OS noW FF : CONTINUING PRECAP ****Updated****ch 15 PAGE 42 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting for the next update its been great till now. :)
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OK GUYS SO HERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER...BUT I AM INFORMING U A FEW THINGS BEFORE HAND ONLY ...FIRSTLY YOU MUST HAVE NOTICED THAT I AM TRYING TO TAKE THE STORY IN THE SAME TAKE THAT SHOW IS GOING BUT IN A DIFFERENT WAY ...SECONDLY IF U GUYS AT ANY POINT FEEL M NOT WRITING NICELY OR M WRITING BULSHIT U CAN SURELY INFORM ME I WILL STOP OR IMPROVE MYSELF...THIRDLY IF U FEEL STORYLINE IS BORING OR NOT GOING GOOD FEEL FREE TO THROW CHAPAL AND JUTAS...
After the pursuance of Maham Anga and Hamida Bano Jalal increases the tehkikat time for 10 days on a condition that Bhagwan Das and other Princes with Jodha Begum would be kept nazarband and no one can meet them and even they cant meet each other...
In the place where Jodha is kept ...
Jodha : hey kanha! Hume shama krna ki hum apki aj puja nhi kr paye par ammi jaan ne vade anusar apke age avashya hi diya bati kar di hogi...
JALAL on other hand send messenger to Jodha and Amer princes that he wants to meet them
ALL GATHER
Jalal : Apke bapusa Agra tashrif la rhe h suna h koi khush khabri laa rhe h...hum soch rhe hai ki kuch parka ki khabre hum bhi unhe de hi de...
Jodha : (fuming in anger) Shehnshah! (staring in his eyes) agar apne humare bapusa ko kisi bhi prakar ka dukh ya dard pohochaya to hum bilkul sehen nhi karenge...
Jalal : Dard...(angrily) Dard vo hota h Jodha Begum jo ap sabne milkar hume pohochaya h ...or sehen to hum kr rhe h ap logo ko...
Jodha :Lekin Shehnshah jab humne or hamare bhai sa ne kuch kia hi nahi h ...Hum rajput hai shehnshah or hum gaddari karna nhi jante
Jalal : Par apke khilaf saboot to yehi keh rhe h
Jodha and Jalal have an angry eyelock (Ishq hai vo ehsas just tune playing)
Jalal leaves ...
Jodha : Bhai sa hum shehnshah ki taraf se apse shama mangte h ...hum kaise btaye apko hum ap logo ko aisi dasha mai dekh kar kitni pidha ho rhi h (she starts crying)
Bhagwan Das :(goes to her and consoles her) Shant ho jao Jodha ! isme tumari ya shehnshah ki koi galti nhi h ...ye paristhitiya hi kuch aisi h ki shehnshah ya koi bhi hota use yehi lagta ki hum (and he turns his face away in disgust )
Jodha : Bhaisa sach jald hi samne ayega ...kanha par bharosa rkhiye unke hote hue kabhi kisi begunah ko saza nhi mil sakti ...
Hamida Bano enters with arti plate in his hand . Jodha touches her feet Bhagwan Das and other Prince greet her with folded hands...Hamida returns with salam gesture
Hamida : Jodha ! hume yaha ek hindu bandhi ne btaya ki aj rakhi ka tyohar hai to hume laga ki tumhara ji kitna dukhi hoga ki tumhari shadi ke bad ki pehli rakhi bhi tum mana nhi payi to humse rha ni gya or hum ek arti ki thali mai jitna saman hume samajh aya rakh laye tum dekh lo
Jodha : (is very happy and in tears hugs Hamida) Shukriya Ammijaan ! hum kin shabdo mai apka
Hamida :(interrupting her )Ammijaan bhi kehti ho or shukriya bhi ap hamari beti hai or hamari beti ka ji dukhi ho ye bhala hum kaise dekh sakte h ...lijiye thal or dekh lijiye ki saara saman h ?
Jodha :(checking the thali she is shocked to see such beautiful rakhi n that too in mughal sultanate)
Ammi Jaan ye rakhi ...ye kitni khubsoorat hai ...yaha mughal sultanate...kya yaha bhi ammijaan rakhi milti h ?
Hamida : nhi Jodha ! ye to humne rakhi ki khabar sunkar khas yaha ke karigaro se tumhare liye bnvai h...
Jodha is too happy and grateful to Ammi Jaan
Chalo Jodha ab jaldi apne bhaiyo ko rakhi bandho ...
(BACHPAN SATH MAI KHELO KUDO STARTS PLAYING IN BG )
Jodha : chliye Sujamal Bhaisa pehle apki...(she stops and remember Sujamal and moments spend with him and the rakhi day when all brothers had gifted her churi she gets tears in her eyes but hides them and smiles)
Jodha ties Rakhi on Bhagwan Das and other Princes hand ..
Bhagwan Das : Jodha aj humare pas tumhe den eke liye apne ashirwad ke alawa or kuch nahi hai ha par ye taufa tum par udhar rha yaha se nikal kar hum tumhe muh manga taufa denge...
Jodha : Bhai sa jis din shehnshah apko baizat yaha se riha kar denge humare liye to sabse bada taufa vo hi hoga...(and they all hug each other)
The soldiers come and and bow to Hamida and Jodha.
Soldiers : shehnshah ka hukm hai ki ap sab ko nazar band mai le jaya jaye
They all are taken away...
Hamida : Ya khuda! Jalal ko sahi galat mai farak samjhne ki nazar baksh ...
Jodha is being taken away when suddenly her foot slips on water there on floor .Jalal holds her in his arms and saves her (his face had a sudden reaction of fear and then relief after holding her ...(Ishq hai vo ehsas plays in BG )...and ol of sudden a bandhi spills a plate of roses in air and ol petals fall on Jodha Jalal...Jodha still in Jalal arms they have a eyelock ...suddenly Jalal realizes the moment and makes Jodha stand
Jalal : Begum Jodha ap thik to hai na ?
Jodha :Ji ...
Jalal:(shouts in anger) kisne yaha pani giraya agar abhi Jodha Begum ko kuch .(he realizes Jodha seeing him and stops in mid sentence and leaves)
Jodha :(leaves confused and shocked seeing Jalal concern and murmurs) he kanha y shehnshah abhi to hume jalane ki baat kr rhe the hume dukh pohochane ka prayas kr rhe the or ab aise kr rhe h mano
Soldier interrupts her .
Soldier : Chale Jodha Begum?
Jodha : ha chaliye
Someone is watching all this ...
Precap: Raja Bharmal arrives...
ok I noe I didn't reveal real story behind the miscarriage but m still thinking that part sorry I will try revealing it in ch 10...
How was it ?
Should I continue ?
Did u lyk it ??
Plzz comment...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Its nice... I think u r going gr8

U shuld continue


So next page no??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Your story is going great! Please update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice chapter...please update the next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
its good i really like it but plz i hope that u dont drag it ekta maiyaa 😆 jkjk good job keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago
Post soon and a longer one! Plz stop the fight soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update,
hamida & jodha's bonding
i just loved it
please do update next chappy soon
please, if possible pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update 😊
continue it

loved how jalal saved jodha from slipping 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it dear
plz update the next part soon

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