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ash

@ashpat

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

wow- interesting take on shower continuation- thanks you so much for this os. it would be awesome to c this onscreen althought i was already imagining this as u wrote it so beautifully and can't belive its ur first attempt.

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aanchal_c

@aanchal_c

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ashpat
wow- interesting take on shower continuation- thanks you so much for this os. it would be awesome to c this onscreen althought i was already imagining this as u wrote it so beautifully and can't belive its ur first attempt.
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thank u ,thank u,thank u.

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arshi95

@arshi95

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

its amazing! well written! <3 loved every bit of it! :)

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Munia

@Bushra_Munia

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Wow awesome. Akdha itne karib. Wow

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@--Janvie--

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Its an Awesome OS dear!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ Loved it alot.❤️

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Suvarna

@Super Kool

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Very nice...loved it...❤️

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Absoluv

@Absoluv

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

SUPERBBB work Aanchal dear...👏...luved it and do keep writing many more OS on JA...I so wish that v get to c something like this in the show tooo...😉...luved this scene...😛

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Sonia

@princessSonia

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Amazing OS...👏
Loved it...
Do write more often...
N do pm me
Fr d next one...
I hve send u buddy request...

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Anchal did you write it before their BT scene or after...cos the same thing seems to have been played out on screen..did they copy your work?

Nice scene btw...the second part was delicious...😊

Edited by lashy - 11 years ago

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aanchal_c

@aanchal_c

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: lashy
Anchal did you write it before their BT scene or after...cos the same thing seems to have been played out on screen..did they copy your work?
Nice scene btw...the second part was delicious...😊

i wrote it after the BT scene,but second part is my imagination.

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