ViTharv OS- Apology! - Page 3

Originally posted by: _KOMAL

What a Beautiful OS!! I loved every line!!!! Hope this happens in the show

Originally posted by: Shweta13

MAYU 🤗

This OS is so brilliantly written !! So true to Atharvas character he can get this much angry on Sujata and Vividha but I somehow think this will not happen, he will not judge her this time and infact he will be their for her to cry her heart out to him.

But you have written it so well that I ended up visualizing each bit of it and loved it !

There can be no other love story like Vitharv, Period.

Do write more n more, love to read on them.

Originally posted by: baubles

Mayu🤗 Wonderful OS as always! Love ya for writing this..I'm a sucker for emotional stuff, esp when it's two people like ViTharv.
And I've been a lil short of time, so sorry for the delay.

This has gotta be one of my favourites! Atharv has sure bee through a lot. But what Vividha has been through since the separation is no less. that girl has died every second and still lived with just the little hope that Atharv will come back as promised.

To hear him throw these word about letting him die had to be the final straw. No wonder she lashed out. Took out all the pent up anger, all the months of frustration, all her pain of the moments she's had to live without him.

When she mentions her trading her life in exchange for Atharv's life, my heart literally ached. It most definitely not easy.

Vividha has been too strong for too long. She had to breakdown some day..and where better than in Atharv's arms! If his words pricked her heart, it's he alone who can heal her too.

Their concern, their love, their comfort...all of it shows in the smallest of their actions. Like the changing bit, his concern, his ILU..just little things that mean a lot. They amaze me!

I would love to have this play out on the show. They need each other more than anything and anyone else. ViTharv are so so so PRECIOUS!

Originally posted by: harmanjot

Mayu this OS is just brilliant & you penned down it very beautifully.🤗

This OS was very emotional & the way you described her pain was actually seen in the show right know. We all know Atharav anger but Vividha knows how to control him.

Well i actually looking out this scene to be play out in phase 3 & hope he will understand & listen her for which circumstances she had to take this decision & the pain she goes through from the day she separated from him.

Vitharav are each other strength & sole reason of their existence. She forgets how to live witbout him. Vividha once told to Atharav " Tumahre bina jeena to kya , mar bhi nai sakti. Agar woh tum nahi to koi nahi". The intensity of these dialogues shows how she deeply loves Atharav.

Vitharav hugs , their passoniate kiss & that three letters word ILU which she desperately wants to listen in phase1 are always special.❤️

Mayu what i loved more in your OS is that you make it visualise with your writings. You have excellent creative writings skills.

I thanks IF that here i have found many wonderful writers with their unique thoughts & expression.

Originally posted by: VIMAL.M

Very beautifully written .Loved it.

Originally posted by: ARCHRE

Mayu...🤗

I loved this OS ... Actually when i read this I could connect to everything that was happening with Vitharv... He can be angry at all the wrong times and yaa... She can surely slap him... She is the only FL who has slapped her guy multiple times and then fallen in love with him completely ...😆

I had written on ur last ... but late ... guess you may have not see it ... my thought still holds ...Copy pasting it here ...I cant believe I had asked for this OS on these lines in my last message on ur post and here I am reading it 😳 ...Thank you

Copy Pasted from my last comments below

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I have read the last few OS that you have written after September and this is what I feel

What I love about your OS in general

the FEELS it generates for a reader ...

There is a certain characterization in the show which we all connect to and we love ...

Your OS captures that exact character traits and that is what touches the heart of a reader like me.I feel it is easy to get a viewer connected with the visuals , but to get the same feel and emotion when one reads an OS is very difficult and your OS gives one those feels completely ...

It goes to an extent that we can actually visualize a scene just by reading it and feel good . Thats the beauty of your OS . It sometimes leaves you wanting those exact things to happen in the show 😳 ... that means you have progressed a step forward than the show itself 😊

The character development in sync ...and a beauty to read ...

You have captured Vividhas Boldness very well ... Atharvs weaknesses very well and more than that the essence of their relationship.

You have a way with words and all the OS ends with a feel that leaves you completely at peace ..Thanks for all that you write and the opportunity that we get to read 😳

Can I demand an OS?...Seeing where the show is at the moment , there will be soon a point of recovery for Atharv .Vividha and the Atharv Sujatha coming face to face for the first time after their scheduled wedding day ... I would love it if you could pen that down as an OS ...I am absolutely sure it s going to be amazing ...😳 ...

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Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

Thanks so much
That was really good
So real
Loved it
Thanks again to our only forum writer