SidNi OS Series : Angels & Demons *OS#3 updated pg 18 *31/08 - Page 3

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Wowww...new story...d series s soo unique nd diff. .waiting for d 1st part eagerly...😃
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Thnxxx..😊
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Originally posted by: prathe

wow starry angels and demons i loved it excited to see the conflicts btw angel and demons of minds

starry i may be late in commenting to u r updates pls dnt mind😳


Thank you mirchi , glad u are excited!😉
Oh it's okk , take your time in commenting..
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Originally posted by: Abinaya12

Wowww...new story...d series s soo unique nd diff. .waiting for d 1st part eagerly...😃


Thanks😳 I have written some part of it!
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Wow new os
Excited to read
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Originally posted by: aparnalokam

Wow new os
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Happy you are excited..😉
Wait till tomorrow!
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New os series😃...I love the new concept😳
It is soo interesting...I'm excited😃
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New os series😃...I love the new concept😳

It is soo interesting...I'm excited😃


thankss😉 glad u find it new and exciting..
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OS #1 Sloppy Coffee

Red:Demon

Blue:Angel


*Sorry if the colours confuse you guys and so sorry if the scores bother you!😆 Enjoy reading!*


"Hey hey dude wait up.." Siddharth asked the taxi driver to stop when the demon inside him came out.

'No Siddharth you can't go in taxi , think about your image in front of Roshni. It's your bloody first date!'

'No you should take it , Roshni won't mind simple things , she loves simplicity!' his angel said and went into a dreamy mode.

'Arre what are you saying ,misguiding him and already lost in Roshni's dreamworld.' the demon fought and the angel answered him in a calm tone.

'I am not misguiding , it's just a common logic that a girl hates it when a guy is late for a date!' the demon glared at the angel Sid.

"Shut up both. I am taking the taxi and that's final." Siddharth said loosing his cool but when he turned around his mouth was left hanging open and the angel shaking his head said , 'See you made him miss the taxi!'

'Oh yay as if he was even going to take it.' Demon Sid smirked while Siddharth was left in a dilemma as to what to do now that's when demon Sid came to his rescue.

'You should take that cycle.' demon said pointing to someone's cycle.

'What you can't steal it you mad man.' the angel questioned and continued , 'And hello cycle has class and taxi doesn't??'

Siddharth looked to the demon demanding an answer when he found him smirking , 'Obviously because Siddharth and Roshni have memories that belong to a cycle!'

Siddharth smiled and the angel knew the demon had won the match and it was 1-0 now. Siddharth was soon at the date's location and Roshni spotted him on a cycle.

Her angel said ,' How nice of Siddharth to come on a cycle WOW. It brings back memories!'

Roshni smiled at her angel's words when her demon said ,'Huh I guess he forgot to bring a gift!'

"Ofcourse he would have brought a gift!" Roshni said to herself when she saw Siddharth approaching her.

She put up a smile as he reached at his back to take out a bouquet of orchids for her! Her angel laughed at the irritated look on the demon's face. Now it was 1-0 for Roshni's angel.

'Dude the bouquet worked that's cool.' the angel Sid said and the scores became 1-1.

"Let's go" Sid said shooing off the irritating voices in his mind. "Baby you look gorgeous" Siddharth whispered in her ear as they walked in the cafe.

"Siddharth what do you want to drink?" Roshni asked as she was going through the menu.

She looked up too see Siddharth lost in his own sweet world. He was staring at her , hands on the table like a love-sick puppy.

"Oh hello Mr.Dazed Out what will you drink?" she asked snapping him out of his thoughts by clicking her fingers in front of his face.

"Uhh whatever you like." he said in a reflex and his angel side showed him a thumbs up on coming up with such a nice pick-up line.

"Well I'll have a choco-cookie slush!" she said to the waiter and Siddharth added , "Make that two please."

The waiter left when Siddharth reached across the table and held her hand softly. Roshni had a blush adoring her face when her angel disturbed her.

'Isn't it too fast on his part to hold her hand 10 minutes in the date?' the angel stood crossing her arms.

'Oh please today's generation is very fast and how does it matter as long as they both are happy happy!' the demon countered and made the scores level , 1-1.

The waiter came with the order and they both were staring at each other and slipping the drinks.

"Roshni why are you making these weird sounds?" he asked giggling at her way of drinking. She was constantly making gurgling sounds.

"Stop making them , see people are staring." he said laughing now forgetting his drink while she just shook her head.

Siddharth stood a little up and bent towards her while she eyed him carefully analyzing what he was upto.

"You are like a baby!!" he said wiping the coffee of her face. She shivered at his touch while he wiped it off carefully.

She smiled at him shyly , her drink was forgotten. "Your baby.." she said and showed him a kiss.

"Okay baby by the way it's really awesome! The drink I mean." he said while she realized he had changed their drinks.

"Why am I getting your glass?" Roshni asked angrily. Siddharth just sipped it and said ,"Baby my glass has more na?"

Roshni just nodded her head and had a glint in her eyes ,she got so happy. "But I gave it to you coz I wanted your glass."


His explanation made her to flush so much. The waiter came and kept the cookies that were complimentary with the order.

"Oh no!!" Siddharth said as the waiter collided with another waitress and she spilled her coffee on Sid.

