OS noW FF : CONTINUING PRECAP ****Updated****ch 15 PAGE 42 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
Part 7:-This one was Sad part but Fantastically Written dude!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ Loved it.❤️
This MA naa!! 😡 😡 🤢
And Jalal is heartbroken by hearing this against Jodha now, 😭 Everyone He loved or trusted betrayed her and He is totally broken!! 😭 😭 It's really nice you let him open up completely in front of Jodha and take it out,Now Jodha also knows about The Selfish Ruqu and Jalal's pains from childhood. 😊 😳
What I loved here is I can connect with Jalal and understand his anger but in show It seems like He have totally lost it and taking decisions too much emotionally,forgetting that He is an Emperor and not giving any chance to the accused Jodha and her brothers to even state their points,And I'm hating it totally!! 😡 😡 Jalal in the Show have gone INSANE and in need of an immediate treatment!!! 😲 😭 😆
That's Why I really wish ki tum writer hoti then hume aise aansu nahi bahane padte Jalal ki Murkhta and Paagalpanti ko dekhkar!! 😉 😳

And Precap is really exciting,Looking forward to see who is the real culprit!! 😛 😳
I'm sorry for late comment. Was Busy and didn't got time to read. 😭 😭
Pls Continue Soon. 😊 😳 😳
And Thankyou sho much for the PM's!!😃 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: priyanka220

<font color="#ff0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="6">GUYS SHOULD I STOP ?</font>


What?!😲 😡
No way!!! 😭 😭 Pls Continue!!We all love it dear!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
thanks for updating- i am so glad jalal opened up to jodha.
plzz continue and pm me if possible.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: priyanka220

<font color="#ff0000" size="6" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">next update on page 19
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Here comes your Page 19!! 😉 😛 😃 😳 😆 🤗
Pls Continue Soon now.😊 😳 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Awesome part priyanka..
Jalaal has faced so much in his life which has made him what he is today a ruthless fearless king..
His emotions of having a troubled childhood and pain filled and ruthless teenage years my heart went out to him..
I just hope jodha's and jalaal's misunderstanding clear out soon..😊.
A very well written chapter..👍🏼.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey its page 19

Update d next part soon na... Waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thnq guys for a wonderful reponse ur response encourages a lot m sorry due to my college m not able to reply to ur comment but trust me its ur response ur appreciation that i write this CH 8...N GUYS DO TELL ME ONCE U THINK I SHOULD STOP ...
CH 8

Jalal realizes what he was doing he shouldn't have opened up in front of Jodha...

In the Kabra

Jodha Soul : Us din mano apke bare mai jo hamare sawal the un sab ka jawab mil gya tha us din hume aisa laga mano humne apko jaan liya ho samajh lia ho...Par hum ek taraf tut se bhi gaye the ki apne aisa soch bhi kaise liya ki huma Ruqaiya Begum ki or apki santaan ko marne ka ghinona khel khelenge...

Jalal Soul : Ha jodha jab humne us din apke apne andar ki baate rakhi...najane vo kya vishwas tha hamare dil ko ap par ki humne apne ap ko apke samne khuli kitab ki tarah rakh dia.

JODHA SOUL : par shehnshah apke mutabik to us waqt apke pas dil hi nhi the(she laughs)

Jalal Soul : Haan Jodha tabhi to apne dil ki awaaz na sunkar bhi unsuni kar rhe the humne apne dimaag ke kehne par ap ko gunehgaar sabit kar dia tha...

In Jodha room

Jalal : apke gunah ki saza apko kal Deewane e Khas mai di jayegi

Jodha :Shehnshah ! par ...ap...

Jalal leaves in anger.

Jodha : he kanha! Ab ap hi batayie...hum kya kare? Kaise yakeen dilaye shehnshah ko ki hum bekasoor h ...hamari madad ki jiye shehnshah...

Moti comes

Moti : Kya hua Jodha? Humne abhi Shehnshah ko yaha se jate hue dekha...unki akhein bilkul lal thi or vo bohot gusse mai bhi lag rhe the ...kai apne to kuch ?

Jodha : Vo moti (Jodha turns towards her crying)

Moti :Jodha a pro rhi h...kya hua Jodha udhar shehnshah or idhar ap? Lijiye pani pijiye

Moti makes Jodha drink water

Jodha : Vo Moti vo...shehnshah ko lagta hai ...lagta h ki..(n she again starts crying)

Moti : kya lagta h Jodha ? pehle ap shant ho jaiye (she wipes Jodha tears) ab btaiye..

Jodha : Moti unhe lagta h ruqaiya begum ke ajanme shishu ke maut ke zimmedar hum h...(in between the sobs) or or unhe lagta h humne kesar mai dhature ka airkh mila jisse mughar sultanate ka ane vala varies ane se pehle hi... (n she starts crying)

Moti : ye ap kya keh rhi h ? ap itna ghinona kam...vo aisa soch bhi kaise sakte h ? apne to us bache ki salamati ke liye jashn vale din hi nirjal vrath bhi rakha tha to a p aisa kaise? Chi...unhe bohot badi galat fahmi...

