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babithaj

@babithaj

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Its so gripping Aayu, pls continue, we are waiting...

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aparnalokam

@aparnalokam

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

such an emotional update loved it baby

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Harmony10

@Harmony10

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

I love the way you write emotional update! Loved it

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prathe

@prathe

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Starry i loved it the depth of her inner turmoil u have written it very well and i feel end was perfect as its not always easy to give second chance👏

dill kush kitta😳

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tomandjerry16

@tomandjerry16

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

AWESOME os..loved it a lot..😳😳

Beautifully written..👏👏..Roshni's emotions were soo beautifully described..loved it😳❤️😳

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GOOGLU

@GOOGLU

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Awsm os..
Again mindblowing piece of ur amazing writing skill..
Its really amazing os wdout any dialogue...
Vry beautifully expressed Rosh's emotions n feeling..
Thnx alot for pm
Keep rocking

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chandana

@Just_Smile

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

nice one first time i read an OS like this n its really good n i liked that line "our heart is selfless n selfish being"😛 so right😉

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skinnypal

@skinnypal

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Wow!! That was amazing! You wrote some beautiful lines.. Which were just wow! See m having no words to say how good it was! Do write more like this! And the story was good, her feelings and hurt could be understood and though it ended in a sad note... I really lovedd the last para! Was it him or was it not?? U left it to the imagination!!

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Swarna

@Swarna_99

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Amazing os. .

Incredibly beautifully written. ...

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