OS-POOL KHILEIN HAIN GULSHAN GULSHAN.

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this is a continuation of the shower scene...not a prediction but just a desire to see this.
JODHA WAS RUNNING HERE AND THERE TRYING TO FIND HER MORTAL ENEMY...HER HUSBAND..JALAL ...STOPPING TO ASK FOR HIS WHEREABOUTS ,SHE MADE HER WAY TO HIS HAMAAM ONLY TO FIND HIM IN A POOL OF ROSES AND MILK WITH HIS BANDIS GIVING HIM A BATH WITH AROMATIC OILS...FOR A SECOND SHE WAS STUNNED...NOW WHAT TO DO..HOW SHOULD SHE APPROACH HIM WHEN HE IS IN SUCH A STATE,AND WELL LETS LEAVE ASIDE HER RACING HEART FOR A SECOND...
JALAL HAD ALREADY SENSED HER...GREETING HER AND DISMISSING HIS BANDIS HE ASKED HER TO TELL HIM WHAT WAS THE EMERGENCY THAT SHE JODHA-PRINCESS OF AMEER-NOW HIS BEGAM HAD TO SEE HIM.
A VELIED JODHA PUTS FORTH HER REQUEST ALBIET IN A VERY AKDOO FASHION..
"PLEASE DONT TELL MY PARENTS THE TRUTH OF OUT RELATIONSHIP"
JALAL-AND WHY WOULD I DO THAT PRINCESS..I AM THE KING OF INDIA..I WILL NOT LIE AND ESP NOT FOR YOU...
SEEING THE FUTILITY OF THE SITUATION JODHA DECIDES TO MAKE HER WAY TO HER BEDROOM BUT JALAL HAS OTHER PLANS IN MIND.
JALAL-WAIT...TELL ME WHEN YOU PLAN TO DISOBEY MY EVERY COMMAND..HOW IS IT THAT YOU EXPECT ME TO FULFILL ALL YOUR WISHES...IT'S ALWAYS TIT FOR TAT...BUT SINCE YOU HAVE COME ALL THE WAY TO MEET ME WHY DONT YOU TELL ME WHAT YOU WANT ME TO SAY TO YOUR PARENTS AND I WILL CONVEY IT TO THEM
JODHA-PLEASE TELL THEM THAT EVERYTHING IS FINE BETWEEN US AND I AM HAPPY HERE.
JALAL(smirks)-MY PRINCESS YOU CAN HAVE WHAT YOUR LITTLE HEART DESIRES,BUT I HAVE A CONDITION TOO.
JODHA IS CONFUSED(apparently only she has the right to put forth conditions)
JODHA-TELL ME WHAT YOU WANT ..I WILL DO ANYTHING FOR MY PARENTS HAPPINESS.
NOW JALAL HAD HER CORNERED...
JALAL-WELL MY BANDIS HAVE GONE AND I AM STILL IN THE MIDDLE OF TAKING A BATH ..WHY DONT YOU HELP ME OUT MY PRINCESS..
JODHA TRY AS SHE MIGHT COULD NOT KEEP THE BLUSH OUT OF HER CHEEKS...HER HUSBAND WANTS HER HELP...SHE IS OBLIGED TO HELP HIM BUT BATHE JALAL,HER MORTAL ENEMY..NO NEVER..BUT SHE HAS NO CHOICE ESP IF SHE WANTS TO SEE HER PARENTS HAPPY.
SLOWLY SHE MAKES HER WAY TO WHERE JALAL IS AND PICKS UP A JUG CONTAINING MILK AND STARTS POURING IT ALL OVER HIM...JALAL WAS ON CLOUD 9..HIS RELUCTANT QUEEN BATHING HIM...HER AT HIS MERCY..NOW THIS IS WHAT HE WANTED..HE TOK THE JUG FROM HER HANDS...POURED ALL TEH MILK ON HIS FACE AND TOSSED AWAY THE VESSEL IN THE POOL...BECHARI..POOR SOUL JODHA NOW HAS TO USE HER HANDS..JUST LIKE THE WAY JALAL WANTED..SHE SAT DOWN BESIDES HIM AND STARTED POURING WATER ON HIS BODY...KEEPING HER FACE AVERTED FOR TRYING TO CONTROL HER BLUSH,SHE FAILED TO SEE JALAL'S SMIRKS AND THE AMUSEMENT IN HIS EYES...SUDDENLY JALAL AND JODHA BOTH HEAR SOMEONE COMING,JODHA WAS IN A FIX,SHE COULDNT LET ANYONE FIND HER WITH JALAL LIKE THAT..IT WAOULD BE SO EMBARASSING..JALAL WAS LOOKING AT HER .HE COULD MAKE OUT WHAT WAS GOING ON IN HER MIND,BEFORE JODHA COULD DO ANYTHING JALAL PULLED HER INSIDE THE POOL AND CLOSED HER MOUTH WITH HIS PALM...
JALAL-SHHH...DONT MAKE ANY SOUNDS...
JODHA JUST NODS HER HEAD.
JALAL-WHO IS IT ...DONT YOU KNOW THAT THE KING IS TAKING A BATH...GET OUT RIGHT THIS INSTANCE...
IT WAS ADHAM KHAN..HE HAD COME TO TELL JALAL ABOUT SOME IMPORTANT DEALL BEING FINALISED BY THE RAJPUTS AGAINST THE MUGHALS...
ADHAM-SHEHEN SHAH I NEED YOUR PERMISSION TO SEE YOU IMMEDIATELY...THERE IS A NEW DEAL HAPPENING BETWEEN MAHARANA PRATAP AND ONE OF HIS OTHER RAJPUT FRIENDS WHICH CAN BE INJURIOUS TO US..
JALAL REALISES THE IMPORTANCE OF THE TALK ,BUT AT THE SAME TIME HE DOSENT WANT TO LEAVE JODHA...HE GIVES ADHAM CONSENT TO ENTER
