SS-Ek Anokhi Prem Kahani[Chap 1- page 6] 25/06

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Okay, so this is gonna be my first story for this show...will need some time to write it...Hope u will like it!😛 if interested, pls tell me !
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Giving the Character sketch now:

Jodha Bai- The princess of Amer and the daughter of King Bharmal and queen Mainavati. She is a pampered daughter yet retains her values and sanskars. She knows her limits and yet never sits back from crossing them if they are related to her kingdoms' and subjects' safety and welfare. Her humility and beauty are her most prominent traits.

Jalaluddin Mohammed- Later know to be Akbar, he became the king of a mighty empire at the age of 14. His biggest guides are his general Bairam Khan and his foster mother Maham Anga. As a result of seeing ruthless murders right in front of his eyes, and being guided towards pitilessness by Bairam Khan, Jalal has turned into a very cruel and cold blooded King.



Prologue down!

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Prologue:

Hindi:

"Jodha, humare paas aap ke liye ek khabar hai." Mainavati
told her daughter who was resting with her head on her mother's lap.


Hearing this Jodha sat up- " Kya baat hai Maasa?"


"Hum aur apke bapusa ye soch rahe the ki iss gangaur ke
avsar par aapka swayamvar aayojit kiya jaaye. Ab dekhiye na, aapki shaadi ki umar bhi
to ho gayi hai!"


Jodha blushed. Seeing this her mother smiled-" Dekho to
kaise sharmaa rahin hain humaari Jodha."


"Who bas maasa, hum to..hum to'"


"Bus bus aur kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahin hai aapko, hum
apni beti ki man ki ichha khoob samajhte hain. Isiliye aapke baapusaa se kehkar
humne pehle hi aapke swayamvar ki ghoshna kar di hai."


Jodha smiled and again went back to her mother's lap.


" Itni badi ho gayi hain phir bhi ek din bhi humse door
nahin soi. He Devi Maa, raksha karna humari Jodha ki."



Somewhere far away:


"Jahanpanah, mahal ki suraksha abhed(unbreakable) hai. Wahan
koi parinda bhi bina anumati ke parr nahin maar sakta." Sharifuddin told his
emperor Jalal.


"To phir ye sainik ye top ye kis kaam ke? Hum unpar akraman
karna chahte hain Khan Baba." Jalal said to his general Bairam Khan.


"Nahin Jalal aap aisa nahin kar sakte. Ye Rajput apni praja
ki suraksha ke me koi khatra nahin lete. Hume inhi mein se ek banker inke paas
jaana padega.


"Kya matlab hai aapka Khan Baba?"


"Humne suna tha ki kal Rajkumari Jodha Bai ka swayamvar
aayojit kiya jaa raha hai. Ye unke raj tantra aur suraksha chakra ko samajhne
ka achha mauka hai." Bairam Khan said with a sly smile.


"Theek hai Khan Baba, hum wahan Rajrangpur ke rajkumar Nishant
ban kar jayenge."- Jalal replied to his Khan baba, the person whom he respected
the most.


"Ab is Rajputon ko humare gulam hone se koi nahin rok sakta."
Jalal thought in his mind!

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Prologue:

English:


"Jodha, I have a news for you dear." Mainavati
told her daughter who was resting with her head on her mother's lap.


Hearing this Jodha sat up- " What happened Maasa?"


"I and your father were thinking of arranging your swayamvar on the occassion of this Gangaur. Afterall you have attained the age of marriage!"


Jodha blushed. Seeing this her mother smiled-"See, how she is blushing!."


"Maasa, thats because...umm...umm."


"No need to say anything else, I can understand my daughter's every wish. Thats why I have already made an announcement for you swayamvar."


Jodha smiled and again went back to her mother's lap.


" She has grown up, yet she has never slept away from me for even one day. Oh Devi Maa, Protect my Jodha."



Somewhere far away:


"Jahanpanah, the security of the palace is unpenetrable. Even a bird cannot flap its wing there without permission" Sharifuddin told his
emperor Jalal.


"Then of what use are these soldiers and missiles? I want to attack them Khan Baba." Jalal said to his general Bairam Khan.


"No Jalal, you cannot do this. These Rajputs dont take any risks in case of their subjects' safety . We have to pretend to be one of them and go to them.


"What do you mean, Khan Baba?"


"I had heard that the swayamvara of Princess Jodha is to be arranged. It will be a good oppurtunity to understand their political condition and security measures." Bairam Khan said with a sly smile.


"OK Khan Baba, I will go their as the prince of Rajrangpur, Nishant." Jalal replied to his Khan baba, the person whom he respected
the most.


"Now no one can stop these Rajputs from becoming my slaves."
Jalal thought in his mind!



So, how was it guyss? Pata hai bahut bakwaas hai!

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Tanvi.narula thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well i m very much interested..😃.. so just go for it... M waiting...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Area tu yaha bi suru ho gai

ok !
good job!
its nice
abhed -thanks yaar eng me translate kar diya😆

continue!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lizadavidmm

Area tu yaha bi suru ho gai


ok !
good job!
its nice
abhed -thanks yaar eng me translate kar diya😆

continue!


Piya di, I know bekarr hai 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the first ff in the forum! 😎

hoping to see many more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Surely, let the show pick up, and then we ll have lots more :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --ARIA--


Piya di, I know bekarr hai 😆


accha hai...
ab tune yaha likha hai to
padhna to padega hi😉 😆
basically m sabke nai padhugi yaha
but ye to awesome h
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ohh Loved it!!!..Continue soon! Can you PM me?
Prologue is Awesom
Waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ApurvaLovesARVI

Ohh Loved it!!!..Continue soon! Can you PM me?

Prologue is Awesom
Waiting...

Suree thing dear😉

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