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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you for the update- can't wait for next one0 excited to see what's going to happen
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it update soon waiting for it n dont take so much of time its hard to wait now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ausome update..

Hey plzzz continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part... PLz update fast asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ah... please continue soon..
i'm eagerly waiting..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the story, please continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 13
jalal(smirks)-har,humein harane wala aaj tak paida nahi hua hai shehzade...aapko kya lagta hai hum itne kamzoor hain ki itni si takleef par haar man jayenge,lagta hai aapko dikhana hi padega shehenshah-e-hind kaun hain aur kya kar saktein hain...

abdul arranges water for him and helps him wash off his eyes...
abdul-shehenshah humne khud dekha hai kis tarah iss shehzade ne baimani ki hai...
jalal-hum jante hain abdul,magar saboot nahi hai hamare pass,magar ek aaisi cheez hai jisse yeh shenzade aaj ke baad zindagi bhar shehenshah-e-hind ke naam se bhi ghabraega...
abdul-woh kya hai shehenshah.
jalal-HAMARI SHAMSHEER..

abdul and jalal went back to the venue of the duel...even after repeatedly washing his eyes jalal could still feel a sting in his eyes...he knew that it would be impossible for him to keep his eyes open and alert for long periods ...jalal knew what he had to do...
jalal-abdul hamre liye ek kapade ka bandobast kiya jaye...
abdul-ji shehenshah.
abdul arrives with the cloth and hands it over to jalal...all present there are busy thinking about what will jalal do with a piece of cloth now...jalal ties the cloth around his eyes,he knew that if his eyes open even a bit they will distract him with the stinging sensation still there...

ranveer(in his mind)-humein toh pata tha yeh jalal pagal hai...bina dekhe humse ladne ki tayari kar raha hai...chalo acchi baat hai,ab humein jodha ko pane se koi nahi rok sakta...

only abdul has a smirk on his face...rb went to abdul...
rb-yeh shehenshah kya kar rahe hain,bina dekhe kaise lad saktein hain...aapni haar ka khud bandobast kar rahe hain...
abdul-chinta mat kijeye maharaj,yeh hamare shehenshah ka ek aur hunur hai,aap sab ko jald pata chal jayega.

when jalal was a small kid bairam khan had made it a point to instill in him the importance of both the eyesight and the hearing power in him...according to bairam khan a king should not only be able to see what is happening in front of him,but his listening ability will also help him to know what is happening behind his back...till now jalal had practiced this art on his soldiers,today was the day of practicing it on his enemy...

jalal-vahan kyun khade ho shehzade,kya muqabala shuru nahi karna...

ranveer and jalal were once again standing face to face,the only diff this time being that jalal's eyes were covered with a cloth,enhancing his hearing abilities...
ranveer aimes at jalal's neck,but to his dismay jalal again stopped his sword mid way itself...for a second ranveer was flabbergasted...how the hell did jalal do this...he thought may be jalal was just lucky,but luck would not favor him all the time...

ranveer started all his aggressive tactics again ,but jalal not only stopped them but also managed to give ranveer his own back...there were small cuts all over ranveer's body...blood was ozing from
them...ranveer had not managed to touch jalal till now...jalal pushed ranveer's body with his foot and ranveer ended up falling flat on his back...try as he might ranveer had not the strength to get up again...jalal stood over ranveer and pointed his sword at him and said pretty loud and clear...
jalal-toh ab bataeye shehzadi,kaun jeeta aur kaun haara...
everyone present there started clapping...they had not in there life seen anyone fight with their eyes closed,had only heard of one person that too a rajput king,PRITHVI RAAJ CHAUHAN,do it...today when they saw the same valor and persona in the mughal ruler they were all speechless...rb,ra and abdul came rushing towards the duo...jalal offered his hand to ranveer to stand up,and removed the cloth covering his eyes...

rb-humein aap par garv hai jamai sa,aaisa sahas,itna aatmavishwaas toh humne aaj tak kissi main nahi dekha...kissi ko parajit karke ,phir bhi uski izzat bachana koi aapse seekhe...

ra-shehenshah-e-hind aaisi talwaarbazi humne zindagi main nahi dekhi hai...ab samajh main aaya ki aapse aaj tak koi jeet kyun nahi saka...aap bemisal hain...humein bahut khushi hogi agar aap hamari maitri swekar karenge...
this was a double insult for ranveer,his mamasa was offering his friendship to his biggest enemy...

jalal-humein bhi bahut khushi hogi maharaj agar hamari behen ke sasural wale hamare dost bane,aapse yeh dosti hum bhi nibhane main peeche nahi hatenge...

jalal then turned towards ranveer...jalal looks him up and down as if measuring his worth
jalal-shehzade ranveer,hum aapse kuch mangana nahi cahte,magar aapko kuch batane zaroor cahte hain...HUMEIN KAI LOG APNI JAAN SE BHI ZAYADA PYAAREIN HAIN,UNKI TARAF KOI AANKH BHI UTHA KAR DEKHE TOH HUM UNKI AANKHEIN PHOD DETE HAIN...AUR HAATH LAGANI KI KOSHISH KARE TOH WOH LOG APNE HAATON SE HAATH DHO BAITHE HAIN...HAMARE PARIVAAR PAR NAZAR RAKHNE WALE KO HUM KABHI MAAF NAHI KARTE SHEHZADE...BAKI AAP KHUD SAMAJHDAAR HAIN...and jalal,along with abdul and rb left from there...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice one .Waiting for jodha and jalal's encounter .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice one. eagerly waiting for jodha and jalal encounters.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update...
missed jodha...
hope to see them together...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update dear...kash jodha vaha hoti ye sab dekhne ke liye...continue soon

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