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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Yippee...
M so happy dat u r
Back wid another story...
I hve read ur two stories
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I find u an Amazing writer...😃

Cumin to d story...
Prologue is Awesome...👏
Loved it...

Storyline is nice...👍🏼
Do cont soon ...
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Do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Wow update soon...
Its really amazing
N plzzz pm me if u can
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
aanchal, i am so happy to c that u started another story. it seems like a great start. plzzz continue soon and pm me when u do update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 1
hamida and humayun were in the guest room at amer,relaxing ,after a filled with surprises,evening...though they had decided not to think about it much but shaguni bai's words kept ringing in their ears.
HB-aaj jo bhi hua shehenshah,humein toh kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai.
HUM-hum bhi soch main pad gaye hain hamida...aaj jo bhi humne suna kya woh kabhi ho bhi sakta hai...ek mughal aur ek rajput ke beech rishta?

in another part of the fort,in bharmal's and mainavati's room
RB-yeh shaguni bai ne kaisi bhavishyavani kar di hai mainavati...
MN-hum khud kuch samajh nahi pa rahein hain maharaj...ek taraf jahan humein khushi hai ki humein ek putri hogi wahi dusri aur hum yeh soch bhi nahi sakte ki iss bhavishyavani ko sunkar aapke parivaar walon ka kya haal hoga.
RB-tum sach keh rahi ho..hum kuch sochna padega.

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HB-shehenshah aapse ek baat poochein...kya agar yeh bhavishvani sach hoti hai toh aapka kya khyaal hoga iss baare main...
HUM-bharmal hamara sabse accha dost hai hamida,hamare bhaiyon se bhi badkar hai hamare liye woh...hum kuch bhi karke apni dosti ko koi bhi nuksaan nahi pohchana cahte...

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RB-mainavati agar yeh bhavishyavani sach hoti hai toh humein apne parivaar se zayda apne dost aur apne rishte ki chinta hai...hum usse dukh nahi pohchana cahte...

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HUM-bharmal par hum ek aanch bhi nahi aane denge hamida...

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RB-humayun ko hum koi bhi sharmindagi nahi poohchne denge...uski dosti hamare liye bahut mahatvpurn hai mainavati.

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RB & HUM-woh hamare parivaar se bhi badh kar hai hamare liye...

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MN &HB-toh agar unhe iss rishte se koi apati na ho toh?

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RB &HUM-toh woh humein hamari zindagi ki sabse badi khushi dega...jiske liye hum apni jaan de sakte hain agar woh ho hamara rishtedar ban jaye toh humse zadaya bhagyashali aur koi nahi hoga...hum abhi usse baat kareinge is baare main...

HUM &RB went looking for each other...both met each other on the same terrace...both had a look of utmost confusion,despair and a hint of nervousness...
RB-humayun hum aapse hi milne aa rahe the...i want to ask u smthing very important.

HUM-i think what u want to ask me is the same thing i want to discuss with u bharmal.

HUM &RB-shaguni bai.

RB-i want to know what is your reaction to what shaguni bai just predicted..

HUM-i dont know what to say bharmal,i just know that i never want to upset u or bhabhijaan in any way.

RB-even i cant bear to lose ur friendship humayun...magar hum aapse poochna cahte hain ki aapki kya rai hai...

HUM-aaisa itihaas main kabhi nahi hua hai bharmal ki ek rajput ke ghar se ek mughal ke yahan doli gayi ho...aur yeh bhi nahi hua hai ki ek mughal aur ek rajput ek dusre ke sabse acche dost hon.hum aapke parivar ko dukh nahi pohchana cahte ,MAGAR YEH BAAT BHI UTNI HI SACH HAI KI AGAR AAPKI BETI HAMARE GHAR AA JAYEGI TOH HUMSE ZAYADA KHUSH AUR KOI NAHI HOGA...AAP SIRF HAMARE DOST HI NAHI AAP HAMARE BHAI SE BHI BADH KAR HAIN...AAPNE HUMEIN SAMBHALA HAI,HUMEIN ISS LAYAK BANAYA KI ITNI BADI SULTANAT KO SAMBHAL SAKEIN...I WILL KEEP UR DAUGHTER AS MY OWN DAUGHTER,APNE BETE SE ZAYADA PYAAR KARENGE HUM USEE...only if u agree to this relation.

