SS-Ek Anokhi Prem Kahani[Chap 1- page 6] 25/06 - Page 3

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Superb
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Hey that was really a nice start. Jaldi jaldi update karo na. :)
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I will try to update this soon! tnx fr the responses!
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first fan fic in JA forum

superb prologue...waiting eagerly...do continue soon...n if possible do pm me 😳
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It was awesome! Update soon and pljjj pm me when u update
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Interesting concept! Please continue soon. 😊
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CHAPTER 1

"Jodha, sach batao, humari chudiyaan kahaan hain?" A fuming Sukanya scolded her sister Jodha.

"Hum sach hi to bata rahe hain Sukanya, humein nahin pata, tumhaari chudiyaan kahaan hai." Jodha tried to pacify her enraged sister.

"Haan aapko to kuch pata hi nahin hota jiji. Na humari chudiyon ka naa humari khushiyon ka."Jhanvi joined Sukanya to scold their elder sister.

"Par Jhanvi humaari galati kya hai? Yahi ki hum uss waqt apne kaksh mein aaye jab tumhaari chudiyaan gaayab hui? To suno uss waqt yahaan bees aur daasiyaan theen. Unhone dekha tha ki hum yahaan humari talwaar lene aaye the." Jodha said among tears.

"Jiji jhooth mat bolo."

"Hum jhooth keh rahein hain na? Theek hai. Ab jab tak tumhaari chudiyaan nahin milti, hum iss kaksh mein paaon tak nahin rakhenge!." Saying this Jodha rushes out of the room, tears in her eyes and her sword in her hand, leaving behind her two sisters, who hated her like hell.

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"Khan Baba, hum Amer ke liye aaj suraj ki pehli kiran ke saath hi rawaana ho jayenge."

"Theek hai Jalal, Humein aap par pura bharosa hai."

"Par Jahaanpanah, aap akele Amer mein! Agar Rajputon ne aapko pehchaan liya toh?"Shariffudin piped in.

"Toh hum unki wo aankhen hi nikaal lenge jo hume pehchaan ne ki gustakhi karein."

"Par baat sahi hai Jalal. Aap bina suraksha ke wahaan jayenge?"

"Jee Khan Baba. Hum wahaan ek sainik ke roop mein jayenge."

"Allah aapki raksha kare."

"Humari shamsheer uss kaam ke liye kaafi hai Khan Baba."

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"Sujamal bhaisa ko bhejiye."

"Wo to nagar ka nirakshan karne gaye hain rajkumari jee." The soldier replied Jodha. Everyone in the practice area was terrified seeing the crying and yet furious Jodha.

"Theek hai, Sujamal bhaisa ke neeji sainik ko bhejiye."

"Jee rajkumari ji."

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It had been over an hour that she had been practicing with the soldier. And it was seriously not going good. She had won all of the three rounds, and yet was not satisfied. The words of her sisters were still going about in her mind. She never understood what she had done to face the wrath from her two sisters, Sukanya and Jhanvi. Yet they never left an opportunity to insult her. She never minded their words, yet they left a wound in her heart.

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It had been over an hour now that he had been watching her practicing. Wow! She was the first girl to have touched Jalal with her sword skills. He was having a hard time resisting his urge to go and chase the soldier out of the field, replace him and have a round with the Rajput princess, who fought as good as any of his soldiers did on the battlefield.

And finally his chance came. The soldier had got a deep gash on his face due to one of Jodha's move. Jodha immediately abandoned her sword and arranged for first aid for the soldier. Jalal was touched by her innocence and care for even an ordinary soldier. He immediately moved towards the practice ground.

"Kya main aapse ek mukable ki khushkismati naseeb kar sakta hun Rajkumari jee?"

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"Kaun ho tum?" Jodha asked the man. He looked like a soldier, but there was a glint of royal pride in his eyes.

"Aapka sevak rajkumari ji." He replied.

"Theek hai. Hum aapse mukable karne ke liye taiyaar hain."

Precap:Jodha-Akbar's fight😉

So how was it!?!

Edited by --ARIA-- - 12 years ago
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Awesome update. Lovely. 👍🏼
Jaldi jaldi update karna. 😳

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