Akdha ff: ur only mine jodha chap-17 pg 87 (2nd Feb'14)

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#521

⭐️⭐️⭐️Res...yippy. Me first! Finally my sweety u have updated...i cant read now i am having superball party ...raat ko bara baje aekant me santi se romantic update padungi ... Lol 😆😆

TANNI KI BACCHI... KYA LIKHA HAI... VOW !!!! 👏👏👏

I loved the way you have created scene😳😳😳... Ur control on language is amazing... 👏👏👏

UR writing looks like written by professional writer... ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

PASSION...PASSION...PASSION... Tani... me raat ko 12 baje ... ekant me padh rahi hu... everything was going so romantic...then turn in to hot... than turn in to passion... I was feeling... entire scene... so hot... and suddenly khatam😲... baad me kuch nahi kyu likha... SR ko detail me description de...lol...ENDING ME KHYA PIYA AUR MAUJ KI...LOL... UN LOGO NE KI... PAR HAME KYA PATA KYA MOJ KI... DETAIL DE...LOL😆😆😆

TANI THIS IS AMAZING!!!! U R VERY VERY TALENTED SWEET HEART...

I LOVE THE PART WHEN SHE WAKE UP WITH SHOCK... AND SCREM MY BABY... AND JALAL COMFORT HER ... It was so touching😃

BEST PART PREGNANCY HORMON😆 JODHA FASI... JALAL KE JAAL ME😆 TELL U THE TRUTH THEY ALREADY IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER... BUDDU KAB SAMJENGE😃

KAM KAJ BHI HO GAYA... SALIM BHI AANE WALA HAI AB TO SAMJO ...ISS PYAAR KO KYA NAAM DU😃

I AM SO HONOURED... YOU HAVE MENTION MY NAME IN YOUR FF😳😳😳 ME AESE HI BLUSH KAR RAHI HU...YOU HOT CHPATER PADH KE...😆 🤗🤗🤗

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago

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Tenzin

@SenpaiNOTICEME

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

MY STRAWBERRY MIXED WITH CHOCOLATE , MY CREAMY VANILLA ICE-CREAM 🤗🤗 Love you for this update 😳😳 it was dreamy , hot and sensuous specially palm kissing scene 😛😛 I find it so cute , dreamy , sensuous and romantic , LOVE EACH TINY BIT OF IT 🤗❤️❤️ But . . . 🤔🤔 Why don't you describe precisely any bit of their hot SR 🤣🤣 Never mind my raspberry , I still have hope to get a hot SR from FF : DESTINY 🤣 , otherwise it was sensuously drowning , it was superb 🤗🤗

P.S : Mein cupcake kab bani 😆😆???

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roshaeldsouza91

@roshaeldsouza91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#523

UNRes...

i so lovved when you used THE DAY😆Lol tanhi😆

jalal was looking at her while she was talking to baby😛 how cute...

and hen below wala part😳 subahallah😃

His eyes were filled with passion. Suddenly Jalal knelt down and moved his face closer to Jodha's tummy "baby! You see your mother wants all your attention and all ur time by herself. So selfish of her! But I have made up my mind that I'll spend the entire day with you.Waise Jodha begum kuch bhul rahi hai..aaj..

😆Superb yaar tani...🤗

pregnancy hormones🤣yeaaay 😆 jalal ko saaamne se sab kuch mil gaya😆 fabulous thought..

such a lovely update..brilliantly written... totally fab it was... haaaye

Aur bhi aisse updates dete reh😆 dil khush kar dia tune😳

Lol i had totally forgot to unres this...😛 thank god update request ke liye aai and saw my res comment😆

thanks tani🤗

arrey waaah dedicated to us... ohhh thanks darling🤗🤗

brilliant it was...😳 SR zindabaaad😆

will unres my comments soon😛 tune bhi bahut tadpaya iss update ke liye😆

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Mrs.KimJongin

@Mrs.KimJongin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#524

Hayeee ❤️

Tahni darling 🤗

sabse pehle ... SR ke deewani khush hui 🤣

It was ... Ah ! Hot , amazing , seductive , fabulous , mindblowing👏

Couldn't stop my eyes to read more and more of it 😆😳

You know me better than anyone knows me 😃😆

And this was perfect for my 15 years old gutter mind 🤣

Bowing down to you my darling 👏

feeling ahhh ☺️

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RayyanAziz

@RayyanAziz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#525

OH MY GOD!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Jalal, Jodha and their baby bump...

Thanks for pm me...keep pm me with the update will you?😃

How I wish the CV is at half as creative as writers in this forum like you...😊

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Senada

@iamsenadam

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Amazing! So dreamy, and romantic. Thanks for updating! 😛

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yurimehta11

@yurimehta11

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#527

nice update tahniat
you wrote everything so beautifully.they did everything and dont confess love.i am eagerly waiting when they say i love you
thanks for pm

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INDU

@GOTforever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#528

yeh SR start hone se phele hi khatam ho gya😭...waise tahni thank u sooo much u wrote at last🤗...love u love u❤️

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Mishika

@Mishika123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#529

Haww !! I didn't read the whole chappie as I'm only 13 !!
But still half of it was superb ! Amazing dear ! recovery ke baad sidha Sr !! Ahaan !! 😉 Update next part sooonnn...