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skinnypal

@skinnypal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: aparnalokam

while reading i was bit confused aft readg whole part i was lyk🤣u made dem criminals 😆😆

hahaha.. they can't be all goody goody na.. see i made misha suffer too 😎

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Harmony10

@Harmony10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

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Such a unique thrilling story! Bablu Chachu and Yash gay 🤣 Yucky couple! It's hard to imagine those brainless souls in this position 😆 I didn't suspect Siddarth being the criminal but was certain that Roshni has some connection in killing her Chachu. Misha got fooled and arrested for the crime she haven't even committed lmao. I was dying at Yash's reaction when Sid was teasing and revealing his truth to Misha 😆 But what a superb plan SidNi made to get the properties in Roshni's name. I seriously thought Sid a was decent investigator but instead both of them turned out to be shrewd criminals 😆 I love how you structured your story. It was fabulous!

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Karishma_Kumari

@Karishma_Kumari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

It's all SidNi plan... hahahaha... totally different... love it...

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skinnypal

@skinnypal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Karishma_Kumari
It's all SidNi plan... hahahaha... totally different... love it...

Haan it is.. lol.. thanks!! :)

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Aayushi

@A.Green

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

I got to know in the middle only that Roshni had killed him but Sid too was involved?😲 had no idea😆

Bablu and yash gay🤣 lol hilarious pal😉

I loved the storyline and how it played out..write more like this.

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Stephanie

@stephie34

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

🤣...that is for making Yash and Bablu gay

❤️...that is for making Misha look guilty

👏...this is for making SId and Roshni the bad guys in the awesome but yet thrilling crime story

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skinnypal

@skinnypal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies
I got to know in the middle only that Roshni had killed him but Sid too was involved?😲 had no idea😆
Bablu and yash gay🤣 lol hilarious pal😉
I loved the storyline and how it played out..write more like this.

really middle of the story? how? 😛 Oh i can't separate SidNi u see 😆 If one was bad, the other had to be too😉 thanks. more like this? 😲 let's see!

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skinnypal

@skinnypal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: stephie34
🤣...that is for making Yash and Bablu gay

Hahahaha 😳 they are anyway useless 😛

❤️...that is for making Misha look guilty

Aww thanks!! Yes Misha suffered finally somewhere 😉

👏...this is for making SId and Roshni the bad guys in the awesome but yet thrilling crime story
Thank you Stephie...love bad guys! 😳

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Aayushi

@A.Green

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: skinnypal

really middle of the story? how? 😛 Oh i can't separate SidNi u see 😆 If one was bad, the other had to be too😉 thanks. more like this? 😲 let's see!

Ya just intuition..😊

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Wow pal... you blew me away with this os👏

Superb one... throughout mystery.. lol the ending part of SidNi was like😲 I didn't knew about how to react... shock or laugh or enjoy...🤣 and and and yash and bablu .. oh God yeh kia golmal tha🤣🤪🤣

on a serious note it was outstanding👏 I loved iy

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