SidNi OS Love Strikes

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is for Mirchi Woman because she wanted me to write this OS!


SidNi OS Love Strikes


Tujhe tak tak tak takte rehna

Teri bak bak bak sunte rehna


She sat cross-legged on the bed and he was staring at her as she excitedly described about something he could not hear as her beauty held him captive.


He was smiling oblivious to himself as she absorbed his charming smile!


Kaam-kaaj sab bhool bhula ke

tere piche piche chalte rehna


She tip-toed closer to him and flung her arms around him giving him a shock.


He smiled at her cute antics and kissed her passionately , while she responded back clinging to his neck for support.


ee to hai waste of time

Love is a waste of time

Pyaar vyaar waste of time

Ee love is waste of time


She broke the kiss listening to the doorbell ring , adjusted her clothes and laughed seeing his annoyed face.


He eyed her moving to get the door and thought of how nice it was to be in a relation with her!


Aa aa aa...


They were in a live-in since 3 years and had decided never to fall in love.


Phir bhi soch liya hun man maa

Ek baar toh iss jeevan maa


She returned back in a chirpy mood and asked him if he wanted something to eat?


He shook his head and was suddenly deep in his pool of thoughts , that were playing with his mind!


Kar le waste of time

Karna hai waste of time


He saw her hair flying and his heart gave him the signal which he never wanted to get in his whole life.


I want to waste my time

I Love this bhaste of time..


The signal carried the transmission that he was in love and it was time to process the carrier wave of his fast-paced heartbeat.


Aa aa aa...


He stole a look at her and realized that she looked back at him and blew him a flying kiss and his heart swelled in happiness!


Poore 75 baar mirror'wa dekhe

32 baar hum apna baal banaaye


He stood before the mirror trying to get the perfect look to impress her , but she was already impressed.


Wasn't she??


8 martaba kapda change kiye hum

Bhar bhar botal badhiya scent lagaaye


He got confused thinking what to wear and hit his leg on the Almirah in a haste only to exult in pain afterwards.


What all love does to you?


Sajte rahe, sanwarte rahe

Kiya na koi bhi kaam

Aaj samajh mein aa gaya bhaiya

Love is waste of time


He had taken a leave from office only to meet her for a date! He had told her he was going to come from work but he had to look presentable today.


After all today was special , he was gonna propose her for marriage! He had a hope she would say yes..


Phir bhi soch liya hun man maa

Ek baar toh iss jeevan maa


He took out the diamond ring he had got for her and practiced saying his lines in front of the mirror.


Kar le waste of time

Karna hai waste of time

I want to waste my time

I Love this bhaste of time..


After a while he got the watchman to stand in front of him and had got down on his knees speaking with his eyes closed.


When he opened them , he saw a herd of children sitting in front of him giggling and making fun on him.


Aa aa-aa...


On normal occassions he would have got angry but on the contrary he just laughed along with them.


Ajab ghajab si uthal hai man maa

Kaisi hai ye feeling kaise batayein


He took her to the setting he had created for the perfect date and proposal of a lifetime.He made her sit to have dinner!!


She was looking absolutely stunning and he had made it a point to say the same to her..She had called him handsome much to his delight!


Baithe baithe bina baat muskaayein

Kya hai maajra kuch bhi samajh na aaye


They stared at each other smiling without any reason , she was fidgeting with her hands every now and then.


The sheer anticipation of the moment had made both of them extremely nervous and enthuastic!


Udne ka mann kare mann ki jor jor chillaye

Aaj samajh mein aa gaya bhaiya


He suddenly stood up on the table and then sitting on it on one knee leaned into her.


She was surprised seeing him like this , he took her hand in his and asked her the magical words he was longing to say for so long!


Love is bhaste of time


"WILL YOU MARRY ME?"


Phir bhi soch liya hoon man maa

Ek baar toh iss jeevan maa


Just like his unique proposal , she also answered in an out-of-the-world way.


She slapped him on his face tightly. He was shocked , she bent on her knees and said the best words he had heard in his life!


Kar le waste of time..

Karna hai bhaste of time..


"I Love You..Will you marry me?"


He got down from the table , took her face in his hands and planted a feathery kiss on her lips! She was in a different world altogether , they were!


I want to bhaste my time..

I Love this bhaste of time..


He broke the kiss and made her wear the ring he had got.


She told him with an angry pout how she had decided to propose him the next day , that was his birthday and he had spoiled it.


Aa aa-aa...


He did not let her complete her rant and kissed her again.


Finally love had struck their hearts!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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very well written starry thanks a lot for writing it starry⭐️ best part was slapping scene rosni slapping him😆😉 and then saying i wanted to propose u on u r budday😛 must say u r something wen it comes to writing love sequence haayeee😳
kuch kuch hotha hai tum nahi samjogi😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AWESOME os...loved it a lot😳😳
Sid proposed Roshni but she slapped him and then she proposed him...soo sweet😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kitty16

AWESOME os...loved it a lot😳😳

Sid proposed Roshni but she slapped him and then she proposed him...soo sweet😳😳

Thanks!!😉
Ya different kind of proposal..Embarrassed
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Originally posted by: prathe

very well written starry thanks a lot for writing it starry⭐️ best part was slapping scene rosni slapping him😆😉 and then saying i wanted to propose u on u r budday😛 must say u r something wen it comes to writing love sequence haayeee😳

kuch kuch hotha hai tum nahi samjogi😳

thanks..I got my appreciation alreadyEmbarrassed
Slap haha I know nice na??😆
OMG thanks so much..I thought that was Pal's area of expertise..😉
Kuch kuch hota hai next on that?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

thanks..I got my appreciation already😳
Slap haha I know nice na??😆
OMG thanks so much..I thought that was Pal's area of expertise..😉
Kuch kuch hota hai next on that?


nahi buss aise tumpar line mar liya😉😆😛 par agar likna chaho toh likho😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you..😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb dhamakedar os
different way of proposing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: heemasomani

Superb dhamakedar os

different way of proposing

Thanxx😳 ur two lines made me happy😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing OS and what a unique way of accepting his proposal. Totally loved it 😃

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