SidNi SS :Love In A Cruise Ch 6 pg 27 * upd 24/11* - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: heemasomani

Interesting

continue soon


Thank u..😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AWESOME start...loved it a lot😳😳
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Originally posted by: madhuharini

very much emotional and cute start of this SidNi story Ayu👏😃 I loved it... their pain & tears can be realized very much thro' ur words. Sid in Roshni's lap part is so awesomely written😳😃 Now waiting for the next one Ayu


Thanks abi!! I am glad u are liking it..😳 oh that's a nice compliment that you can relate to my words! Hehe ya sid in her lap
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Originally posted by: kitty16

AWESOME start...loved it a lot😳😳


Thank you!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Starry!!😆
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This is a great love story! Look forward for the next one
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Originally posted by: TTSV

This is a great love story! Look forward for the next one



thank you so much..i hope you like next one too!😊
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Part 2

"Hmm so the story of my heart-break is related to this cruise ship only." he started lying his head in her lap deriving comfort from her touch.

"I loved Shanaya alot. She also loved me ,we were in a relationship since 3 years but I don't know why she denied that day." he told Roshni his story and went back in the days.

Flashback

"I have to tell her everything today. Come on Sid ,be a man!" he looked at the ring he had got for her and smiled thinking how will she react.

He went out at the deck to see her standing and was happy to see the decorations were beautifully done. He showed a thumbs-up to the manager and he went away leaving the two love birds happy in their own world.

"Shanaya ,I want to say something to you." Siddharth said making her turn towards him. She saw him sitting on his knees and before he could utter more she started speaking.

"Look Siddharth ,please don't tell you are proposing me?" she said in a straight face and the smile vanished off Siddharth's face.

"I am not ready for this and if you are here to propose then it's better we part ways as we don't understand each other." she said and left him.

He followed her and said in a broken voice ,"It's completely fine Shanaya if you don't want to say yes right now but someday you will na? I'll wait for that day!"

She shook her head and said ,"NO!"

Present

Siddharth's voice got stuck and he couldn't continue further. Roshni was devasted seeing his state ,she stroked his hair in a bid to calm him.

"She just said No?" she asked knowing it will hurt him talking more but he had to get it out to move on in life.

"She said No ,I'll marry where my parents want. I won't marry you!" he completed in a drunk voice and she couldn't help but feel awful for him.

He started to go out from there ,he got up and took his guitar. He reached 2 steps ahead when a hand pulled him back into a warm ,tight embrace.

"Some people don't stay in your life forever. They are just in it to use you!" she calmed him down and didn't realize that her problems were there too.

"Tumhari story?" he asked still in his drunk state. She knew he had confessed all because he was not in his senses.

She didn't have the guts to share her story with any stranger she had just met. She started to leave ,her eyes trying to ignore his gaze.

He caught her hand and she came bumping in his chest ,her hair tingle with his face and she was startled by the sudden closeness. She tried to leave him but he didn't budge.

"Please leave me Siddharth." she tried but he just shook his head and she realized he was very stubborn.

"What if I go now and meet you later?" she tried to reason him out but he just denied again. She just left all hopes.

He started to speak and she listened closely ,"You have to listen one song of mine." he said and she sighed in relief and nodded.

Baatein Kuchh Ankahee Si, Kuchh Ansuni Si Hone Lagi

Kaabu Dil Pe Raha Na, Hasti Hamaari Khone Lagi

Wo Wo O O O O O...

Shaayad Yahi Hai Pyaar...

He stringed his guitar and his voice mesmerized her again. She started to hum along without her knowledge and he smiled at her. The effect of alcohol started to wear off ,and he stared back at her intensely.

Baatein Kuchh Ankahee Si, Kuchh Ansuni Si Hone Lagi

Kaabu Dil Pe Raha Na, Hasti Hamaari Khone Lagi

Wo Wo O O O O O...

Shaayad Yahi Hai Pyaar...

He got up and kept his guitar aside ,he held her hand and asked her for a dance. She obliged and they danced on the moonlit night on the cruise ship's deck forgetting all the pain they had ever felt.

She left him ,bid adieu to him and exited the deck ,she was in the corridors but his voice was still ringing in her ears. She had a wide smile on her face!

