SS: Ek Ankahi Dastaan - An Untold Story - (Updated) Part 4 - Pg 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Recap:

But what will he do without her?

This one question changed the whole world for him. Why does he need her? Why is she so important him? Why has he never felt like this for Ruqaiya or anyone for that matter? Had his heart started beating for someone? Was that someone...Jodha?

Part 2 - Ek naya ehsaas

Jodha...her name itself was making him jittery. Why does he feel like smiling...every time he remembers his Amer ki shehzadi'. She had different aura to her...unlike any of his begums...or even anyone he has ever set his eyes on. She challenged him at his every step, questioning his every move and never letting him win any of their challenges. Jalal smiled as he remembered his talwar baazi with his Jodha begum.

Days passed and his realization of what Jodha meant to him deepened. He realized what his heart beats felt like. It was like a child learning to walk...Jalal was learning the new found feeling of being in love. He was smiling, he couldn't hold his excitement of being in love, in love to no one but Jodha.

Not being able to contain his excitement, he went straight to his Ammijaan. His Ammi was shocked to see Jalal rushing to her and putting his head in her lap and asking her to allow him to be there. Moments passed and his mother asked him the matter, and Jalal, told her that he was in love...

On hearing this his mother couldn't hold her happiness...her only wish was that the girl should be none other than Jodha. When she asked him, who has Jalal fallen for...he replied...

To the one who is no longer here...but I feel her presence everywhere

To the one who is no longer visible...but I see her day and night...beside me..walking, talking, sleeping...

To the one who isn't here to fight with me...but I can hear her voice everywhere...

Ammijaan, I can feel here in every corner of this mahal...

Without much guesswork, his mother figured out that it's none other than her beloved Jodha. She couldn't hold her excitement and made a silent prayer to thank God for this miracle. She quickly asked Jalal, to make arrangements for her to go Ajmer Sharif and she will only return back once Jodha is back in Agra...back in the mahal.

Jalal...though disturbed, assured his mother that she did not have to do this to get her back. He will get her back. But his mother remained adamant that a promise made to God should never be broken.

Now I will only return to Agra once Jodha is back.

Jalal was happy to hear that his mother would go to such extent for Jodha. But he was unsure of what extent he would have to go to get Jodha back. Will she come back with him?

Meanwhile in Amer...

Jodha was home but not feeling like she was home...somehow...somewhere she was missing Agra...wait what..how can that be...that's not my home..but little did she know home is where the heart is...

Days passed and Jodha tried to be part of her own family. She would help out every now and then...but couldn't focus on one task. She would sit in front of her Kanhaji for hours...replaying what happened to her in Agra. The hurt, pain and agony and most importantly the feeling of not being trusted by the one who should be her everything...

But since when did Jalal mean everything to her...Jodha quickly assured herself that she should start to distract herself as she is loosing it...Jalal = grinhaa

It was not long before that Jodha got preoccupied with the wedding celebrations of her sister Sukanya..this time not to Ratansingh but to another Raja of a small state.

It was during the preparations that Jodha got the news that Jalal is coming to Amer...but for what? For the wedding?

So thinks Jodha...but what do you think...alright everyone I am calling it a night with this one...your comments really motivated me to put up this part...thank you soo much!

Thank you and keep commenting!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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is it SS or r u writing future story. very interesting. continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice ss dear.
Plz pm me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update. finally jalal realised that it was love and thought to get back jodha. it is a good sign that jodha is also missing him, hope soon she will also realise her love and return to agra
update the next part soon and please pm me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great start dear
looking forward to this story...
do continue soon
take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice work...please do update...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Awesome Update yaar!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ Really loved it alot.❤️
You penned down Jalal's feelings and emotions so beautifully!! 😳 I just loved it.❤️
So Jalal doep realize He loves Jodha and going to get her back. 😛 The lines He said to Hamida about the girl He fallen in love with was so so Beautiful and Amazing!! ⭐️
Here Jodha also is missing Jalal!! 😲 😉 😆
Pls Cont Soon. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely start loved both the parts, pls do cont soon
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wow- i must admit this is a really amazing ss for a novice writer like u. I can't believe this is ur first ss. plzzz me when you update. thx
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Nice one please om me if possible

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