell down on the floor...
MN-HAMIDAAA...

hamida had just completed her morning prayers and was about to go and eat her breakfast in mainavati's room when she heard her cries...she rushed to see mainavati sprawled on the floor and a pool of water collected near her feet,it dawned on her,her friend had gone into labour...

hamida without wasting one second called all the maids and helped mainavati onto the bed...mainavati was slowly progressing with her contraction but they were unbearable for her...she caught hold of hamidas hand and asked her to send a message to raja bharmal...
MN-hamida humein bahut darr lag raha hai,aapko chod ke hamare saath yahan koi nahi hai,na hamara parivaar ,na hamare pati,aur na hii vaidyaji...ab kaun hamare bacchi ko iss duniya main layega...

HB-aap chinta kyun kar rahi hain maina...humne bhaijaan ko bulava bhej diya hai aur inhe bhi,aur apke parivaar wale bhi aate honge,abhi toh aap sirf apni beti ke baare main sochein...isse apko bahut sukoon milega.

MN-yeh dard humse saha nahi ja raha...aur abhi toh iss dard ki shuruvaat hai...vaidyaji ne kaha tha ki woh humein jaribooti dengi...thoda dard kam hoga parantu ab toh...

HB-aap chinta man kijeye maina,hum abhi dekhtein hain ki vaidhyaji kahan tak poohchi hain...

hamida called the fastest messenger of ameer and asked him to go and find out about the vaidhyaji,she was suppose to reach today,if she was anywhere close by the messenger had orders to bring her to the palace on horseback asap.

hamida went back to mainavati.mainavati was by now in an even worse condition...with each contraction her condition was worsening...hamida decided to make her a concoction that her own mother-in-law had given her to help her with the pain when she was about to give birth to jalal..hamida rushed to the kitchen and started preparing the herbal medicine..in a few minutes she completed the concoction and rushed back to maina with the medicine..she helped mainavati slowly drink up the medicine which helped her to a large extent...mainavati could feel her pain subside to some an extent...it had become bearable for her ...her labour was progressing nicely and it would take sometime for the rajkumari to enter their lives...

it was evening already...hamida had recieved news of the impending arrival of raja bharmal and her own husband that very night . the vaidhya herself had fallen really sick and was unable to travel back to ameer...the vaidhya's assistants were there to help hamida but they were still too young to carry out a full fledged labour successfully on their own let alone trying to bring a royal baby into the world..

mainavati was in the 2nd stage of her labour,her contractions coming close,every few seconds...she was fully dilated and it was not possible to wait for the vaidhyaji any longer...hamida decided to help deliever mainavati's baby herself,unfortunately even her inlaws had been delayed in coming back home,it seemed like god wanted this delievery to occur in this unusual circumstance...

hamida called for somehot water and asked mainavati to try to get into a comfortable position..
HB-hum jante hain aapko bahut darr lag aaha hoga maina,magar ghabraiye mat,hum hain aapke saath,hum aapko kuch nahi hone denge...

MN-abhi tak yeh bhi nahi poohche,humein bilkul accha nahi lag raha hamida...

HB-hum hain na,hum par bharosa rakhiye maina.

MN-aap yahan hain issi baat ki toh tasalli hai humein,agar aap bhi nahi hoti toh pata nahi hum kya karte..

mainavati's contractions were coming close by,her cervix was fully dialated and hamida could see the head of the baby pressed against it.
HB-bas thoda dum lagao maina.thodi koshish karo.

mainavati was trying her level best...

MN-aaahhh...nahi ho raha hamida humse,bahut dard ho raha hai..

HB-yeh toh karna padega aapko maina,apni rajkumari ke bare main sochiye...jab woh aapke haaton main hogi,aapuski kilkari sunengi...thoda dum lagaeye mainavati...

the baby was halfway through now...mainavati was finding it hard to breath...the pain was killing her...she was almost unconscious...only thought of her baby barely keeping her awake.

