~JJKN POETRY CONTEST 2006~ - Page 16

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Apurva

tanu sabar ka phal mitha hota hai.😉😃

Haan.....Bohot mitha!😉😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
Im bored
I wish
I could
Just watch
a lil
JJKN! 😆
fan no 1 jjkn thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago

URGENT ANNOUNCEMENT

NOW LISTEN EVERYONE

MY POEM HAS GONE

SOMEWHERE CEREMONY ONE

AND STUDIO SHOOTING MILAN

WHERE ARMAAN PUT SINDOOR ON JASSI'S MANG

THERE IS ONLY KISSING AND WILDER HUG😉

AND FEW IDHAR UDHAR TOUCH 😉

ARMAANS HANDS ON JASSI CHEEK & HEART

THE MAIN AHEM AHEM YET TO BE WRITTEN😉

AS I HAVE NOT GONE WHEN JASSI IS PREGNANT😉

THAT IS GOA MY DEAR FRIEND

SINCE I WANT TO COMPLETE ENTIRE JJKN IN THIS POEM

WHICH INCLUDE VEDHIKA ALSO WITH AHEM AHEM

AND THAT WILL BE MY JJKN STORY BASED LAST POEM

NOW ALL YOU TELL ME WHAT TO DO

SHALL I POST IT AS IS UPTO

OR INCLUDE GOA AND VEDHIKA

AND COMPLERE THE JJKN STORY TOO

I FOUND ELDERS ARE TOO BESHARAM😉

RATHER THAN US

FOR THE TIME BEING I TOO BUSY😳

SO PLEASE WAIT FOR FEW DAYS

ALL MERE BAAP😡

LOVE - SUCH

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: fan no 1 jjkn

URGENT ANNOUNCEMENT

NOW LISTEN EVERYONE

MY POEM HAS GONE

SOMEWHERE CEREMONY ONE

AND STUDIO SHOOTING MILAN

WHERE ARMAAN PUT SINDOOR ON JASSI'S MANG

THERE IS ONLY KISSING AND WILDER HUG😉

AND FEW IDHAR UDHAR TOUCH 😉

ARMAANS HANDS ON JASSI CHEEK & HEART

THE MAIN AHEM AHEM YET TO BE WRITTEN😉

AS I HAVE NOT GONE WHEN JASSI IS PREGNANT😉

THAT IS GOA MY DEAR FRIEND

SINCE I WANT TO COMPLETE ENTIRE JJKN IN THIS POEM

WHICH INCLUDE VEDHIKA ALSO WITH AHEM AHEM

AND THAT WILL BE MY JJKN STORY BASED LAST POEM

NOW ALL YOU TELL ME WHAT TO DO

SHALL I POST IT AS IS UPTO

OR INCLUDE GOA AND VEDHIKA

AND COMPLERE THE JJKN STORY TOO

I FOUND ELDERS ARE TOO BESHARAM😉

RATHER THAN US

FOR THE TIME BEING I TOO BUSY😳

SO PLEASE WAIT FOR FEW DAYS

ALL MERE BAAP😡

LOVE - SUCH

Chalo ahem ahem nahin,kuch to sahi1 Such di if you r busy then take your time! No worries! I can wait forever for the poem!😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
Take your time Such! I'm sure it'll be worth it! 😉 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
hhaaa
kya poem hai such
nursery rhyme mein maine pad li
take ur time yaar
we need full poem

i told u entire jjkn story in poetry

good ones
Sharila thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
So wonderful to read all. Here is my emotions 😃


Aaj dil bezubaan hai aur nazare bol rahi hai
Kaajal bina meri aakhen suni hai
Payaal bina meri paier suni hai
Sindoor bina meri maang suni hai
Tumhare bina meri zindagi suni hai
Mujhko pata hai
Mujhko khabar hai
Bas tum bekhabar ho

Meri dahekte dil meh tum ho
Meri bahekte kadam meh tum ho
Meri machalte armaan meh tum ho
Mujhko pata hai
Mujhko khabar hai
Bas tum bekhabar ho

Kahe doh tum yeh unkahi
Yeh raat dooriya hai
Jaha pyaar hai wahi darmiya hai
Khamosh aaj yeh meri zubaa hai
Mera pahela pyaar ka yeh nashaa hai

Saso ki jalti shama mei bujha doon
Khud ko mei aisi saza doon
Tumhare bina mei khud ko mita doon
Itna pyaar karoon tumhe ki zindagi bhoola doon

Yeh dil ki lagi meri kaise karoon mei bayaa
Ki aaj dil bezubaan hai aur nazare bol rahi hai
Kya tumko pata hai
Kya tumko khabar hai
Hum karwate ke laheron meh toot ke bikhar rahe hai
Tumhe gale lagaane ke arzoo meh hum pighal rahe hai
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharila

So wonderful to read all. Here is my emotions 😃


Aaj dil bezubaan hai aur nazare bol rahi hai
Kaajal bina meri aakhen suni hai
Payaal bina meri paier suni hai
Sindoor bina meri maang suni hai
Tumhare bina meri zindagi suni hai
Mujhko pata hai
Mujhko khabar hai
Bas tum bekhabar ho

Meri dahekte dil meh tum ho
Meri bahekte kadam meh tum ho
Meri machalte armaan meh tum ho
Mujhko pata hai
Mujhko khabar hai
Bas tum bekhabar ho

Kahe doh tum yeh unkahi
Yeh raat dooriya hai
Jaha pyaar hai wahi darmiya hai
Khamosh aaj yeh meri zubaa hai
Mera pahela pyaar ka yeh nashaa hai

Saso ki jalti shama mei bujha doon
Khud ko mei aisi saza doon
Tumhare bina mei khud ko mita doon
Itna pyaar karoon tumhe ki zindagi bhoola doon

Yeh dil ki lagi meri kaise karoon mei bayaa
Ki aaj dil bezubaan hai aur nazare bol rahi hai
Kya tumko pata hai
Kya tumko khabar hai
Hum karwate ke laheron meh toot ke bikhar rahe hai
Tumhe gale lagaane ke arzoo meh hum pighal rahe hai

awwww sharila di dat was really beautiful. The emotions are so nicely described. Hats of to u di.

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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks Ananya
Shayad dil ki awaaz aisi hi hoti hai 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharila

So wonderful to read all. Here is my emotions 😃


Aaj dil bezubaan hai aur nazare bol rahi hai
Kaajal bina meri aakhen suni hai
Payaal bina meri paier suni hai
Sindoor bina meri maang suni hai
Tumhare bina meri zindagi suni hai
Mujhko pata hai
Mujhko khabar hai
Bas tum bekhabar ho

Meri dahekte dil meh tum ho
Meri bahekte kadam meh tum ho
Meri machalte armaan meh tum ho
Mujhko pata hai
Mujhko khabar hai
Bas tum bekhabar ho

Kahe doh tum yeh unkahi
Yeh raat dooriya hai
Jaha pyaar hai wahi darmiya hai
Khamosh aaj yeh meri zubaa hai
Mera pahela pyaar ka yeh nashaa hai

Saso ki jalti shama mei bujha doon
Khud ko mei aisi saza doon
Tumhare bina mei khud ko mita doon
Itna pyaar karoon tumhe ki zindagi bhoola doon

Yeh dil ki lagi meri kaise karoon mei bayaa
Ki aaj dil bezubaan hai aur nazare bol rahi hai
Kya tumko pata hai
Kya tumko khabar hai
Hum karwate ke laheron meh toot ke bikhar rahe hai
Tumhe gale lagaane ke arzoo meh hum pighal rahe hai

Excellent Sharila di. You made me emotional.👏

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