SidNi OS Series : Angels & Demons *OS#3 updated pg 18 *31/08 - Page 4

Originally posted by: skinnypal

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WOW. This was amazing. I loved it - would be an understatement! The story was sweet and simple, filled with their nok-jhoks and romance! The washroom scene, you wrote it down so well and i really liked all the cheesy lines sid used to make her blush! 😳 That was indeed cute of him! Especially when he speaks to the waitress when they leave the washroom! Coming to the Angel/Demon concept you wrote it brilliantly, and it actually made it much more interesting! I liked the score card they were keeping.. you did not over do it or under do it. Everything was perfect, and i loved their sloppy coffee date!! 👏

P.S Should i even cheer on being first now? 😆

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

Lol Pal I am still laughing on ur P.S.🤣
Glad you liked it so much..😳 happy you did not think i overdid it coz i thought i did😆 chessy sid , happy you liked him! washroom scene , i don't know how these things come in my mind😲
Above all i am happy that you think the main concept made it more interesting..
I love your comment pal just like you loved their date!❤️ Thank you..

Originally posted by: rachana10

Wow starry!!! Its just amazing..😛 I loved it to the core..😳 Demons-angels parts were too funny and scores hahahaha..😆😆 Sidni part was too romantic especially in washroom..☺️❤️ And sid was thanking the waitress..😉 Now we have to wait till Monday for the next one na..😳

Originally posted by: skinnypal

Haha what to do aayu, nowadays there is no competition 😉 Nope it was perfectly put and truly speaking angels and demons voice made it much more interesting! Umm.. i guess you were wishing it happened with you, thats y its coming in ur mind 😆😳😉

Originally posted by: Abinaya12

Awww...such a cute story ..I m in love wid this... How cute sidni...were...😳 d way angels nd demons were portrayed awww...superb aayu...loved it...cute sid nd antics dialogues...roshni blushing...d washroom...scene I too was blusing beautifully written...loved angel dialogue of asking permission...nd sidni listened to both angel nd demon...so cute..continue soon..😳😳 it was ssoo much interesting... Loved it...cute first wala datefor sidni...😳😳 thank q for making me smile...u cheered up my mood...😳😳😳

Originally posted by: skinnypal

@aayu - guess we can read our minds now aayu, after all we have become friends 😉 but sachi washroom romance ❤️ my fav 😛

P.S Even i am wondering how come R commented so soon! 😲😕😆