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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Mayu
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Sorry for the late reply 🤗 .This is the most beautiful os I've read.

God,This scenario is exactly what I am fearing these days.What would be Atharv's reaction when he comes to know of the truth?He is repeating words like,"You waited for me,...etc" and I have a feeling like he'll react like he did in your os.

He will shut everyone from his life,like he did when he knew Vividha and Sujatha made him meet.And it'll be interesting to see how Vividha breaks out his shell and reveal everything. As much as I dread the confrontation and his pain,I eagerly await the aftermath of it.

Loved how Vividha told what she went through for him.The lines were very powerful,Mayu.But I seriously hope Atharv doesn't accuse her of leaving him and getting married. He is the one person who doesn't judge her and hope he doesn't say cruel things to her.That would be so unlike our Atharv.


You're still portraying Sujatha as the old one.Its nice to see the older Sujatha who placed her son above all others.She's been a disappointment in the show in the recent episodes.

All he did was engulf her in his strong arms. She readily embraced him. And that's when she finally cried, cried her heart out. Her fears, her hurt, her tears and her pain washed away. Atharv didn't stop her today. She had to relive her pain, her pent up feelings. All he did was try to shush her down. She cried, making his heart bleed to see his girl breakdown
This part was beyond beautiful, Mayu.When I read this part,I was imagining that moment.All these days,when she suffered,she never let anybody see her in pain.She stood strong for him and for her. She deserves to share it with him,...cos she only let him see in her worst.

I would give anything for them to show this.Lovely is,Mayu.Excuse if there are mistakes.wokayy

P.s:What is chaaploosi?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: NimJ

Hi Mayu
🤗

Sorry for the late reply 🤗 .This is the most beautiful os I've read.

God,This scenario is exactly what I am fearing these days.What would be Atharv's reaction when he comes to know of the truth?He is repeating words like,"You waited for me,...etc" and I have a feeling like he'll react like he did in your os.

He will shut everyone from his life,like he did when he knew Vividha and Sujatha made him meet.And it'll be interesting to see how Vividha breaks out his shell and reveal everything. As much as I dread the confrontation and his pain,I eagerly await the aftermath of it.

Loved how Vividha told what she went through for him.The lines were very powerful,Mayu.But I seriously hope Atharv doesn't accuse her of leaving him and getting married. He is the one person who doesn't judge her and hope he doesn't say cruel things to her.That would be so unlike our Atharv.


You're still portraying Sujatha as the old one.Its nice to see the older Sujatha who placed her son above all others.She's been a disappointment in the show in the recent episodes.

All he did was engulf her in his strong arms. She readily embraced him. And that's when she finally cried, cried her heart out. Her fears, her hurt, her tears and her pain washed away. Atharv didn't stop her today. She had to relive her pain, her pent up feelings. All he did was try to shush her down. She cried, making his heart bleed to see his girl breakdown
This part was beyond beautiful, Mayu.When I read this part,I was imagining that moment.All these days,when she suffered,she never let anybody see her in pain.She stood strong for him and for her. She deserves to share it with him,...cos she only let him see in her worst.

I would give anything for them to show this.Lovely is,Mayu.Excuse if there are mistakes.wokayy

P.s:What is chaaploosi?


Nims baby🤗

Sorry for replying late now. Been busy with my studies.

Thankyou so much baby😳

Yes, its high time that Vividha tells him everything, how much she sacrificed, how much she cried, and all the struggles.

I want her only to cry in front of him, no one else. Not even Sujata.

I was terribly missing the phase 1 Sujata. So she had to make a comeback. 😳

I want her to cry in his arms, only he can soothe her pain, her sorrows and wash away her angst.

PS- Chaaploosi means unfair means😆 Like buttering her up
Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hii!! So I know this is super late, but I finally unres'd my comment 😆
Click Here :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: anu023

Lovely..

That slap..


Thankyou so much Anu🤗

Slap padhke mazaa aa gaya na😆 Dil ko sukoon mil gaya😆


Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: basket_101

Reserved! :)

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Hey Mayu! Firstly, a huuuge apology from me to you for having a left a reserved comment for almost a month 😆
It has really been so crazy busy these days, and then after I point, I'm pretty sure I had just forgotten 😳

Regardless, your OS is really so beautiful Mayu! It tugs at your heartstrings so well. I could feel myself connecting with Vividha with every dialogue she spoke.
You're really done a tremendous job conveying every emotion! It was really such a beautiful piece to read, with the flow as smooth as it could be.

Thank you for the PM! I really appreciate it <3

Please do keep writing 😳

Lots of love,
Hinal 🤗


Hinal🤗

Awww<3 Its okay girl, there are plenty of times I have forgotten to reply on other's OS thread.

I am so glad you really enjoyed the dialogues😳 You are too kind with your words. ❤️

Surely gonna write more:)

Love,
Mayu

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