AkDha FF - An Interlude of Passion (Update- PG 11) - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you, Rashmi. Means a lot 😊

Originally posted by: Rashmi_pari

i was awesome dear
u have written it very nice

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Posted: 11 years ago
it is one passionate beautifully written interlude...enjoyed reading it...
u have a strong hold over the language... and very descriptive in your writing which brings the entire story live, such that one can see the entire episode in one's imagination, vividly... u have a wonderful knack of story telling... wud love to read more of ur writings...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear,

You are one of the best writer, whose writing I have read in whole forum ⭐️

Love the way you describe their POV & emotions 😳

Waiting for epilogue dear...wat to do hey dil mange more 😛😉

Awesome Update ⭐️

Priya
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well, I had to read my previous FFs entirely to get to know the errors. My writing was very tight before. But with this one, I felt the enjoy of describing something in detail. Glad it made it vivid for you. After all, what is passion without imagination? 😉 And yes, when I write more, I would PM you. I loved your comment. It is so nice to receive descriptive feedback! 😳

Originally posted by: cjs369

it is one passionate beautifully written interlude...enjoyed reading it...
u have a strong hold over the language... and very descriptive in your writing which brings the entire story live, such that one can see the entire episode in one's imagination, vividly... u have a wonderful knack of story telling... wud love to read more of ur writings...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Priya 🤗

Thank you so very much! You are really very kind 😃 I'm so happy you liked everything so much. LOL, no epilogue. However, will put up another FF soon, and wait for your lovely comments there as well. It makes my day when people put an effort in their comments. Thanks so much again!

Pratiksha

Originally posted by: yoga23priya

Hey dear,


You are one of the best writer, whose writing I have read in whole forum ⭐️

Love the way you describe their POV & emotions 😳

Waiting for epilogue dear...wat to do hey dil mange more 😛😉

Awesome Update ⭐️

Priya

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow!! :O u deserve a sincere salute! just simply wow!
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Posted: 11 years ago
please pm me when you write the next one. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey dear
sorry for the late reply...
awesome, awesome part👏
it was hot, sizzling and beautiful☺️☺️
loved every single scene
jodha really is a hellcat yeah!?...😆😳
am sad it ended but it was a wonderful read
hope you write more stories in future
take care
thanks for the unedited version dear🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you so much 😊😊

Originally posted by: arshi95

wow!! :O u deserve a sincere salute! just simply wow!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Definitely, I would 😃

Originally posted by: vacchii

please pm me when you write the next one. 😊

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