Love In A Metro (Season 3) Part 1 pg 8 |updated|

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skinnypal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

this?? nope!! I told u first ff and that too I don't think today but I'll try!

i meant any story update.. oh ok !! 😛

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Aayushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: skinnypal

i meant any story update.. oh ok !! 😛

you??

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skinnypal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

you??

lets see.. m writing but not sure whether i will complete it or not! 😆 depends!

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Aayushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: skinnypal

lets see.. m writing but not sure whether i will complete it or not! 😆 depends!

Which one?? SOL or TMH?

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skinnypal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

Which one?? SOL or TMH?

TMH...SOL haven't even touched 😆

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Aayushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

^^ hehe okk pal waiting for your SR😉

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afghangirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

👏the story is quite funny with Raj and DD and role reversal.

DD kissed Siddarth and Roshni got jealous.

Please continue soon.

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Aayushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: afghangirl
👏the story is quite funny with Raj and DD and role reversal.
DD kissed Siddarth and Roshni got jealous.
Please continue soon.

thank you😊 glad u liked role reversal and that scene😉

will do when i can!

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Rachana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Did i cmnt here before??

Ok anyways, season 3 on my fav story..🥳

* shocked- shocked*😲seeing RV and God in narrator's place.. Only u can think like this starry..🤣

"But how have these two become opposites of what they were?" - even I'm thinking hard that how could be it possible??

There kissing part was really hilarious, roshni kissing raj and DD kissing sid..laughing hard😆😆 soul swapping or what?? But why did DD lean to kiss raj😲Loved how roshni/sid cleaning sid/ roshni cheeks..😉😳

God VS rv part was well written..😊

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Aayushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: rachana10
Did i cmnt here before??
Ok anyways, season 3 on my fav story..🥳
* shocked- shocked*😲seeing RV and God in narrator's place.. Only u can think like this starry..🤣
"But how have these two become opposites of what they were?" - even I'm thinking hard that how could be it possible??
There kissing part was really hilarious, roshni kissing raj and DD kissing sid..laughing hard😆😆 soul swapping or what?? But why did DD lean to kiss raj😲Loved how roshni/sid cleaning sid/ roshni cheeks..😉😳
God VS rv part was well written..😊

Thanks R..😆 no u did not comment , oh your fav story? I am honoured!!

Happy u liked the narrators..😉

the queries u have are all cleared out in the note on pg 9..it is nature-swapping and DD kissing was a sub-concious decision!

Hehe ya Sid-Rosh interchange.!