OS: A Rhythm Unknown

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A Rhythm Unknown
The Shehensha-e-Hindustan made his way to her kaksh.

Her hair was in the middle of being unbraided when she found his eyes on the mirror.

"Salam alaykum," he greeted.

"Namaste," she folded her hands, welcoming the Shehensha through the mirror.

Pausing all activity, she turned around to grace him with the sight of her tired eyes.

"I was wishing to speak with you Jodha Begam,"

"Yes go ahead,"

He cleared his throat, looking around. It took her more than a second to understand what he meant, after all she was new to any sort of mutual understanding between them.

"Ekaanth," and the maids immediately dispersed.

Before he could speak, she stood up, her sleep deprived form making its way to every door of her kaksh, sealing their privacy.

In that moment, she announced the Shehensha's victory in yet another battle. The battle for her trust.

She sat opposite his cushioned seat, "So may I have the pleasure of knowing what brought the great Emperor of Hindustan to my chamber?" she didn't bother with her veil.

"A husband needed an excuse to meet with his begam? Forgive me Jodha Begam, I must be terribly ignorant for I was not aware of such a norm."

His sarcasm around her has gained confidence, more than what she would've imagined, after that incident with the snake.


She hadn't changed her notes, nor had he. They both simply began to comprehend to rhythm of the other. He wished to harmonize.

"So essentially you are here to waste time?"

"In a way,"

"With all due respect Shehensha-e-Hindustan, you have other Begams who would be much more willing in that matter,"

"I'm afraid we are discussing different matters then, my dear Begam," he pursed his lips in an attempt to hide his forming smile.

"I'm quite confident we are not. My suggestion was made taking into consideration the desperate need of rest this long yatra has left me in."

"My needs do not require much effort on your part, Jodha Begam,"

"That shall only be decided after you disclose them,"

With her granted permission he continued, "My need is to coexist, and you, my Begam will have to take the trouble to breathe...by choice."

"That is quite a favor you ask of me Shehensha," She hoped he caught the sarcasm in her voice.

"Indeed it is, I would be indebted if you could carry it out," he played along.

"If it's the Emperor-e-Hindustan's wish, so be it."

After a moment of silence, Jalal took the initiative to offer his leave. And in that very moment, she invited him onto Malika-e-Hindustan's bed, through the draped canopy onto the warmth of her Ajmeri sheets.

With the space of confusion and uncertainty between them, they faced the tip of the canopy where every draped curtain met.

A rhythm unknown to the world filled the room, it blended with the beat of her heart leading to the creation of a powerful, righteous duet.


They continued to converse till sleep took them over, and without a single touch, they began to coexist.


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I have been attached beyond repair.

-Shweta

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Extended Ending:

Ruquaiya Begam watched from a forgotten window.

Jodha had given existence to a part of him that was unheard of.

His face reflected a foreign state today. Foreign to even her. But he seemed to be at peace. Content.

So be it.

With as close as she'd allow herself to a smile, she continued on to her chamber.

***
I personally really liked Ruquaiya's character before it was turned typical and destroyed. I understand there might be people who do not enjoy Ruquaiya at all, and so I do not change what I wanted write for the sake of others, but I took the liberty give them an option to read it or not.
That'll be all,
-Shweta
Edited by -ForeverYours- - 11 years ago
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AMazing update! Really really nice.. Continue soon . Pm me if possible
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Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

AMazing update! Really really nice.. Continue soon . Pm me if possible

Thank you, but it's an OS. Only meant to have one part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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And so we welcome yet another powerfully mesmerizing writer to this forum...
Welcome my dear 🤗

I can see you portraying your wishes through the OS - of Ja-Jo's relationship being taken to the next step...

and kudos on your brief yet significant work of art!
Edited by lashy - 11 years ago
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Amazing...what a fine piece!!!! Loved it...❤️
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Amazing OS... a beautiful piece of work!!!
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I do like Ruquiya too and might I add, the sexual innuendo was a gem here.
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Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

I do like Ruquiya too and might I add, the sexual innuendo was a gem here.


Dear god have I added in a sexual innuendo without realizing it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -ForeverYours-


Dear god have I added in a sexual innuendo without realizing it.

girl, are you joking? you must be joking. it is SO OBVIOUS when they are flirting and the WAY they are flirting. do I really have to spell it out for you?

😆 don't do this to me please

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