AkDha FF - An Interlude of Passion (Update- PG 11)

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puggyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Simply superb 👏 👏 👏 ...fabulous work !! 👏

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Anju_S

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

wow

superb updates 👏

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les-miserables

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

I agree with Jodha when she thinks that she would always want more. Yes, more please! 😉

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Yoga priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted
LOL, thank you, Priya. You will have to change the name now 😛 I decided on it today.

Already done 👍🏼

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Arya75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Great work ...

How do you write such a big chapter...

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BlackWitch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

😆😆 I don't think JA would have been really happy to know that you were in their room.

I'm damn happy that you had a vivid picture of this in your head. Without that the whole thing would have been so pointless, as normal as lemonade. I'm more of a wine person 😉I would have elaborated more but this is a public forum so can only take so many liberties. Maybe next time, I'll write both kinds of versions, with the option for readers to choose which way they wanna go 😃

Originally posted by: sweet_5
God damn!

I read both parts! I can totally picture this in my head! This is what I love about them

Such attitude and sass I love it! You write really well I felt I was standing in the room watching this happen ahahahah LOL

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BlackWitch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Well, I guess that seals the fate of this story then. Would definitely write another part. I'm so glad you are following this FF, makes me very happy 😊

Originally posted by: Ashvikfever
Awesome part... Loved the things which happened with AkDha.it wa hot and steamy.. Plz write another part. Would love to read more

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BlackWitch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

😆 Well, I might make some parts longer if you want, just for readers like you. I would have done it anyway, just that its a public forum with all kinds of age groups, so can only go so far with a fair warning at the beginning. Let me know if you want the longer version 😊

Originally posted by: Rozy77
oh that was hot ☺️
loved every single thing

i could picture it all in my mind😉

i wish this part was longer though...😆

thanks for continuing

take care

eagerly waiting for the next part now..

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BlackWitch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

😆 You just highlighted a major blooper I made. Not that anyone can look beyond AkDha to notice it 😆 I based the story during the day and ended the next part with nightfall. Will be correcting that in sometime. My apologies for the inconsistency. My vivid imagination runs away with me 😛

Originally posted by: apolloartemis
Holy heck, this was hot! By the way, glad you liked the title- its certainly living up to its name! And you have to finish up- what happens the morning after?😉