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Posted: 11 years ago

part 1

jalal could not believe that jodha would do something like this...she is the same woman who saved a child from drowning,the same woman who came to him so he would stop his mother from undertaking a tiring and dangerous to her health journey..walking barefoot to ajmer.

how could a woman like her be so insenssitive and kill an unborn child..jalal,even if a 100 people would say it,even if every proof was against her could not believe it ever...he needed to think and act,and for that he needed to be away from jodha for sometime..he went to jodha's chamber.

JALAL-i wish for you to go to ameer begum jodha.

JODHA-but why shehenshah,i have not commited any sin,even if at the moment i cant prove it,please give me some time,i will prove my innocence

JALAL-begum jodha,i will not repeat my order again and again.i wish for you to leave for ameer first thing tomorrow...i will send for you when i have everything sorted out.

jalal goes from there ,leaving jodha with a painful heart and a restless night.the next day jodha and all her maides but farewell to hamida begum and bakshi bano..both of them knew that a true and pious woman like jodha would never commit such a sin,but couldnt take her case to jalal.they knew jalal would not listen to them,only god,time and destiny can now prove jodha's innocence

after a 2 day journey jodha finally reached ameer...she could not hide such a huge thing from everyone so she told her parents everything...raja bharmal and mainavati were shocked...not only for ruqaiyya losing her baby,but also for jodha getting blamed for this...mainavati remembered shaguni bai's predictions about jodha having a bright future...now it was upto god and destiny.they had gotten jodha married to jalal,now they would sort out things for her.

in the meanwhile jalal, was busy conducting investigations,but discreetly...he only trusted abduland both had finally placed a spy in the harem as well as the courtroom...after a few days jalal had a meeting with them.

JALAL-did you get any information about who is behind this?

spy-ji shehenshah...pardon us for saying this but not all seems right with adham khan sir.

JALAL-what are you saying ?

spy-we have seen him getting in and out of the palace at odd hours sir.

JALAL-so what,he could have gone for some work also.

spy-right sir,but then why would he meet up with a hakim from chittor shehenshah.

JALAL-what are you saying...a hakim from chittor,isnt that the kingdom of maharana pratap.

spy-yes shehenshah,apparently the hakim is also betraying the king there...the king himself dosent know that he hakim met with adham khan..we have seen adham khan giving him a bag full of coins sir...and we have heard them talk also...adham khan was very happy and very drunk..he was saying now that he has been successful in finally killing the royal baby its him who will sit on the mughal throne...

JALAL could not believe his ears...his foster brother would go to such lenghts to get his kingdom..he was not only disgusted but his blood was boiling for adhams blood...MM soon learned of it and send adham a warning to not come to agra anymore now,since jalal has already got to know about his hand in killing the heir...MM comes to jalal and tells him that she has cut of all relations with adham...with her crocodile tears and false promises she convinces jalal that now adham will be punished for his crimes,jalal ,though angry at adham,gets convinced and allows MMA to stay at agra..he still cant believe that he did not trust jodha..he feels guilty and swears to make it upto jodha...

part 1 -pg 1

part 2- pg 2

part 3 -pg 3

part 4 -pg 5

part 5 -pg 7

part 6 -pg 9

part 7- pg 10

part 8- pg 12

part 9- pg 13

part 10-pg 14

part 11-pg 16

part 12-pg 18

part 13-pg 19

part 14-pg 21

part 15-pg 24

part 16-pg 25

part 17-pg 27

part 18-pg 29

part 19-pg 30

part 20-pg 31

part 21-pg 32

part 22-pg 34

part 23-pg 36

part 24-pg 37

part 25-pg 39

part 26-pg 40

part 27-pg 43

part 28-pg 45

part 29-pg 46

part 30-pg 48

epilogue-pg 49.

Edited by aanchal_c - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

plzzz continue- woud love to read further

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SShreShthA

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nicee...
Luvd it...
Continue plz...

Plzzz update next part soon

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aanchal_c

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Posted: 11 years ago

part 2-

raja bharmal's and mainavatis second daughters marriage preperations were going on in ameer.sukanya was very happy,she had finally found the prince she could spend her life with,he was not only a brave soldier but a caring and wonderful person as well,THE PRINCE OF AJABGARH,RANVIJAY...everyone was in a joyful mood at the palace,everyone but one person.

jodha would always be lost in the thoughts of agra,how was ruqaiya doing now.she wished that the accusations put on her would be proven false...she couldnt believe that jalal would even believe her to be capable of such a heinous act...she would cry through the night but did not want to accept that it was bcoz jalal had refused to believe her and send her to ameer without even giving her a chance to prove herself innocent..jodha would try to take part in all the marriage ceremonies with full vigor but her mother could make out the saddness behind her happy face.

in the meanwhile,jalal had already decided to go to ameerto get jodha back to agra with full respect.he went to ruqqaiya to inform her of the same..ruqaiyya knew that now jodha will be back bcoz not only was she proven innocent but also bcoz jalal seemed to become more restless in the past days,she guesses it was bcoz of jodha's absence ,but as usual she thought it was bcoz she wanted her here to irritate her and humilate her..

