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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Always.

Intriguing story. Ending paragraph 👍🏼


Thanks! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Awsm os dear...
Its totally different idea...
Its like experiment,,but its amazing piece of Ur writing skill...
Fully enjoyed it...the way U described whole scenario,emotions...
Specially in unknown condition Sidharth trust Roshni n didn't want to hurt her...even her tears made him restless...
Superb wrk dear..
Keep rocking


Thank you so much alpana... Happy that you liked it! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Personally speaking pal , this doesn't deserve to be a one shot. It deserves to be a story and I hope , like really hope you will continue it!😃

Coming to it , well reading the first para I had only one thing in my mind , that how I had written almost the same starting once and deleted all of it and not posted it again!😆 WEIRD , how I wrote almost the same thing😉

Now finally the story , it was really nice , how his confusion was described by you , his pain , his pain after seeing her in pain!👏

Then finally he getting up and saying his name , the time he took to say her name and what all happened in between that was perfect in my views😳 The doctor saying I am sorry and he not being able to take her being hurt and blurting out her name was wonderful

But he really doesn't remember a thing , I so wish you continue this as I wanna read more❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aayu27

Personally speaking pal , this doesn't deserve to be a one shot. It deserves to be a story and I hope , like really hope you will continue it!😃

Haha i can't continue it, it's difficult for me to write like this 😆 But thanks!

Coming to it , well reading the first para I had only one thing in my mind , that how I had written almost the same starting once and deleted all of it and not posted it again!😆 WEIRD , how I wrote almost the same thing😉

Great minds think alike, that's all i can say 😉

Now finally the story , it was really nice , how his confusion was described by you , his pain , his pain after seeing her in pain!👏

Thanks aayu glad you liked the emotions in it 😳

Then finally he getting up and saying his name , the time he took to say her name and what all happened in between that was perfect in my views😳 The doctor saying I am sorry and he not being able to take her being hurt and blurting out her name was wonderful

Yes he just wanted to protect her from her hurt. 😃

But he really doesn't remember a thing , I so wish you continue this as I wanna read more❤️

Yeah he doesn't remember anything but he has her, he will remember soon 😳

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