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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome...pls countinue and pls accept my req
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 10...
abdul was waiting to meet jalal,jalal was going to meet rb when abdul intercepted him and told him he had spotted something that would interest his shehenshah a lot,and asked his permission to show it to him...jalal was very curious to know what abdul was ona bout...he had known abdul since they were kids..in a way abdul was his closest friend,someone who could question him and abdul knew his questions would be taken in the right way...jalal might not say it,but he cared a great deal about abdul...abdul took jalal to a place where all the maharathis and yodhas practiced their art of sowrd fighting..prince ranvijay and ranveer were also there...jalal was observing them with casual indifference,when what abdul said caught his attention
abdul-shehzade ranveer kafi acchi talwarbazi kar lete hain na shehenshah...
jalal-kya tum humein yeh dikhane laye ho abdul...hum yahan apni begum ki behen ki shaadi main shamil hone aaye hain,yeh sab dekhne ka hamare pass waqt nahi hai...
abdul-hum mante hain aapko bahut kaam hai shehenshah,magar yahan par aapka dhyaan khichna bhi zaroori tha...
jalal-yahan yeh rajput talwaarbazi ka prashikshan kar rahein hai,jaise hum bhi roz subah kartein hain...issmein aaisa kya zaroori tha...
abdul-aapko aapke dushman ki kamzori aur shakti ka pata hona cahiye shehenshah...
jalal-yeh sukanya ke sasural wale hain,ranvijay unke hone wale shauhar hain...yahan hamara dushman kaun hai abdul...
abdul-wohi jiski shakti talwarbaazi aur kamzorii...
jalal-kamzoori kya?
abdul-chota mooh badi baat bol rahe hain shehenshah,hamein maaf karna...
jalal had a stern look on his face-hum intezaar kar rahe hain abdul...
abdul-aur jiski kamzoori aapki mughal sultanat ki begum jodha ho...
jalal-ABDUL(jalal shouts),(pause)...tum jante ho tumne abhi abhi kya farmaya hai...hamari begum hain jodha...tum unpar ilzaam laga rahe ho...
abdul-aap mera sar kalam kar dijeyega shehenshah agar maine aaisi gustakhi ki ho toh,magar main begum jodha ki baat nahi kar raha tha...yahan koi aur hai jo shehenshah ki begum ki caah(desire) rakhta hai...unhe pana cahta hai...
jalal is burning with rage now...how dare someone even think of his wife like that...that someone has a death wish and jalal would have the utmost pleasure of fulfilling this wish for him...
jalal-agar itna jante ho toh yeh bhi jante hoge ki woh gustakh hai kaun...hamari shamsheer woh naam sunne ko taras rahi hai...
abdul-woh gustakh aur koi nahi shehenshah magar rb ke hone wali samdhi ka bhanja hai,shehzade ranveer...
jalal with blood red eyes looks towards ranveer...


in the meanwhile jodha was in her room thinking of what had happened a few moments ago...jalal has kept her payal for all those months,and had even declared that he would not have let her gotten married to anyone...he would have done everything in his power to succeed ,and jodha knew he would have succeeded too,for she had seen him in action...as much as she hated him,she couldnt help but think that he was an excellent administrator,he had always been just with everyone,had always tried to give justice to the victims...had been a good king,she would have started to admire him ,had that miscarriage fiasco not happened and had she not seen his impulsive side and irrational behavior...she could sympathise with jalal the mourning father,but she held contempt for the shehenshah of hindustan...if rukaiya was his wife so was jodha...she should have been given a chance to explain everything to him ,to prove her innocense but he had denoed her that,just thought of her as a culprit,and al because of some eveidence that could have been corroupted at any given point in time...the way he had insulted her family,she would not be able to forget in this lifetime...her decision to not go back to agra,to never to return to jalal seemed like a correct one,just that agra has recently started to feel like home...she would miss bakshi bano and her ammijaan...these two were the only people in teh whole harem along with begum salima and the adorable rahim who were close to her...she would miss not having them in her life,and wished that she could meet them once...


