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Shweta13

@Shweta13

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

MAYU 🤗

This OS is so brilliantly written !! So true to Atharvas character he can get this much angry on Sujata and Vividha but I somehow think this will not happen, he will not judge her this time and infact he will be their for her to cry her heart out to him.

But you have written it so well that I ended up visualizing each bit of it and loved it !

There can be no other love story like Vitharv, Period.

Do write more n more, love to read on them.

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Mayu🤗 Wonderful OS as always! Love ya for writing this..I'm a sucker for emotional stuff, esp when it's two people like ViTharv.
And I've been a lil short of time, so sorry for the delay.

This has gotta be one of my favourites! Atharv has sure bee through a lot. But what Vividha has been through since the separation is no less. that girl has died every second and still lived with just the little hope that Atharv will come back as promised.

To hear him throw these word about letting him die had to be the final straw. No wonder she lashed out. Took out all the pent up anger, all the months of frustration, all her pain of the moments she's had to live without him.

When she mentions her trading her life in exchange for Atharv's life, my heart literally ached. It most definitely not easy.

Vividha has been too strong for too long. She had to breakdown some day..and where better than in Atharv's arms! If his words pricked her heart, it's he alone who can heal her too.

Their concern, their love, their comfort...all of it shows in the smallest of their actions. Like the changing bit, his concern, his ILU..just little things that mean a lot. They amaze me!

I would love to have this play out on the show. They need each other more than anything and anyone else. ViTharv are so so so PRECIOUS!

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harmanjot

@harmanjot

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Mayu this OS is just brilliant & you penned down it very beautifully.🤗

This OS was very emotional & the way you described her pain was actually seen in the show right know. We all know Atharav anger but Vividha knows how to control him.

Well i actually looking out this scene to be play out in phase 3 & hope he will understand & listen her for which circumstances she had to take this decision & the pain she goes through from the day she separated from him.

Vitharav are each other strength & sole reason of their existence. She forgets how to live witbout him. Vividha once told to Atharav " Tumahre bina jeena to kya , mar bhi nai sakti. Agar woh tum nahi to koi nahi". The intensity of these dialogues shows how she deeply loves Atharav.

Vitharav hugs , their passoniate kiss & that three letters word ILU which she desperately wants to listen in phase1 are always special.❤️

Mayu what i loved more in your OS is that you make it visualise with your writings. You have excellent creative writings skills.

I thanks IF that here i have found many wonderful writers with their unique thoughts & expression.

Edited by harmanjot - 8 years ago

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sweetygirl28
Very well written mayu. I could imagine this happening in the show. Good job

Thankyou so much Sweety🤗

I am so waiting for this to happen, Atharv sometimes is impulsive, so he lashing out and Vividha giving him back will be really important. That's when she will start healing. 😳

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: cool_kriti
Wow!! what an amazing OS!! I loved every bit of it 😃

Kriti🤗

Thankyou so much😳

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: dreamer.ankita
Once again a beautiful OS Mayu🤗
Loved it!❤️

Vividha has really suffered a lot without Atharv and its now time for her to cry her heart out infront of her Man!
No matter how angry Atharv might get but in the end he will understand vividha's pain and be right there for her!

I guess we are very close to the revelation in the show! Its going to be one heartbreaking moment between the two!

Ankita🤗

Thankyou so much😳

Yes, the poor soul has suffered way beyond any person can take. Only he can cure her, his presence, his love and his embrace. She needs him and he will be back.

I am such a sadist but this scene will be Brilliant if ShiVik do it:)

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: saharsonu
👏 OH My God i want this OS as it is in the show after all nataks and tanashas.I jope we will get to see this in the show i love your OS Mayu and u know this.I cant describe in words so leave it.
After this Oas waiting gor next Os is so hard for me.
Love Love Love Love 😳

Sonu🤗

Thankyou 😳

Next OS I don't know. Hopefully soon!

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: prabharajani
mayu
🤗

that was quite emotional and lovely OS

Vividhas helplessness, her sacrifice, her pain and love is very well depicted

atharv some times gets angry without thinking rather we can say he is a quite impulsive human being

sujatha as always understanding mother and chachi

itheir love and pain are beautifully expressed

thoroughly liked it

thks for the OS and keep writing and this OS came in the right occasion

Prabha Di🤗

Thankyou so much😳

Yes, emotional OS are my forte. I am a sucker for such scenes😳

Yes, in many scenes we have seen an impulsive Atharv. But its only each other who can calm the other person down, take away their pain.

Writing this OS was because I want to see such a scene, where Vividha lashes out to him, I can imagine the intensity watching ShiVik perform⭐️

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Ultimatevikku7
Mayu...🤗 another great os 👏
Wow , a really nice scene...how would vividha calm atharv when he will realize what had happened to vividha...I was waiting for such scene...and there comes your OS 😳
While reading your os , I saw that scene...that's the specialty of yours...I see the scene that you write...I didn't feel that I'm reading...it's just like real 👏

Sujatha , the one who corrects atharv's mistake...and tells that this is wrong...you have also shown that...and the way atharv understand...

Love you and your OS Mayu ❤️

Zuhu🤗

Thankyou so much😳

I actually too visualise it before I pen it down, maybe I can give you those intricate details of the scene:)

Yes, I want this Sujata back who used to make her son understand what all these two women went through, she is the one who will always show her son the right path.

And Vividha lashing was very necessary, finally she said what has been kept in her heart for long. Those feelings had to come and what a better way than to cry in front of the man who will take care of her.

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: _innocent_
Brilliantly written -Mayu- I absolutely loved it! I was reading it on my way home tonight...do write more, as it is you who is doing a massive favor to VITHARV fans as we are being served with your great writing!😳

Julie🤗

Its so nice to have you reply on my OS after GHSP days :D

Thankyou 😳

Writing is my passion and for such a passionate couple, I will pen down many more:)

Love,

Mayu