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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

girl, are you joking? you must be joking. it is SO OBVIOUS when they are flirting and the WAY they are flirting. do I really have to spell it out for you?

😆 don't do this to me please

The way they were flirting? What? They were flirting?

Jassypoo it must be just you.

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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: lashy
And so we welcome yet another powerfully mesmerizing writer to this forum...
Welcome my dear 🤗

I can see you portraying your wishes through the OS - of Ja-Jo's relationship being taken to the next step...

and kudos on your brief yet significant work of art!

Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

And yes I would like to see Jodha-Akbar's relationship being formed slowly and steadily, which I think the show's doing beautifully at this point.

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: -ForeverYours-

The way they were flirting? What? They were flirting?

Jassypoo it must be just you.

No, it is not me. Read it again.

Fine! I'll be the bad guy here and tell you the MEANING of what you've written. He essentially asks her for a quickie with the classic "you don't have to do anything, just lay there". and she plays along just fine. it's not even subtle woman I don't know how you missed it.

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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

No, it is not me. Read it again.
Fine! I'll be the bad guy here and tell you the MEANING of what you've written. He essentially asks her for a quickie with the classic "you don't have to do anything, just lay there". and she plays along just fine. it's not even subtle woman I don't know how you missed it.

I don't know what your talking about.

Do you see that? Yeah, can you polish it for me? My halo's taking offense to this implication.

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: -ForeverYours-
No, it is not me. Read it again.
Fine! I'll be the bad guy here and tell you the MEANING of what you've written. He essentially asks her for a quickie with the classic "you don't have to do anything, just lay there". and she plays along just fine. it's not even subtle woman I don't know how you missed it.

I don't know what your talking about.

Do you see that? Yeah, can you polish it for me? My halo's taking offense to this implication.

HERE:

"My needs do not require much effort on your part, Jodha Begam,"

"That shall only be decided after you disclose them,"

Ring a bell? If you don't know what a quickie is, I am not saying. Ask Aunt Google, will ya?😳

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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

OMG. I just comprehended the meaning of:

He essentially asks her for a quickie with the classic "you don't have to do anything, just lay there".

asd.kjfaklsdfh GAH Jassypoo I'm calling Preeto to help me pull you out of the gutter. I'm no angel, but that was not at all what this story was about. But now I reread it and omg I can't read this story the same way. ddkjhafdkfh

Dead.

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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

I don't know what your talking about.

Do you see that? Yeah, can you polish it for me? My halo's taking offense to this implication.

HERE:

"My needs do not require much effort on your part, Jodha Begam,"

"That shall only be decided after you disclose them,"

Ring a bell? If you don't know what a quickie is, I am not saying. Ask Aunt Google, will ya?😳

"My needs do not require much effort on your part, Jodha Begam," (This one I admit, it was supposed to throw the reader's mind into the gutter for the way it was worded)

"That shall only be decided after you disclose them," (DID NOT MEAN THAT. THAT-THAT-THINGY-MAJIG! IT WAS ACTUALLY HER ASKING HIM TO DISCLOSE HIS NEED OF THEM COEXISTING PEACEFULLY. OMG AAGH WHAT HAVE I DONE! ALL CAPS NECESSARY I AM FEELING SO SHARAM-FUL.)

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: -ForeverYours-
OMG. I just comprehended the meaning of:

He essentially asks her for a quickie with the classic "you don't have to do anything, just lay there".
asd.kjfaklsdfh GAH Jassypoo I'm calling Preeto to help me pull you out of the gutter. I'm no angel, but that was not at all what this story was about. But now I reread it and omg I can't read this story the same way. ddkjhafdkfh

Dead.

ROBL

i.e. rolling on the bed laughing literally, not exaggerating.

p.s. it is beautiful in the gutter, I just need some company hehe.

srsly? how was that not the first thing in your mind? whatever your original msg was, I totally missed it. I liked this OS because freaking awesome innuendo. what else is there?

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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

I am forever hiding my face in a brown paper bag.

Good bye world.

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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

ROBL
i.e. rolling on the bed laughing literally, not exaggerating.
p.s. it is beautiful in the gutter, I just need some company hehe.
srsly? how was that not the first thing in your mind? whatever your original msg was, I totally missed it. I liked this OS because freaking awesome innuendo. what else is there?

AND RUQUAIYA WAS WATCHING THE WHOLE TIME. OMG. I SWEAR THAT WAS NOT WHAT WAS HAPPENING INSIDE THE CHAMBER. GOD SLKDJF WHAT DO I DO NOW!