Two Shot COMPLETE: heart on a sleeve - Page 8

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

I don't know dear. I like to be appreciated is all. If I am taking two hours out of my day to write for a forum, I would like a little more than five folk to read it. I will try again, soon enough.

Originally posted by: saakhi01

I like ur work alot n hv been a regular reader...
Ur other works in MEIEJ forum r all somewhat thrillers n they hv left me asking for more...
The wait is nw becoming difficult bt still i'll wait if u say that u r not goin to end them abruptly
thanks for replying...
I hope u update Bongbala n sunshine dreams very soon...

Originally posted by: -ForeverYours-

Ok so like I love how you described their relationship in third person, without sexual innuendos because clearly I can't. (ok ok, letting that go)

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

i like it alot but didn't u use the idea or is it another 1? but it was still nice good gng

Originally posted by: SAnonymous

A Very Nice OS.

Please continue it

Originally posted by: PrittB

Before I say anything, I just want to let you know that I don't watch this show, have never seen the movie, and have no idea what the story is about. So if I don't understand something in the OS...or TS ahah, that's the reason!

you are excused😆

I love the way you describe everything. I don't even know the characters but after reading the first paragraph, I feel like I could tell you their back history. I have always loved your writing. It's different...unique in a good way and I don't think I'll ever get over it.

this makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside.

I like the sounds of Jodha. She sounds strong.

good

I understand the title now! "The Rajputani wore her heart on a sleeve."

"Jalal and Jodha's list of comebacks" lol.

I like Jalal and Jodha in this. I want to watch the show but there's too many shows I want to watch and never do. I wish I watched this from the beginning.

I wish you did too.

Wait, his favourite begam is the other girl? Interesting! Unless that was sarcasm.

Nope, he has three begums. Jodha is the third and his favourite is the first one.

"he was just another nuisance she knew would rid off the sooner she entertained him" Okay, I love her character from your point of view.

awww thanks

Okay, I've read the first part so far! And I like it. You make me want to watch the show. Wait, the second part isn't up yet. I just realized that lol.

yup. good, I wish you can take the time out to watch this show. It is really awesome and now that the track is gearing toward romance

Originally posted by: PrittB

I just died lol.