Tu Hi Meri Roshani Hai, Tu Hi Chiraag Hai

Dheere Dheere Mit Jaayega, Halka Sa Daag Hai

Yeh Zeher Bhi Yuun Piya Hai, Jaise Sharaab Ho

Wo Wo O O O O O...

Shaayad Yahi Hai Pyaar...

He sang imagining her and saying her name made him smile more and more. He picked up his guitar and started going out hoping everything would be fine one day. She had made him hope and the best part was he wasn't even drunk but was just acting in front of her.

He ruffled his hair thinking what an eventful day he had. He decided he would confront her the next day and ask about her story.

"A new day brings with it a new hope ,hope that whatever the problem it always has a solution!"

Roshni got up to the sun's rays falling on her face. She had never been more happy then this day today! She started to get ready thinking she will meet him again.

She stopped her excitement in the tracks realising a certain things she should have thought about earlier.

1. He was drunk the previous night and maybe he wouldn't remember a thing.

2. If he did remember then he would surely ask for her story and she wasn't ready to share it!

She decided not to go out in case the 2ND option was right. She didn't want to take unnecessary problems on her shoulder.

Siddharth was searching the ship all over for any sign of her. Finally he decided that she would surely come for the breakfast so he waited at the dining area.

He saw her entering after a mammoth wait of about 10 minutes and his breath stuck in his throat seeing her looking simply breathtaking.

He waved at her but she ignored him ,he smirked to himself thinking how he wouldn't give up and would surely get her to talk.

"Hi." he went to sit beside her and she shifted uncomfortably in her place. He noticed this and being the chivalrous gentleman he was he decided to back off.

"If you are feeling awkward I can go." he said getting up but she held his hand and he was shocked seeing her do that.

She realized her mistake and released his hand immediately. He smiled and sat back ,he decided to start his acting again.

"So you remember we had met in the corridors? You were about to fall?" he questioned her and noticed her expressions changing in a jiffy.

"Uhmm ya ya thank you for that day." she replied suddenly calm and composed thinking he didn't remember anything of last night.

"It's nothing really ,BTW I am Siddharth ,Siddharth Khurrana and the beautiful girl sitting across me would be?" he asked holding her hand.

She blushed at his actions and replied ,"Roshni." he smiled seeing her blush and was left in a dilemma as to what to say next.

"Uh so Umm Roshni. You.." he stammered his way ,trying to form a coherent question but failing miserably.

"So have you had any boyfriend before?" he asked in a straight voice and looked at her to capture her expression but she was no longer looking at him.

Her eyes were glued to the door and he was confused seeing tears in her eyes. He saw a guy staring back at her and realized what the matter actually was.

Before he could console her she got up and said ,"Excuse me." and left out rushing past the guy standing at the door.

Siddharth rushed behind her but not before glaring at him. He was sure now that she had suffered a heart-break and this guy was the reason.

Naata Samajhe Yeh Dil Mera

Jaanu Na Jaanu Na Isako Kya Huva

Teri Baahon Ki Phir Se Dhunde Yeh Panaah

Tu Hai Kahaan, Tu Hai Kahaan

O Meri Jaan...

"Roshni listen wait up!" he said following her and trying to catch up with her but she entered her room and locked the room from inside.

"Listen open the goddamn door Roshni. I want to talk to you ,I want to calm you down just like you did yesterday remember?" he said banging on the door helplessly.

She without caring opened the door and hugged him tight. He soothed her back trying to lighten her sobs and be with her ,just like she had been with him!

Edited by Aayu27 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yoyo starry ne ruise wala love likha🥳

for u frm mircih thses lines

staary ka love in cruise hai mere dil ke khaas😳

kyuki ise likne wali starry dikthi hai asmaan me humesha aas paas

iske stry hero heroin ko lathi hai humesha paas paass aurr paas end mein😳

kuch line mara hai starry adjust karlo😛
Edited by prathe - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: prathe

yoyo starry ne ruise wala love likha🥳

for u frm mircih thses lines

staary ka love in cruise hai mere dil ke khaas😳

kyuki ise likne wali starry dikthi hai asmaan me humesha aas paas

iske stry hero heroin ko lathi hai humesha paas paass aurr paas end mein😳

kuch line mara hai starry adjust karlo😛


Aww mirchi ,aise comments bring a big smile on my face!😃 starry hai aasmaan mein humesha aas paas aww😳 haha laati hai hero heroine Ko paas pass!😆 thank you!🤗

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