JALAL-BAS ADHAM WAHIM RUK JAO...AB BATAO KYA HAI..
JODHA CANT BELEIVE JALAL WOULD DO THIS..HE IS INVITING ADHAM KHAN HERE WHEN SHE IS WITH HIM AND THAT TOO IN A POOL...SHE TRIES TO MOVE BUT JALAL HOLDS HER CLOSE AND ASKS HER TO STOP MOVING THRU HIS EYES...ADHAM SENSES SOMETHIGN IS WRONG..
ADHAM-SHEHEN SHAN AAP THEEK TOH HAIN...
JALAL-HAAN HUM BILKUL THEEK HAIN...TUM APNI BAAT PURI KARO.
ALL THE WHILE ADHAM IS THERE..JALAL IS HOLDING JODHA CLOSE TO HIMSELF...HIS BODY HAS AN IMMEDIATE REACTION TO JODHA BUT HE KNOWS HE NEEDS TO CONTROL HIMSELF...JODHA IS ALMOST SITTING ON HIS LAP WITH HER HEAD UNDER HIS CHIN...HE MAKES SURE THAT NO ONE CAN MAKE OUT THAT JODHA IS WITH HIM BUT ADHAM HAS HIS DOUBTS..HE STARTS TO COME EVEN NEARER AND JODHA FEELS SCARED AND SNUGGLES MORE INTO JALAL...JALAL TIGHTENS HIS EMBRACE AND JODHA AND HIM AND CUDDLED TOGETHER NOW...NOT EVEN WIND CAN PASS THRU...
JALAL-ADHAM HUMNEI KAHA NA WAHIN RUK JAO..AB TUM YAHAN SE JA SAKTE HO ...HUM TUMHE DARBAR MAIN MILTE HAIN.
ADHAM GOES FROM THERE BUT JALAL IS STILL HOLDING ON TO JODHA...BOTH ARE STILL CUDDLED TOGETHER...JALAL REALISES HE NEEDS TO LET GO OF JODHA BEFORE ANYONE ELSE COMES IN ,BUT HE DOSENT WANT TO..SURPRISINGLY EVEN JODHA IS NOT THAT ALARMED ANY MORE...SHE IS EXPERIENCING THIS KIND OF INTIMACY FOR THE FIRST TIME AND ENJOYING IT...BUT SHE SOON REALISES WHO SHE IS CUDDLED WITH.
JODHA-HUMEIN JANE DIJEYE...
JALAL RELUCTANTLY RELEASES HER AND AS JODHA GETS UP TO STEP OUT OF THE POOL JALAL CANT HELP BUT NOTICE HER DELICIOUS CURVES AND HOW HER CLOTHES ARE CLINGING TO HER...BEFORE BOTH OF THEM CAN GET MORE EMBARRASED HE PUSHES JODHA BACK IN THE POOL,GETS OUT OF THE POOL HIMSELF,COVERS HIMSELF UP AND ASKS HIS GUARDS TO TELL JODHA'S DAAISIS TO BRING CLOTHES FOR JODHA...JODHA IS SURPRISED..SHE DOSENT KNOW HOW TO REACT...JALAL TURNS TO HER AND SAYS"HUM AAPKE PASS NAHI AATE MAGAR HUM KISSI AUR KO AAPKI TARAF DEKHNE KA MAUKA BHI NAHI DENGE..AAP YAHAN APNE KAPDE BADAL KAR APNE HOJRE MAIN JA SAKTI HAIN..AUR HAAN HAMARI SHART PURI KARNE KE LIYE SHUKRIYA"..WITH THAT HE LEAVES JODHA ALONE IN THE POOL BLUSHING ..ALONE WITH HER STRANGE FEELINGS..THE FEELINGS OF DESIRE WHICH SHE CANNOT UNDERSTAND


guyz this is my first attempt..please leave your honest opinions.
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smile.sara thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good but change your past name... name it ..OS
smile.sara thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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n why caps... you can change color, size or font to prominent but no caps...pls😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: smile.sara

good but change your past name... name it ..OS


and what should the title be?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: smile.sara

n why caps... you can change color, size or font to prominent but no caps...pls😊

ok next time if i write i will be careful😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I like this. How about an interesting title? 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanchal_c


and what should the title be?

actually if you change title as OS..it will attract more member...May be ..OS--continuing bath scene...my take 😊
Edited by smile.sara - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Star_girl

I like this. How about an interesting title? 😊


u guyz suggest something.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanchal_c

ok next time if i write i will be careful😊

👍🏼🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hope the edited title is good.

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