Jodha : unka kehna h unke pas sabut bhi h us kesar mai dhature ka airkh paya gya h...or vo kesar humne hi Ruqaiya Begum ko uphar swaroop dia tha to unki nazaro mai hum hi doshi h ...par moti tum janti ho na humne aisa nhi kiya...hum hum aisa kar hi nahi sakte...(she asks like child between the sobs )

Moti : Haan Jodha hum jante hai ap sapne mai bhi itna gira hua kaam nhi kar sakti ...zarur badshah ko galat fahmi hui h ap shant ho jaiye

Jodha : hum kaise shant ho jaye moti ...

Jodha again starts crying...moti consoles her and makes her sleep she slept like a child..On other hand one part of Jalal was not accepting Jodha did it ...his mind said Jodha did it but his heart said she can never ...but according to him did the heart exist ?

In Jalal room

Jalal : Sare saboot Jodha Begum ke khilaaf hai to vohi to doshi h to hum puri tarah is bat ko man kyu nhi paa rhe ?kyu ham unke liye saza tai nhi kar paa rhe ?

Jalal's subconscious mind has imagined two Jalal in front of him One in White and One in Black the former representing heart and latter the mind...

WHITE CLOTHEs JALAL :Tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakte ho Jalal ki Begum Jodha Ruqaiya Begum ka Hamal girane ke bare mai soch bhi sakti h krna to dur ki baat h ...Kya tum bhul gye unki vo kavita vo alfaz unka ashirwad jo unhone us chamach un panktio ke sath tumhare ane wale walihaar ke liye dia tha ?

Jalal is about to accept when :

BLACK CLOTHES JALAL : Dhong tha vo sab ...Sach to ye h ki saare saboot Jodha begum ke gunehgaar hone ka praman h ...Jodha Begum ne hi ye kia h

WHITE CLOTHES JALAL : Nhi Jalal kyat um bhul gye tumhari ajanme walihaar ki mrityu ke baad kaise Jodha Begum ne tumhe sambhala tumhara sath dia kya unki kisi bhi harkat mai swarth dikha ?

BLACK CLOTHES JALAL : Vo sab Ruqaiya Begum ke bhanti audhe or takat ke liye hi kiya hoga unhone...isliye vo tumhare kareeb ayi...

WHITE CLOTHES JALAL : Bhulo mat Jalal kitne mauke hone ke bad bhi vo kbhi tumhare karib nhi ayi vo sirf tumhari sahyata kr rhi thi or rhi audhe or taakat ki bat to shatranj ki bazi jitney par vo tumse kuch bhi mang sakti thi ...or vo ma banne ka natak bhi krne ke liye mana ni krti

BLACK CLOTHES JALAL : Par sach to yhi h ki Jodha Begum ne hi ye kia sare saboot yehi kehte h or rahi bat kuch na mangne ki to vo sirf dikhave tha khud ko acha saabit krne ka...sab dhong or dikhava h ...

Jalal : BAS!!!Bas kro

WHITE CLOTHEs JALAL & BLACK CLOTHES JALAL disappear...Jalal is surprised to see them disappear BLACK CLOTHES JALAL words ecHo his mind...saboot...dikhava...gunehgaar ...N as usual he listened his heart and fuming in ANGER...

Jalal : Jodha Begum or unke bhaio ko hirasat mai le liya jaye or foren deewan-e-khas mai pesh kiya jaye...

Deewan " e-Khas

Jalal :Jala diya jaye in sab ko ...koi rehen ni kia jayega in par

Despite of Man Singh, Hamida Bano,Salima Sultan and others saying Jalal is firm on his decision.Ruqaiya is in tears...

MA : (even she shows that she has a doubt that Jodha did it) Jalal hum chahte hai ap ek bar hume izzazat de ki hum is mamle ki the tak jaye

Jalal : Badi Ammi ab ap bhi apne hi to he sach ka khulasa kia ...

MA : Haan JaLal par ab hum hi...apki walida ka kehna sahi hai , ho sakta h ye kisi ki sazish ho...

Jalal : {after thinking for a while..(he remembers the poem and moments spent with Jodha,how she fed him with her hands)} Thik hai Badi Ammi hum apko do din ka waqt dete hai or haan tak he Amer ke shehzade Agra mai hi rahenge..

Jalal leaves...he sees Jodha n leaves half heartidly

Precap : Jodha in Jalal's arms...Real story to unfold soon...

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Edited by priyanka220 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ausome... Its going very nice... Liking it vry much...
Do continue it...

So next update page no...??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NEXT UPDATE PAGE 23
Edited by priyanka220 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great Part... Jalals conflicting thoughts well written

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