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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: marium-zamamii

May be u should restrict ur story to members only might help u


how am i suppose to do that

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Updates Aanchal!! 👏 👏 ⭐️Loved them(the last two)❤️ ❤️ 😳 !!
The way Jalal defeated that Prince was Just Amazing!! 👏 👏 ⭐️
Now waiting to know if Jodha is safe😳 and also eagerly waiting for an Akdha interaction/meeting!! 😳
Eagerly waiting for the next part. 😊 Pls Continue Soon. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow superb update
do pm me nxt time
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey your writting is verY good dear... But there r more mainavati..bharmal and jalal scenes... So plz add akdha scenes and jealous Jalal scenes...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 15
jalal along with a few of his soldiers took off after jodha...here ranveer had seen jodha when she had left the tent,and thought this is as good a time as ever to talk to her,atleast he will get her alone,he had no ides that jalal would set out to bring his begum back...

jodha reached the temple after 20 minutes and immediately set about doing her puja...she knew she dint have much time esp with jalal present there,if he got to know about jodha going out without proper protection he would blow his lid,and she had no intention of facing his volatile temper anytime soon esp in front of her family,who knows that the shehenshah would do,she thought...

ranveer followed jodha to the temple and waited for sometime for her to finish her puja...today he would tell her what all was there in his heart,his love for her,how attracted he was to her and how he had plans of her becoming his forever,and he was confident that after what jalal had put jodha thru ,she would more than willingly leave jalal and come to him...

jodha prayed to her kali maa to her hearts content...she prayed for sukanya,her family and to her surprise even for jalal.she thanked kaali maa that her husband not only won the competition but was hale and hearty as well...
jodha-hey kaali maa,aapko dhanyavad dene ke alava aur kuch nahi kar sakti hoon,apne hamre suhag ki raksha ki,usske liye aapka koti koti dhanyavad...bas ab sukanya ka vivah sakushal ho jaye,apase yehi prarthna hai hamari...

now jodha had left her sainiks a little further away from the temple,the temple had about 100 stairs,so jodha had taken her time covering them...jalal reached the temple and saw jodha's sainiks there...
jalal-tum sab yahan kya kar rahe ho,hamari begum kahan hain.
sainik-shehenshah,rajkumari wahan upar mandir main hain...unhone he humein yahan rukne ko kaha hai..

jalal was outraged,how could jodha be so careless that she had left her sainik so far off,esp after taking only two of them with her,and these sainiks,he would deal with them later...

jalal-toh uppar begum jodha,moti aur reva hain ...bas...
sainik-nahi shehenshah,humnein rajkumar ranveer jo bhi abhi upar jate hue dekha hai...parantu woh akele aaye hain...

jalal knew something was not right,no decent man would go to this length to stalk a woman...he had to get to jodha fast...jalal started taking two stairs at a time and started to cover the distance of teh temple...

jodha walked out with reva and moti after finishing her puja and was astonished to find rajkumar ranveer there...
jodha-arey rajkumar aap yahan,sab kushal toh hai na.
ranveer-nahi rajkumari ,sab kushal nahi hai...
jodha-kyun,kya hua hai rajkumar,rajkumar ranvijay toh theek hain na(she was feeling scared for sukanya)
ranveer-unhe kuch nahi hua hai rajkumari,hum aapse yahan kissi aur vishay main baat karne aaye hain...akele main...
jodha-aap jo kehna cahte hain in dono ke samne keh sakte hain,yeh hamri bechpan ki saheliyan hain.
ranveer-theek hai...toh suniye rajkumari..hum jantein hain ki aapka vivah uss jalal se zabardasti kiya gaya hai...aap usse pasand nahi karti,usse sirf bardasht kar rahi hain,apne parivaar ke liye...magar aapko darne ki zaroorat nahi hai rajkumar..hum hain aapke saath,hum aapko bachaeinge uss jallad se...
jodha was shocked,she couldnt believe her ears,and ranveer was damm happy that he had finally spoken to the princess of his dreams,what both of them failed to notice was that jalal was stanidng right there a few feet away from them,AND HE HAD HEARD EVERYTHING..
jalal was beyond angry now,he wanted to rip ranveer's head apart,how dare this man talk like this with his begum...does he have no sense of decorum and decency,after losing to him,how dare he take a cowards route and put this proposition in front of his begum...before jalal could announce his presence he heard jodha finally speak up...

