Two Shot COMPLETE: heart on a sleeve - Page 9

Originally posted by: -ForeverYours-

ERMAGAWD.

I LOVE THIS. AS;LKDJFALSKDJF

this is always a good sign, especially coming from you.

Ok so like I love how you described their relationship in third person, without sexual innuendos because clearly I can't. (ok ok, letting that go)

nope, this is not going away any time soon.

But honestly it seemed effortless, and after the description I felt like I had complete understanding of the dynamics of their relationship. I really love your word choice too, it was so "them."

why thank you. I try.

In particular the last line:

"Finally, she decided she had to put up with the growing pain, however jovial, who wouldn't leave her alone at the first sunlit hour. "

gawww😳

Instead of saying "She grew used to it."

the path less traveled, if I say so myself

I loved it man, Jassypoo you are so talented. I love the way you write.
thank you. thank you. *takes a bow*

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

thanks. but this is just the first part, remember? we discussed continuation after I had written this part

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

so u haven't written the continuation as yet?😕

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

nope. maybe next week

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

orr jasleen u srsly confused me there girl lol

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

why? what are you confused about?

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

wen u sent me da pm for dis os n wedding night os lol

Originally posted by: luvera

Don't really watch this show... but got the basic background of the story from your OS or TS...

I like the descriptions of the characters and their differences.. This Jodha seems to be a tough one and stands her ground...

thank you.

Request:

What I would love to read is you writing about the squabbles as King and Queen in the modern era rather than in the ancient times... Take the same situation, same people, same emotions, same positions and see how would everything be dealt with in this time period...

I don't know if I am being coherent right now since I am dying to finish up and catch up on some sleep..