~*~ FF - AkDha in Jungle ~*~ Part 37 Updated(Pg 135)Thread 1 Closed - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

thanks..loved it...great job...well done...thanks for the sooo many updates in one day...can't wait for the next updateee

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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
seriously in love with ur ss...do continue soon and thanks for such lovely updates.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Beautiful, i am liking this so much. i can just imagine these two expressing their love for each other it will be epic.
Please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb...loved it...
pls pm me next tym...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Recap : Jodha listened patiently and she got emotional too. Jalal hugged Jodha with utmost love and care. He was lost in his repent.
Jodha first hesitated but then, she understood his feeling, hugged back him tighly.

Part 11 :

They hugged around for 5 minutes. Suddenly, Jodha realised what they were doing. She quickly broke the hug and was really shocked, at what had just happened.


Jalal also backed himself. He didnt speak anything.
Jodha said(now in angered tone) - Aap kya keh rahe hain,,Humein kuch samajh nahi aa raha! Bas hum apse itna jaanana chahte hain ki aapne aisa kyun kiya?
Aapne humare pran kyun bachaye.. Humne jab maut ko gale lagane ka faisla kar liya tha aur sher ka ghav khushi khushi gale laga liya tha to phir KYUNNN??
Kyun aap humari chinta kar rahe hain jab hum dono ek dusre se nafrat karte hain? Kyun aapne hamein gale lagaya??

SHe almost cried now.

Jalal was getting angrier by each word she spoke. He finally jerked her to stop her from saying anything further.


Now he roared - Kya kaha aapne? Kyun humne apke pran bachaye? Kyun humein apki chinta hai? Yahi kaha na apne..To phir hum aapse poochna chahte hain ki kyun Aap humare aur Sher ke beech mein aayin jabki vo hum par lapka tha? Kyun Khud zakhmi hote huye bhi Aapne humare ghav bhare aur humari raksha ki? Bataiye na..Kyun?

Jodha was speechless!! SHe couldn't answer.

She said - Wo..Wo Shahenshah..Wo humne isiliye kiya kyonki wo humara Patni dharm tha. Humne sirf apne kartavya ka palan kiya AUR KUCH NAHI!!!

Now, Jalal grinned!! Instead of getting angrier..He smiled with little trick. He said- Hum samajh gaye Begum Jodha! Hum man gaye ki aap apne Patni Dharm ki kitni pakki hain.

He looked at her with utter lust. She could make out at what he was upto. Jalal said- To phir kya hum apko apke dusre patni dharm ki yaad dilwa sakte hain? He grinned.

Jodha was shocked. She knew what Jalal meant. She was trapped. Jalal came near her, ran his one hand around her bare upper back(still careful of her injury) and pulled her closer.

Jodha was like what!! SHe said - Ye aap kya kar rahe hain? CHodiye Humein! Humne kaha chodiye and Jerked him back so forcefully that her injury was paining more.

She moaned with a cry. Jalal was shocked. He said(with very caring and fearful tone) - Kya aap thik hain Jodha? Hum to bas mazak kar rahe the. Humein phir se muaff kar dijiye. Kya aap thik hain?

Jodha burst out on him : Ye apki kaisi aadat hai? Dukh bhi khud dete hain aur phir Mafi bhi khud mangte hain!!! HAAN HAAN hum thik hain. Kyun aap abhi tak humare kaksh mein hain?
Waise bhi hum hain ki kya? Hamesha hum ne aapko dukh pahuchaya hain na..To kyun yahan hain aap? Jaiye na..Jaiye apni kareebi Begumo ke pas. Ye mat bhuliye ki bhale hi humne ek doosre ki Jaan
bachai ho,,lekin humare beech sab kuch waisa hi rahega. Samjhe aap!

Jalal was totally angry by now. He roared again : JODHAA!! Thik hai. Aap yahi chahti haina ke hum chale jaayen. Hum abhi isi waqt yahan se jaa rahe hain. Lekin yad rakhiye ga, Aap humare liye MAMULI NAHIN hain..

As he moved out of room with anger..He turned back just to have a last look at Jodha..
He was Flabbergasted to see Jodha fainting again. She was about to fall back on bed .. He quickly ran and held her.. HE shouted(with fear) : JODHAA!!!

He made her lay down carefully! He quickly ordered the doctors to come. They were surpised at being called in midnight!! They examined her and said :
There is no reason to worry Shahenshah! She is alright! It is just her weakness that she fainted again.

They also said : It also seems that She is very much stressed. Her health is really low. It seems as if she is not eating properly.
Looks like she is so much mentally stressed and upset!! She really needs care now.

Jalal thanked them again and thought deeply. He understood why Jodha had so much anger towards him. It was because he had never given her importance.
He had always treated her roughly. He had always made her feel low. He always made everyone believe that She was nothing to him.
He never trusted her although she was ALWAYS right!!

One tear rolled down his eyes. He was disgusted with himself. He determined there itself. He knew what he had to do next morning.

Precap : Night not yet over!!

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GuysS I am so happy with your comments and appreciation!! Trust me,,Next part going to be super awesome and further parts going to be BLASTINGG for you..Can I please expect 30 likes?Plzz..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
hey!😊
read all the parts in one go,
believe me i just loved it to the core
u have written it beautifully dear👍🏼
thank u for giving an amazing story of akdha ⭐️
i hope jodha recovers soon
& express there feelings to each other
if possible please do pm me😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Hey,read all the parts at one go...they are awesome!!!loved all the parts..👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
really nice update. It was nice to c how they kind of told each other what was bothering thema nd how jalal turned tables on her and realized he was rough on her and never gave importance to her. waiting foe next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Ahh good job this is such a romantic story but they are still like there characters too. Hope u update really really soon and add me to ur PM list PLSS. But seriously continue on this track I love how u showed them caring for each other and not taking 5 updates just to show that Jodha really cares for him. I hope she doesn't spazz on him too much in the next part and she feels for him more XD
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
WOwww... Ausme... Lovely

Plz update soon

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