jodha-aap jante bhi hain ki aap kya keh rahe hain rajkumar...aapko zara sa bhi andaaza hai iss baat ka ki nahi,ya aapki haar ki bazati ne aapko itna pagal kar diya hai ki aap yeh galati kar rahe hain...
now it was ranveer's turn to get shocked ,he thought jodha would be over joyed with what he told her,but the scenario was changing soon..
ranveer-rajkumari aapko darne ki zaroorat nahi hai,hum sab theek kar denge,hum uss jalal ko marr kar aapko usse azaad kar denge...
jodha-kisse marne ki baat kar rahe hain aap rajkumar,SHEHENSHAH-E-HIND ko...kya bhool gaye aap ki abhi kuch hi deer pehle aap unse muqabale main haar chuke hain...jisse ek muqabala nahi jeet sakte usse marne ke baar mein sochna aapko shoba nahi deta rajkumar...
ranveer-RAJKUMARI,aap hamra apmaan kar rahi hain...
jodha-nahi rajkumar,aap HAMARE PATI KA APMAAN KAR RAHE HAIN,WOH BHI HAMRE SAMNE,AAPKI HIMMAT KAISI HUI HUMSE AAISI BAAT KARNE KI,AAP BHOOL GAYE HUM SHEHENSHAH-E-HIND KI BEGUM HAIN...
ranveer-haan bhool gaya hoon main sab kuch,aapko dekh kar,aapki khoobsurti main kho kar ab humein kuch yaad nahi hai rajkumari,hum aapko apna banana cahte hain,,uss mughal ko chod kar hamare pass aa jaeye,hum aapko duniya ki sari khushiyan denge...
just then ranveer feels a resounding slap on his face...
jodha-aapko sharam nahi aati,ek shadishuda stri se aaisa baat karke aap sabit kya karna cahtein hain...agar hamre pati ko aapki iss zaleel harkat ke baare mein pata chal gaya na toh toh woh...
ranveer-woh kya rajkumari,hum unhe bol denge ki aapne hi humein yahan bulaya tha...ek mard ek aurat par kabhi bharosa nahi karega...hahahahahaha
jodha is in tears by now and tries to move away from ran veer,but ranveer catches her hand...
jodha-chodiye humein,aapko koi sharam nahi aati,hum shehenshah-e-hind ki begum hain,chodiye hamara hatth...
ranveer-itne dino baad toh akele main mile ho jodha,aaj tumhe kaise chod dein hum...
jodha was struggling to get herself free from ranveer when she heard a loud shout from behind ranveer...
jalal--RANVEER.
ranveer looks behind him and is shocked to see jalal standing there...he had never seen anyone look so mad,jalal's eyes were red with rage,his body was burning and he was like a tiger ready to attack ranveer at any moment...ranveer left jodhas hand and jodha rushed past him to jalal and HUGGED HIM...she was sobbing her heart out...
jodha-humnein kuch nahi kiya shehenshah..hum par yakeen kijeye..hum nahi jante thee ki yeh bhi yahan hai...hum par shak mat kijeyega shehenshah..
when jalal saw jodha crying like a helpless child he could only curse himself and ranveer for hurting her...himself bcoz he had made her feel that he would not trust her and ranveer for humilating her like this...
jalal-jodha,hum jante hain aapne kuch nahi kiya,hum aap par pura bharosa karte hain,aapse pak koi aur ho hi nahi sakta hamre liye,shant ho jaeye aap...
he hugged her back,and finally took her hand and placed her behind his back...now ranveer was cornered...
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Posted: 12 years ago
seriously guyz i dont consider myself to be a writer by ur responses encourage me a lot,thanks.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wwwoooww ausme update... Luvd it... Want more of it...
U r a nice writer

Plz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update. PM me next time
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome...Update Soon & Plzzz PM Me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow finally some proper respect for his wife infront another prince

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