jalal undertook the 2 days journey at breathtaking speed and reached ameer way before time..he had already informed raja bharmal of his coming to take jodha,but had requested him to keep it from jodha..he wanted to see the look on her face when he finally met her after such a long time.

along with raja bharmal and the royal family of ameer,there was another person there who was very much interested in meeting jalal...he was the cousin brother of ranvijay,prince ranveer...to put it mildly ranveer had always been jealous of jalal...he had heard a lot about the shehshah of hind,his bravery,his valor and his handsome looks as well...he knew jalal always got what he wanted,infact jalal had also acquired someone who was wanted by ranveer, i.e rajkumari jodha..ever since he has seen jodha at one of the fairs of ameer he had been head over heels in love with her,but raja bharmal had fixed her alliance with raja suryabhan,and ranveer had been out of his state at that time...it was only after suryabhans death and jodhas marriage to jalal that he had come back and heard of his love becoming the wife of his enemy...he had sworn revenge on jalal that day,and to get jodha back at any cost..he had seen jodha in the palace and from her face could make out she was not happy,but he thought it was bcoz of her marriage to jalal..he knew he had to act fast if he wanted jodha...he had a plan up his sleeve..and he would execute it soon...

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SShreShthA

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Posted: 11 years ago

AUsome... Loved it...

Hey u hv named it as 2 shot but after reading I want to know whether u r going to continue it further...
If yes, it will b very nice...
In dat do update soon... I'll also want to know jodha reaction on seeing jalal nd what has ranveer... Wanting n eager to read further...

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aanchal_c

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Posted: 11 years ago

jodha was running around trying to complete the tasks assigned to her for sukanyas marriage,she was more than happy for sukanya,esp after the suryabhan fiasco...sukanya falling for suryabhan was an unfortunate coincidence,but jodha was glad that her sister had finally found happiness.she had been praying to her kanha ji everyday for her family and it seemed that he had finally heard her prayers.ranvijay was a very noble and kind hearted person and she was sure he would keep sukanya happy.in a way he reminded her of suryabhan.she had a lot of respect for ranvijay and his family,the only one she was wary of from their clan was ranvijay's cousin ranveer.jodha was not unfamiliar with ranveer's feelings for her,she had also seen him gazing at her numerous times but did not want to create a scene at her sisters wedding,so she kept quiet.her parents were already upset with her situation,she dint want to trouble them anymore.

mainavati had send jodha to her room to get a jewellery set specially ordered for sukanya.it was a beautiful diamond set with intricate work and embellished with rubies,emeralds and pearls..jodha knew sukanya would look like a million bucks in it..she was coming out of her mothers room when she collided with a strong and steel like chest.

ranveer had seen jodha going to the queens room,he followed her there.he saw jodha admiring the set ordered for sukanya and thought"my princess,this set will be nothing compared to what all i can place at your feet,i will bring the world for you and esp that jalal's head,u dont worry my princess".he saw jodha coming out of the room and purposely arranged himself in such a way that jodha would collide with him.

jodha was about to fall down when ranveer caught her waist and held her tightly against his chest..she had her eyes closed so she dint know in whose arms she was,but that is exactly how jalal found her..jalal was making his way to the queens room to meet jodha,his MIL had told him that she had send jodha to her room for some work,and jalal being jalal was so restless that he couldnt wait another minute so he rushed after her,but what he saw there left him feeling wounded..his jodha,his wife was in the arms of another man.he wanted to rip off that persons hands from her body,he finally saw the person who dared to lay his hands on his wife,he was prince ranveer..jalal felt his hands going to his shamsheer,but he controlled himself bcoz he dint want to create a scene at his inlaws place,but like hell would he allow his wife to be in somebody elses arms...

JALAL-sehzade ranveer,he shouted.

ranveer turned back and jodha also opened her eyes...and finally saw jalal...she was seeing him after so long,she was experiencing mixed emotions...she was happy,estatic yet angry at him.she remembered how he had send her back.

JALAL-agar aap apne hatoon aur apni zindagi ki salamati cahte hain sehzade toh issi waqt aap apne haath hamri begum se hata lenge.

ranveer had only heard of jalal's aggression ,and today for the first time he was seeing it,he immediately removed his hands from jodhas waist..it was then that jodha realised where she was and in whose arms..she moved away from ranveer and procedded to go to mainavati,while she was crossing jalal,he held her wrist and pulled her against his chest and hugged her tightly..jodha could not struggle bcoz she dint want an outsider to know about her tiff with jalal...jalal threw a look of pure unadultarated anger and jealousy towards ranveer ,which finally forced the prince to leave from there ,leaving jodha and jalal alone after a very long time...

guyz i wanted it to be a 2 shot,but looks like i will end up writing more..would love to see your comments.

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SShreShthA

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ausome... Luvd it vry much
Alwys like d jalal jealousy part...
Its very nice dat u r continuing...
Will b eagerly waiting for more updates
Continue soon

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aanchal_c

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SShreShthA
Ausome... Luvd it vry much
Alwys like d jalal jealousy part...
Its very nice dat u r continuing...
Will b eagerly waiting for more updates
Continue soon

will try to update in a few hours,abhi haath dukh gaya hai.