SS-'JODA AKBAR LOVE JOURNEY' CHP16 PG37 UPDTD SEPT 22nd - Page 18

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CHAPTER 13

Salima - she gets a good news that she is pregnent ...

AKBAR - soon the good news reaches JALAL ...he is also so happy . He comes to meet salima

JODA - she presents her a haar and wishes her ...

SALIMA - she thanks joda and accepts her gift

JALAL - hum bahuth KUSH hai saleema... Aap ko Jo chahiye maango ...

SALIMA - ill ask u after the child is born SHEHENSHA ...

JALAL - k u take rest am leaving ...in 2 days there is salim first birthday ..I have to send invitations...

SALIMA - jee SHEHENSHA

JALAL - he leaves her cabin and goes to darbar ... And orders to give. Gifts for every maiden palace . And give sweets and gold coins to people of Agra on salim birthday .

SALIMA - she lies in bed and give evil smile " now SHEHENSHA gave me one wish ...I'll ask him to make my son as heir to mogul sakthanath and not that salim ...😈

FINALLY THE DAY ARRIVES . IT'S SALIM BIRTHDAY AND CELABRATIONS ARE GOING ON IN PALACE . ALL GUESTS ARRIVED . THERE WAS A GRAND LUNCH AND WINE .

JALAL - am very happy today ... One thing is my son's first birthday and second thing is both my wives joda and salima are expecting a child ...

EVERYONE - they CONGRAGULATE JALAL ...
Dance program is going on for entertainment .

SALIM - he gets down from joda lap and run towards dancers n jump ... Laughs and dances with them

JALAL - he feels very happy looking at his son❤️


EVERYONE - they smile at their crown prince funny antics and cute dance ...

JODA - she wants to bring salim back but she can't goad take him ...she can't go out of the curtain

JALAL - he observes joda and understands it and he goes to salim and dances along with him ...slowly takes him into arms and make him sit along with him

PARTY ENDS. AND ALL GUESTS LEAVE NEXT DAY .

JODA - she is walking with salim in the garden and suddenly she feels giddy and fall down

SALIM - he calls her out ammi ...ammi

MOTHI - she is shocked to hear salim talking for first time...

JODA - she is taken to room and hakim is called ...

JALAL - he gets the news and rushes joda... He asks hakim wat happened ??

HAKIM - nothing to worry SHEHENSHA...Mallika is just weak ... Have to take more rest and. Be carefull for few days

JALAL - he goes to joda and pats her forehead and kisses and tells " why don't u be carefull joda ..y were u roaming in he garden "

JODA - woh salim zidd kar rahe the ...tho hum unke saath chala Gaya

SALIM - he walks towards joda and call ammi

JALAL - he gets amused !!! ❤️ Joda he is talking ... He takes salim into embrace and kisses him all over face...

JODA - She feels very happy and hugs salim and kisses him

JALAL - Abbu kaho salim

SALIM - he stares at JALAL and giggles and sucks his cheek

JALAL - salim am not asking u to kiss me ...say Abbu

SALIM - he is playfully mood and runs here and there and jumps in JALAL 's lap and giggles

JODA - SHEHENSHA he is so small ...only 1 year 2 months old ... How can he understand

JALAL - he is calling u ammi and not me...

JODA - haha SHEHENSHA aap bhi na ...he will call Abbu ...he will take time ...

JALAL - he smiles and kisses joda ...

SALIM - he pushes. JALAL away from joda and sleep on joda ...he does not allow JALAL near joda ...

JODA - she smiles

JALAL - salim thum shhararath bacha hogaya ...so posseessive about ur mother ...remember I have first right on ur mother ...she is my wife first then ur mother ...he touches joda

SALIM - he gets angry and screams and make puppy face

JODA - SHEHENSHA y r u irritating him ...he is a small kid ...

JALAL - ur supporting ur son and not husband joda ...

JODA - yeh aap kya kehre SHEHENSHA

JALAL - he smiles and tell " am just kidding joda "

SALIM - he sleeps ...

JALAL - he puts him in between him and joda and sleeps ...

SALIMA - in the mid night salima gets stomach ache and screams and hakim comes

JODA - she wakes up due to screams and wake JALAL ..." SHEHENSHA kisi ka awaz "

JALAL - kya ??

JODA - she gets down bed and walk towards salima room

JALAL - he goes behind joda holding salim

JODA - she asks maids " kya hua "

MAID - donno ...salima begum is not well . Jus now doctor came they are inside

JALAL - he gives salim to the maid and goes inside with joda ...