RB-u've taken the words right out of my mouth humayun...i would love it if my daughter becomes ur daughter too...i love jalal,he is more than a son to me,and when he officially becomes my son that day i will go and visit all the hindu teerath's...jab hamare sabse accha dost hamara rishtedaar ban jayega toh humse zayada khush is duniya main aur koi ho hi nahi sakta...

HUM-i dont want to hurt ur family bharmal,aur ek baar bhabhijaan se bhi pooch lena cahiye.

RB-hamare parivaar ki chinta tum mat karo humayun...aur rahi tumhari bhabhijaan ki baat toh woh toh uss din ka intezaar kar rahi hai jab hamari beti hogi aur uski aur jalal ki shaadi hogi...ab toh bas humein hamari beti ka intezaar hai...

both RB and HUM hug each other ,more than happy with this new found relationship...the two couples were again sitting on the terrace in the evening and talking abt what had happened a day before when shaguni bai had come...all were remembering what all she had said...
"MAHARANI MAINAVATI AAPKI BETI AUR HAMIDA BETI AAPKA BETA EK DUSRE KE LIYE HI BANE HAIN...KYUNKI AAPKA BETA IS SADI KA SABSE BADA RAJA KEHLAYEGA AUR MAHARANI AAPKI BETI KI BHAGYA MAIN YEH LIKHA HAI KI WOH JISSE SHAADI KAREGI WOH ISS SADI KA SABSE BADA RAJA HOGA...MAGAR...IN DONON KO BAHUT SI MUSHKILON KA SAMNA KARNA PADEGA,SABSE ZAYADA AAPKI BETI KO MAHARANI...NAHI MAHARANI,CHINTA MAT KARIYE,DEVI MAA PAR BHAROSA RAKHIYE...JAB JAB JO JO HONA HAI,TAB TAB WOH WOH HOTA HAI...USSE AAP BADAL NAHI SAKTI,AUR NA HI MAIN,ABHI TOH AAP APNI BETI KI AANE KI TAYAARI KARIYE...AUR HAAN USKA NAAM BHI SUN LIJEYE...

AAPKI BETI KA NAAM HOGA RAJKUMARI JODHA...JALLALUDIN KI JODHA"

HUM-JODHA,kitna pyaara naam hai na hamida.

HB-ji shehenshah,ab toh bas humein apni beti ka intezaar hai...kab woh aayegi kab hum usse god main uthayenge...

RB-humayun hum aapse kuch khaas baat karna cahte hain...hum cahte hain ki dono bachhon ki shaadi unke bade hone par hi ho...hum jante hain shayad aapke parivaar ko isse apati ho magar humein aaisa lagta hai ki ladka ladki ki shaadi tabhi karni cahiye jab woh isse nibhane ke kabil hon...jab tak unhe iska sahi aarth hi na pata ho toh woh itne khoobsurat rishte ko kaise nibhayange...

HUM-aapne sahi kaha bharmal,hum bhi yahi cahte hain..

RB-aapke yahan 1 se zayada shaadi hoti hai,hamare yahan bhi,humein isse koi aapati nahi hogi agar aap jalal ki shaadi kahin aur bhi karna cahein...aapko pura haq hai.

HUM-nahi bharmal,jaise humein sirf apni hamaida ko apnaya hai,kyunki hum unse behad mohabbat karte hain...hum aapse vada karte hain ki HAMARA BETA JALAL BHI SIRF JODHA KA HI PATI HOGA.hamare parivaar main jo bhi chalta ho hamari bahu sirf aur sirf jodha hi banegi...yeh SHEHENSHAH HUMAYUN KA RAJA BHARMAL ko vada hai.

Edited by aanchal_c - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Wow nice FF ... I juz love it ... Am excited to read more of it ... 👏
Keep up the good work and if possible plz PM me when u update ...Thanks ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Loving this story. Keep on updating!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: VincyAnne

Wow nice FF ... I juz love it ... Am excited to read more of it ... 👏

Keep up the good work and if possible plz PM me when u update ...Thanks ...


sweetie i dont pm anyone bcoz it becomes too hectic for me,i keep editing the title whenever i update,so check that out..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
awesome
loved it
totally different concept
eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome
loved it
totally different concept
eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Hayye kab ayega update! Can't wait

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