SidNi SS : Stuck in Maze *Chapter 6 on page 34* completed - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Summayya11

Very well written!!😃❤️👍🏼

The suspense was just👏👏Can't wait for the next update!!😊😊


Thanks dear
Am so happy that you liked it 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ameena671

wow amazing update loved it thank you for pm sorry for late reply.


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And its okay
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star

<font size="3">Woah! What a mystery! A real Maze. Who is that friend? Will Sid find Roshni? Which friend is a murderer? I am waiting to know more Pari. Pls update soon.</font>


The next update will remove all the confusion though some will remain but I don't know whether you will read or not
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 6 - Painful Ending

Roshni walked around the mansion. It was no more maze as no place was repeating but there was no way to get out of the mansion. She heared voice and turned with jerk.

"It's Ritika yeah it's her voice" as Roshni started to move towards the direction of voice she heared another voice from opposite side

She turned towards that side

"Sami!" She recognised her voice

She was in confusion now. She was unable to decide where to go and where not.

"If I have to choose where to go first means I have to choose wisely" Roshni concluded

She thought about all the past moments with both of them trying to find something fishy in past that she may have missed back then.

"Ritika has been behaving odd from four years and more" She stepped towards the path from where Ritika voice was coming

She halted as soon she heared her scared voice - "a killer will be never scared liked this" She thought

"It was Sami idea to come here so maybe she"Roshni turned her footsteps towards Samira

Siddharth looked around confused. The voice didn't clear much and what he said to him was not making sense.

As he turned he saw Ritika. She seemed lot of scared. He stopped for a moment. His voice echoed in his ears.



"Was he talking about Ritika?" Siddhartha questioned himself

He remembered her sudden change of behaviour and how they ignored her while Samira has been always with them.

He rushed to Ritika.

"Ritika" he called her

She turned and looked at him.

Roshni looked at Samira who stood with her back towards her. Roshni tried to compose herself. She need to know the truth but how was the question. She walked towards Ritika with small steps. As she stood just behind her, she called her.

"Sami"

Samira turned and looked at Roshni shocked and relief.

"Roshni! Oh God! Finally, you found me" Samira sigh in relief

"Yeah I found you. Now we shall get out of here" Her voice was weird but Samira didn't care or maybe didn't notice

"But we can't get out from here" Roshni stopped and looked at Samira confused face

"Why? " Samira looked at her questionely

"You have knife right? Give me that it will help us to get out from here" Roshni played her cards

" kn..ife... I" Samira stammered

Samira stammering was like a knife in Roshni heart and she replied bitterly

"Yeah the same knife you have some minutes back in corridor. Me and Siddhart" Roshni didn't clear the thing but just gave her clues so that if she is killer she will get what she is saying and if she is not then Roshni will be at safe side

Roshni observed her keenly. She could see the emotions flowing on her face shock anger and much more. Roshni knew at that moment all of that was true. What voice told her and what she decided.

"You was our friend Samira then why did you do all this. From past 4 years you have been trying to do this why?" Roshni vpice raised in pain

Roshni remembered how she brought them on this trip and how there has been such killing attempts before too and Samira was directly or indirectly involved in those accidents and she was the only one who distracted her and Siddhart from Ritika change of behaviour in the start until they get used to her behaviour means all of these things were linked to Samira as she is the main culprit

"Tell me Samira why did you do all this and what has happened to Ritika why did she become so silent? Tell me damn it" Roshni shouted

Samira was silent. Something was playing in her mind. She looked at Roshni. Her face was covered with anger.

"What do you want to know? And why today? Am surprised why are you suddenly so concerned about your so called friends huh?" Samira voice had the tinge of hurt that brought guilt in Roshni

Roshni swallowed. She looked at Samira determined to know the truth.

"Don't be so hurt Samira you are not hurt you are a killer damn it! You hurt others" Roshni masked the guilt with anger

The anger was brewing in Samira. She looked away for a moment and then looked at Roshni.

"Yes I hurt others but do you know why? All because of you, you and you" Samira shouted

"What do you want to know? Why is Ritika behaving strange for so many years I'll tell you just because of YOU" Samira pointed at her

Roshni looked on confused

"Because she lost her brother because of you" Samira shouted again

"Me? " Roshni whispered confusely

"Yes you! Me and Ranveer, Ritika brother we both love each other atleast that was what I thought until the day Siddharth propsed you. He just got mad. He was heartbroken. He saod that he don't love me but you. He said that he was acting with me just to get you. He never proposed me but he always shows that he love me we spend so much time together but suddenly he was saying that he loves you. Just outside this mansion we were standing. He wanted to leave everything and go far away he was heartbroken so was I. I just help him in what he wanted." Samira looked at Roshni with pain

"I didn't wanted to hurt him but he, he was leaving me for you I love him madly. We just got in truffle fight and I pushed him. He hurt his head badly by a sharp edge of statue. I was so scared I didn't knew what to do. So I ran away from there. After some hours, Ritika called me and told me that Ranveer is dead. I cried so much and that time I realized that it was all of you both fault. You shouldn't have been in our life. I decided to take revenge." Samira eyes were shining with evil madness

Roshni was stunned. Her mind was frozen.

"You know I always fill Ritika ears against you both. I told her how you both are glad for Ranveer death. She was sad. I didn't let her meet you guys in this issue. I have to do so much. You remember all those accidents that took place during our trips? That were done by me. But you guys always got saved. Then I decided now I'll kill you here and no one will doubt everyone will say it was accident or some ghost kill you like it was said on Ranveer death."

Roshni looked at Samira blankly. She didn't knew what to think or what not. She never knew this nice friend of theirs has so much madness and evilness.

"You are disgusting Samira. You killed the one you love. You could have saved him but you left him to die" Roshni looked her accusing

Before Samira could say anything the police came there and arrested her. Roshni stood silently. Ritika and Siddharth were standing just behind her. They heared it all. They were also shocked on the revelation.

Both the girls were broken. Siddharth helped them and thevthree friends walked outside the mansion. They stood by the door and looked at mansion with pain. They can never forget this trip.

Ritika looked away crying. She lost two important person in this place.

"Bhai" she cried for her brother

As she looked up she saw her brother standing infront of her with a aura of light. She was shocked. He waved her with smile. As she step forward towards him she stumbled on stone but was save from falling. She looked up again and saw him gone.

What happened that night they buried it in their hearts. They didn't even talked about this horrific night to any one. How they lost the way or that voice or what Ritika saw or how police came they didn't discussed. They didn't told what they saw even to each other. They just buried it in their hearts to not ever talk about it.

Illusion or not they just wanted to forget it.
The END

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So finally I completed it. Believe me guys this part was hard to write. I has mixed up ideas and nothing was helping.

I would say I didn't liked the ending it was not what I planned don't know what you guys think about it.

Love,
Asshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update yaar. I felt it was sam now my thinking came true.
I know now no one is interested in JR. write another ff if u can
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow so here comes the end 😊 and iron id end of sidni too😭
thanks alot fr updating😳 i loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow wonderful update and sad ending loved it thank you for pm sorry for late reply.
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Posted: 9 years ago
A brilliant update 👏👏 Thank you 😃❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vijaya138

Amazing update yaar. I felt it was sam now my thinking came true.

I know now no one is interested in JR. write another ff if u can


Thanks dear
Yeah your thinking came true
I will surely write another one but when am not sure and that too SS as FF needs lot of time that I can't give due to studies 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: prathe

wow so here comes the end😊and iron id end of sidni too😭

thanks alot fr updating😳i loved it


Thanks dear
SidNi! What can I say

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