SALIMA - she is crying

JALAL - kya hua ...he asks hakim

HAKIM - she had a miscarriage

JALAL - he feels bad and sits beside salima

SALIMA - she hugs him and cries

JALAL - he consoles her

JODA - she thinks she has to leave them and console salima and leave room with salim

JALAL - he stays with salim that night . Also next two days he goes to samila and console her...

IT'S BEEN A WEEK SINCE THE INCIDENT OCCURED . NOW JODA IS 5 MONTHS PREGNENT .

SALIMA - she finds JALAL playing with salim in the garden and gets mad . " I lost my child and not happy this salim is playing nicely with SHEHENSHA "

JODA - she is walking in the balcony watching both playing

SALIMA - she comes and stands near joda ...

JODA - how r u salima ??

SALIMA - how will I be joda ??

JODA - I can understand ur feeling salima ...butu have to forget it and overcome the grief ...again u will get a good news soon

SALIMA - don't show ur fake sympathy joda ...I knw ur happy about it...don't act ...n u can't understand my sorrow ...u have a baby already and now u r also carrying a baby ...how can u understand

JODA - no salima ...ur getting me wrong ...she holds her hands

JALAL - he observes both joda and salima and smell something wrong ...he walks towards them... Only few steps away from him

SALIMA - she tries to move away. Joda hands and by mistake pushes her

JODA - she looses balance and falls down the steps ...

JALAL - he gets shocked at the incident happend in front of his eyes ...he runs for joda

SALIMA - she realises wat she did and feels bad and rushes to joda to help as she dint do it intentionally

JODA - she falls. Down and cries aloud in pain as she hit the ground ...she holds her stomach and starts crying loudly in pain

JALAL - he comes and finds joda in pool of blood ...and crying in pain holding her tummy

HAMEEDA - she comes running " kya hua "

JALAL - he doesn't allow salima to touch joda ...he takes her in his arms and go to room and call doctor...

JODA - due to intense pain she goes unconscious

JALAL - his shirt is drenched with blood ...he gets scared looking at joda ...Tears start flowing down his cheeks ...he pats joda cheek to wake up

JODA - she doesn't respond ... She is still unconscious

DOCTOR - SHEHENSHA the baby in womb is dead ...

JALAL - joda ko kya hua ... She is not talking she is unconscious

DOCTOR - since the baby is dead ...it becomes poisonous ...we have to get the child out soon or else Mallika won't survive ...

JALAL - his world turns upside down after hearing it ... He just freezes. And Tears start flowing down his cheeks continuously ...he tries to wake joda but in vain

DOCTOR - she is trying to push down the baby so soon by putting pressure ...and giving some medicines ...

JODA - she comes to semi conscious but as they are pushing baby down with force she cries out loudly to the pain

JALAL - he holds her tightly continuously weeping


HAMEEDA - she holds JALAL and consoles him " kuch nahi hoga JALAL joda ko ...himmath rako "

DOCTOR - she succeds in taking out the baby ...but joda doesn't come into conscious ... She tries to wake her up ...but she doesn't respond

JALAL - he gets scared and moves joda ...but she doesn't respond ..do something doctor ...wat happened ??

DOCTOR - SHEHENSHA now I can't do anything ...she is serious ...

JALAL - he shouts in anger " what do u mean ...kuch karo ...he kneels down and cries "

DOCTOR - cant tell anything in 24 hours ...let us see... Pray to god

SALIM - he enters room .he doesn't know wat is happening ...He goes to joda and pat her cheek and tell " ammi ammi "

JALAL - he takes salim and hugs him tightly and weep like a kid

HAMEEDA - she tries to console JALAL but he is completely broken ...

IT'S BEEN 20 HOURS ...JODA DINT OPEN HER EYES ...JALAL SAT BESIDE HER ...WITH SALIM SLEEPING IN HIS LAP STARING AT JODA ...


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Edited by puggyy - 11 years ago
SShreShthA thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woww... Interesting precap

DO update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...😃...plz continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update... Very luving
Hope Joda to her eyes soon... Salima shuld be given punishment that moti bai was abt to receive...
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tfs. Nuce. Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AbHer_neha

Nice update...😃...plz continue


Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow itss so interesting please do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love it, please update soon, so interesting, thanks for posting it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting update..
Poor jodha.. 😔
very well written dear..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor jodha😭😭nice dear😃

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