rani mainavati was very concerned about her daughter jodha's future...her married life was in shames..and though jalal was the culprit mainavati could see repentance in his eyes...she knew that jalal had realised his mistake,and the biggest proof of it was the way he had been treating her and her husband...calling them his maa and walid was a very big thing,esp for the shehenshah of hindustan,who people believed to be a cruel and cold hearted man,infact on many occasions she had even heard people saying that he did not possess a heart...but the man befre her today was a changed man,a man who learned from his mistakes and wanted to make amends,and mainavati knew her jodha would be happy with jalal,if only she would give him a chance...
Edited by aanchal_c - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
thanks..loved it..i hope he doen't miss understand jodha and jodha accepts jalal
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
very nice update .. please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
very nice updates love the way ur story is progressing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update can't wait for next update please please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 11...
ranvijay and ranveer noticed jalal and adbul standing at a distance staring at them...ranvijay came to greet jalal,and very humble asked him what he is doing out here,under the scorching sun...
jalal-sehzade hum toh bas yahan aap sab ko talwarbazi karte hue dekhne aaye the.
in the meanwhile ranveer also joins them,and reluctantly greets jalal...jalal looks at him with a smirk..
jalal-humne suna tha ki rajput kafi acchi talwarbazi kar lete hain,aaj sehzade ranvijay ko dekh kar yeh yakin ho gaya hai ki aap HAMARI BEGUM ki behen ki acchi se hifast kar payenge,hum bahut khush hain...
ranvijay-aap ka dhanyavad kartein hain hum shehenshah,parantu hamare bhai ranveer bhi bahut acche talwaarbaaz hain...unhone kai pratiyogitaon main hissa le kar pratham puruskar bhi prapt kiya hai...
jalal-pratiyogita aur asal zindagi bahut alag hoti hai sehzade,vaisehi jaise talwarbazi ka pradarshan asal zindagi aur pratiyogita main karna bahut alag hota hai..
ranveer can make out jalal's insult and does not take kindly to it.
ranveer-humne suna hai ki shehenshah khud ek bahut acche talwarbaz hain...toh kyun na aaj aapke aur hamare beech ek muqabala ho jaye shehenshah,jo jeete ga woh haarne wale se kuch bhi mang sakta hai...
ranveer in his overconfidence thought that after defeating jalal,he would ask for jodha,but jalal was waiting for this oppourtunity itself...he would show this good for nothing pompous ass what the consequences were of even thinking about the begum of shehenshah-e-hind.


news of the impending duel spread like wild fire in both the groups...rb abd ra when informed rushed out to stop this stupidity...rb came directly to jalal...
rb-jawai sa yeh sab kya ho raha hai...
jalal-aap fikar mat kijeya maharaj,hum jante hain aap kyun itne besabar ho rahe hain...hum vada kartein hain hum aapka aur sukanya ka kissi bhi prakar aapmaan nahi hone denge...


ra went to ranveer...
ra-yeh tum kya karne ja rahe ho ranveer,tum kahin aapna mansik santulan toh nahi kho chuke ho...
ranveer-aap fikar mat kijeye mamasa,hum uss jalal ko parajit karke rb aur jodha ka badla lenge...usne jitan jodha ko sataya hai hum utni hi berahme se usse parajit karenge...aap bas dekhte jaeye...


moti bai came running to inform jodha of jalal's and ranveer's duel...
MB-jodha,aapko pata hai aaj shehenshah aur rajkumar ranveer ke beech talwarbazi ka muqabala hai...jodha is shocked
JODHA-kya...kyun...hum jante thee yeh shehenshah hamari behen ki shaadi main zaroor kuch gadbad karenge..
MB-nahi nahi jodha,yeh muqabala toh rajkumar ranveer ke kehne par ho raha hai...unhone hi shehenshah ko chunoti di hai..
jodha had herself fought with jalal once and hence she knew what a gifted swordsman he was,but she had never seen ranveer fight,she was sure that jalal would not lose,but she had a bad feeling about all this...she prayed to her kahna ji
KAHNA,PATA NAHI HUMEIN KYUN AAISA LAG RAHA HAI KI KUCH BURA HONE JA RAHA HAI,YAHAN HAMARI BEHEN KI SHAADI HAI AUR AB YEH SAB,HAMARE PARI AUR HAMARI BEHEN KE HONE WALE DEVAR KE BEECH TALWARBAZI,YEH SAHI NAHI HAI,HUMEIN DARR LAG RAHA HAI KAHNA...AAPNI KRIPA BAHAYE RAKHNA ..and she added in her heart(HAMARE PATI KI RAKSHA KARNA)...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yay- i am first to comment. I just finished reading part 9 and 10 and i was like when will she update next one and camet oc heck last page and i saw ur update- it made me really happy- Thanks. can you pm me, plz when u update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpat

yay- i am first to comment. I just finished reading part 9 and 10 and i was like when will she update next one and camet oc heck last page and i saw ur update- it made me really happy- Thanks. can you pm me, plz when u update!


i am so sorry yaar,i dont normally pm,bcoz i dont know how to do mass pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice updates. finally Abdul informed jalal about ranveer. it will be interesting to watch the talwar bazi between ranveer and jalal. definitely jalal wins I guess.

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