HB-maina himamt mat haro,aap yeh kar sakti hain...thoda dard hoga magar dum lagaeye maina...ek aakhri baar...apni beti ke liye...

mainavati with all her might pushed as hard as she could ..
MN-AAAHHH.

hamida held out her hand and RAJKUMARI JODHA fell right into her hands...it was the exact moment when bharmal and humayun had also entered ameer..hamida took the scissors and cut of the placenta...she brought JODHA close to her,tears flooded her eyes...

HB-DEKHO MAINAVATI,AAPKI BETI ISS DUNIYA MAIN AA GAYI HAI...

she brought jodha close to mainavati and kept her next to her mother...mainavati could not hold back..she held jodha in her hands and cried her heart out...

MN-MAHRI BACCHI,MAHRI JODHA...she kissed jodha all over her face...
hamida then took jodha to be cleaned up and asked the assistants to help clean up mainavati also...after some time jodha was again placed next to her mother who just couldnt stop looking at her...

MN-mahri bacchi kitni sundar hai na hamida...iski ankhein toh dekho...hirni jaisi hain...

HB-haan maina,hamari beti vakai bahur khoobsurat hai...hamara jalal bahut khushkismat hai,bahut kam logon ko itni sundar begum milti hai...

just then the santri announced the arrival of raja bharmal and shehenshah humayun.mainavati and hamidas happiness knew no bounds...bharmal and humayun had coming rushing back after learning about mainavatis labour...both entered the room together...all the servants were dispersed ...humayun went straight to hamida but bharmal was rooted to the spot...there in his wifes hand was his little bundle of joy...bharmal moved slowly and came to mainavati...his eyes were clouded with unshed tears...he held out his hand and touched a small little finger...mainavati put jodha into his outstretched hands...bharmal couldnt say anything for a few minutes...he was looking at jodha with so much concentration as if examining each and every feature so that it would be etched into his memory forever...after some time...
RB-hum aapka kaise shukriyada karein mainavati,aapne humein hamari jeevan ka sabse anmol taufha de diya hai...

HUM-arey bhai ab aap dono humein hamari beti se kab milvaoge...mashaallah,bhabhi jaan hamari beti toh iss duniya ki sabse khoobsurat bacchi hain...bilkul aap par gayi hain.kyun hamida...

HB-haan,hum maina ko abhi yeh hi keh rahe thee...aur yeh bhi ki hamra jalal kitna khushnaseeb hai jo itni sundar begum hogi unki...

BABY JALAL-kaun hamari begum hogi ammijaan,yeh kaun hai aur aap log toh humse mile bhi nahi...kab se iss choti si bacchi se khel rahe hain...AAKHIR YEH HAI KAUN..

in the happiness of the new baby,humayun had also forgotten that he had gotten jalal with him ,bcoz jalal wanted to be with him ammijaan and humayun thought that it would be good if jalal met jodha also...

HUM-aaeye jalal,inse mileye..yeh aapki badi ammi aur bade abbu ki beti hain...rajkumari jodha...

jalal came forward and hugged his ammi..then he went over to his father and saw a cute little baby in his hand...the baby had huge hazel eyes and a peaches and cream complexion...a cute little dimple on her left cheek,a small straight nose and jet black hair on her head...

JALAL-abbajaan yeh kitni sundar hai na,kya hum inke saath khel saktein hain...

HUM-haan aap bilkul khel saktein hain jalal par jab yeh thodi badi ho jayein...

JALAL-abbajaan agra main bhi hamre saath koi nahi khelta,jab yeh badi ho jayengi na,tab hum inhe apne saath agra le jayeinge,yeh hamare saath khelengi,theek hai na.

HUM-bilkul beta,dekha bharmal hamara beta kitna samajhdaar hai,abhi se jaan gaya ki inhe apni zindagi kiske saath guzarni hai...ameen...

HB-sum-ameen.

humayun kept jodha on the bed next to mainavati and jalal climbed up and sat next to jodha.he took her hand in his and kissed it as if promising that he will never let go of her and her hand till eternity.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really nice update...
Do pm me nxt time n update soon

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