OS noW FF : CONTINUING PRECAP ****Updated****ch 15 PAGE 42 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PRECAP : Jalal reaches to Jodha room shattered in middle of nite
Akdha scenes coming up...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Glad to see Jodha understanding Jalal and him giving her trusting and thankful looks! 😳 😆
And That Ruqu is such a 😡**Censored** 😡 🤢 All She cares is for that title,How more mean and humanless,emotionless can this Woman get?! 😲 😡
I'm glad She spoke it infront of Jalal 😉 Now I hope He'll realize how insensitive and mean She is and see the difference between Ruqu and Jodha and won't sympathize with Ruqu anymore! 😛 😳 😆
Jalal bichara must be totally broken na!! 😭 😭And Going to Jodha's room in mid-night,Smart Jallu baby!Jodha aapko sambhal lengi!! 😛 😆 ☺️
And Thankyou for giving 3 updates in a day dear!! 😲 That's Just Amazing!! 😃 👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️ 😳
Thankyou sho much and Tumne precap bhi diya hai uske liye bhi!❤️ 🤗 🤗
Love you dear!!❤️Take your time and Give a long update tommorow with lots of Akdha moments!! 😳 ☺️ 😆 We all will wait😊Or I can say will try to wait patiently!!😆
And Pls Do send PM's whenever you update. 😊 😳 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you are awesome and i love it that u gave us 3 updates in one day!!!! you made my day!!! I reallly liked ur writing. plzz do update tom and give lots of akhda moments and if you can pm me when u update! thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowww... Ausome
Thanx for so fast updates

Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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please continue loved all the chapters and excited about the precap...amazing work...pleaseee update sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome updates gal you're a fabulous writer..
Jalaal's emotions were prtrayed beautifully by you.. He is totally broken after the loss of his unborn child and jodha being the perfect wife was there when he needed her..
I'm happy ruqaiyya herselff confessed that she was only bothered about the title and not about the kid atleast jalaal now knows how ruqaiyya is..
I loved the akdha scenes you wrote in the first chapter they were nice to read..😃.
Update the next part soon and plzzz pm me when you update the next part pretty please..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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continue...continue this is really good👍🏼...cant wait for akdha scenes
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thnqq guys for a wonderful response I seriously expected some jutas and chappals while beginning this OS and ur response makes me write fourth chapter so here's it

Ruqaiya : Vo Jalal hum ...vo hume bache ke khone ka bohot dukh hai ...humare muh se bas yuhi nikal gaya tum to jante ho na hume hamare bache ki kitni chah thi (starts crying fakely)

She thought she would gain Jalal's sympathy back with tears and his anger would blow away but times were different...

Jalal : bas Ruqaiya begum bas kijiye !! apko bache ki ni mughal sultanate ke vaaris ki chah thi or vo bhi humari khushi ke liye nahi bas apne swarth ek audhe ke liye thi...apko hamari santan ke jane ka nhi apne Mariam uz Zamani na banne ka dukh h apko kbhi bache ki chah thi hi ni apko thi to bas audhe , taakat or paise ki , humne apko itni izzat di itna rutba kya koi kami thi us me jo ap is audhe ke peeche bhag rhi h...ek baar manga hota bachpan se aj tak humne apko kisi cheez ke liye mana kia h ...kyu Ruqaiya kyu apki soch par hume ghin ati h ...boliye ruqaiya(he shouts)

Ruqaiya : (shakes due to fear) vo Jalal...vo hum...

Jalal : bas kijiye koi safai ni h na apke pas...ek ap hai or ek Jodha begum kitne din hue h unhe aye hue is harem mai par unhe sabse zyada dukh h is bat ka or dukh jatane ke liye asu ni hridey ki avaishakta hoti h ...lekin ye ap ni samjhengi kyunki apke dil or dimag par audhe or takat ka bhut sawar hai...(HE TURNS HIS FACE AWAY FROM HER DISGUSTLY)

Ruqaiya : (now angry) ap humari tulna us hindu begum se kar rhe h ?? vo kya jane audha,rutba kya hota h jalal or mat bhuliye jiski taarifo ke ap pul bandh rhe h vo apse nafrat krti h (Jalal has an exression of remorse and dis satisfaction) or kyu na ho hume rutbe , audhe, taakat se mohabbat ki, hum malika e khas ban gye or fir hame chah hui mariam uz (and suddenly she realizes what is she speaking and she stops)

Jalal : to ye hai apki asliyat (he is shocked and disgusted)

Ruqaiya : Jalal vo !!!

Jalal : bas hume kuch ni sunna ab (he shouts)

Jalal leaves the room in anger picking up beer bottle on the way. He drinks badly and leaves while passing he his dragged by some force to Jodha room

Jodha's room

Jodha : Moti hum kya kare hum bhula hi nhi paa rhe jo ruqaiya begum ke sath hua...hum kaise so jaye.Akhein band karte h to bas unhi ka rota hua chehra humare samne aa rha h ...or Shenshah humne kabhi nhi socha tha hum unhe is haal mai dekhenge h

Na jane kyu hum tut se gaye unhe aise dekh kr...

Moti : (gives a knowing smile ) ha Jodha dukh to hume bhi hai par jo kanha ki marzi...a bap aram kijiye...

Jodha : hmm ! he kanhA Ruqaiya begum ko himmat dijiye ...

Jalal enters.

Jalal : unhe iski koi zarurat nhi h ...unhe zarurat h to bas (he turns his face with disgusted look)

JODHA sends moti away and holds shehnshah n makes him sit on her bed...Moti leaves a bit happy and satisfied

Jodha : shehnshah ! apne fir sharab (Jodha is a bit upset but then gives understanding smile) lijiye pani

Jalal drinks water with her hand . Her touch and her being with him gives him satisfaction somewhat soothes his wounds works like a medicine...(Jalal knows this feeling but couldn't get a reason for it )

Precap : Jodha Jalal hug...

Did you like it ??Is it nyc ?

Should I continue??

Do comment ...

silent readers plz comment 😳

Edited by priyanka220 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great updates..
Update soon..
I don't think I can wait..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wooowww dearrr itss awesum... kya likhte hoo aaapp👏👏 plzzz update next partt ... cant waittt😃

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