OS: A Rhythm Unknown - Page 3

Originally posted by: -ForeverYours-

"My needs do not require much effort on your part, Jodha Begam," (This one I admit, it was supposed to throw the reader's mind into the gutter for the way it was worded)

see, I am not alone in this. you ARE to blame afterall.

"That shall only be decided after you disclose them," (DID NOT MEAN THAT. THAT-THAT-THINGY-MAJIG! IT WAS ACTUALLY HER ASKING HIM TO DISCLOSE HIS NEED OF THEM COEXISTING PEACEFULLY. OMG AAGH WHAT HAVE I DONE! ALL CAPS NECESSARY I AM FEELING SO SHARAM-FUL.)

🤣 and I am feeling the overpowering to shame you even more. how does it feel to be here right now girl? enjoy the moment, it will be one to remember, your christening into the glorious world of innocent innuendo.

Originally posted by: -ForeverYours-

AND RUQUAIYA WAS WATCHING THE WHOLE TIME. OMG. I SWEAR THAT WAS NOT WHAT WAS HAPPENING INSIDE THE CHAMBER. GOD SLKDJF WHAT DO I DO NOW!

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

hey, some people like to watch. to each her own.

okay, now I am getting strange looks. I better head out before I get the rotten tomatoes.😆

Originally posted by: PrittB

I have not yet read the comments yet as you asked, but I do plan on getting to that!

My first thought after reading the first few lines: Gosh I've missed Shwetu's writing so much.

After reading the entire OS: Your writing has not changed one bit and I love it. Now my thoughts on what I thought you meant to get across with the OS were basically the two of them getting comfortable with each other. Gaining each other's trust. And someone seemed to be watching? I'm not quite sure who the characters are since I don't watch the show and never watched the movie lol. But yeah! That's how I read it!

Now time to get to those comments you told me not to read.

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

I don't know what your talking about.

Do you see that? Yeah, can you polish it for me? My halo's taking offense to this implication.

Originally posted by: -ForeverYours-

JASSYPOO READ.

And Preeto, I missed you too. I love you woman but you tareef (compliment, I translated it because god help your Hindi, "Shwetu has a pet?" LOL Ok sorry back to the reply) me way too much. The other character is Jalal's other wife who is an interesting personality. And ugh I love you so much dude.