"I am so sorry Sir." the waitress came forward and helped Siddharth offering him a tissue to wipe off.

"It's ok don't fret so much please." Siddharth calmed her down unknown that Roshni was constantly throwing daggers in his direction.

"How dare this girl stick like a fevicol to my Siddharth?" Roshni said to herself. Her angel and demon came back to life.

'It's okay, she is just a waitress. Calm down , take a deep breath!' the angel called out when the demon laughed.

'Oh please don't just sit , go and get him back. She is fevicol not fevistick that she is permanent!' the demon advised.

Roshni nodded at the demon inside her while the angel puffed and gave way to the demon's win , 2-1.

"Don't bother , I'll help him. Come baby I will take you to the washroom." Roshni said and turned to the waitress again ,"Where is it?" she asked not so politely.

While she was taking him to the washroom he was just looking on totally surprised. She had always avoided calling him names publicly , he wondered what happened today.

'It's called jealousy baby!' the demon in him mimicked Roshni's voice while Siddharth stifled a laugh.

'You should not make her insecure Siddharth!' the angel voices out but the demon knew he had won.

'Rubbish..you should make her more jealous!' the demon said smirking. Siddharth hi-fived with him and demon celebrated his victory 2-1.

"Roshni , wasn't the girl so helpful?" he asked while Roshni tried her best to hide her emotions.

"Why?? I am the one who is helping you here?" she asked taking him inside the washroom and washing his shirt lightly.

"You look cute when jealous." Siddharth laughed and she sprinkled water on his face as a punishment for teasing her.

"I was not jealous , just possessive." she replied while he asked ," And what exactly is the difference?"

"I'll show you , wait!!" she said and started hitting him when he held her hands. She was still laughing as his shirt had got more soaked in her wish to play holi with him.

'Sid take out your shirt.' the demon said jumping excitedly. Siddharth started to do it when the angel interrupted.

'Dude have you lost it? No that just proves you are masochistic and male-dominating.' the angel explained while the demon rolled his eyes at the idiotic explanation.

Sid had removed his shirt by then and Roshni was red like a tomato. He held her to the washbasin and her back collided with it.

Their bodies were touching leaving no gap for anyone in between them. Roshni was ogling at his bare body while he was letting her do so happily.

'Kiss her Siddharth!' the demon said but sid was in two minds. Would it be too soon?

'No ask her for permission. She will love it.' the angel told and he nodded giving way to the score getting 2-2. Siddharth leaned into her and said , "May I?"

Roshni just looked on shocked when her angel popped up.

'Wow how cute of him to ask permission.' the angel clapped mentally while Roshni smiled at this.

'How unlike a man, he should have straight-away kissed you.' the demon said huffing puffing.

"You may baby." Roshni said removing her mind from all thoughts just breathing in the fragrance of him , the essence of him.

The angel Roshni had levelled scores with the demon now 2-2 and she was dancing, so had angel Siddharth , but the scores didn't matter . All that did was the first kiss they were sharing.

Siddharth pulled her towards him and pecked on her lips lightly. She closed her eyes and a smile came up on her lips instantly. He kissed her as if she were a petal while she flew away in his intensity. The kiss turned into something very special as Roshni started pulling him closer by his hair while he laughed into the kiss.

The two of them were laughing as well as kissing and enjoying it too much. There was a knock on the washroom's door and their laughter increased much more.

"Who is disturbing our moment?" asked Siddharth irritated while Roshni came on her toes and kissed his forehead.

"Maybe the waitress who was making me jealous." she said and he giggled seeing her accepting it..

"Sir actually I wanted to say sorry again!" it was indeed the waitress on the door of the washroom.

Roshni was boiling when Siddharth held her waist and said , "No it's okay you made me spend some lovely moments with my girl-friend. So I should be thanking you." he said.

Roshni eyed him while he winked at her. She blushed at the meaning of his words!

"Let's go baby?" Siddharth asked and took her out leaving the shocked girl behind.

"I would have killed that bloody girl you know?" she said resting her head on his shoulders.

"Oho my volcano..by the way can we order one more drink?" he asked making her raise her eyebrows.

"Why you want to see that girl again?" she asked folding her arms angrily.

"No , I want to have a drink with you again. And this time we will order only one." he said smirking.

"Why you want to save money or what?" she asked playing with his hands.

"Huh Silly girl!! I want to taste the coffee better." he said and took out one cappuccino from his back.

She blushed at his remark and took it eagerly replying , "Even I would love it that way."

"Then why waste time??" he said and they both went on a long drive with the sloppy coffee.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW. This was amazing. I loved it - would be an understatement! The story was sweet and simple, filled with their nok-jhoks and romance! The washroom scene, you wrote it down so well and i really liked all the cheesy lines sid used to make her blush! 😳 That was indeed cute of him! Especially when he speaks to the waitress when they leave the washroom! Coming to the Angel/Demon concept you wrote it brilliantly, and it actually made it much more interesting! I liked the score card they were keeping.. you did not over do it or under do it. Everything was perfect, and i loved their sloppy coffee date!! 👏

P.S Should i even cheer on being first now? 😆
Edited by skinnypal - 9 years ago

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