SidNi SS : Stuck in Maze *Chapter 6 on page 34* completed - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Summayya11



you are welcome and i'll be waiting😃


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Chapter 5 - Find the Key

Siddharth has checked almost every room but was not able to find Roshni. He was tensed for her and scared to lose her. He regret to agreed and come at this place.

"Roshni where are you?" He whispered helplessly

He knew she is strong but the situation she was in sometimes back told him that she is not right, she is not in the senses to fight.

On the other hand, Roshni was falling weak, she was not even able to move an inch since she realized that she has lost her way. She was scared unlike Siddharth and her friends she has felt the strange odour of the mansion. She has realized that this mansion had some secrets that there are some facts hidden behind what people says.

She was feeling like someone was seeing her like there's someone behind her. It was just a illusion she knew but there was some truth in it too. There was truly someone maybe seeing them all not just behind her but behind all of them. What he want she was not understanding but she had strong feeling that they are going to lose someone.

"Oh God please give my Roshni strength to fight give her strength and please unite us" Siddharth prayed

Roshni closed her eyes trying to compose herself

"Roshni please don't lose hope, try to look around am with you here, fighting with you. You may not see me but am with you just be strong" Roshni felt Siddharth saying this to her and it boosts her strength

She opened her eyes with a new determination. Roshni thought to check all the rooms but when she checked she realized that she is passing through the same place again and again. She realized the mansion has turned into a maze for them.

"Damn it!" Siddharth banged his hand on a door "Roshni was right we were passing through the same place again and again that's why we were trapped in the corridor", Siddharth whispered to himself as he came in the same room for umpteenth time

"But wait Roshni got out of this corridor so there's surely something that shall help us to get out of this maze" Siddharth was thoughtful

For Roshni it was like someone playing with them like children play hide and seek in vast place and the kid that hide him from caught and the one trying to catch them came to the same place again and again in try to find him but got nothing as he has moved to another place.

"Who are you? What the hell do you want from us? Why don't you came infront of us? Why are you playing this hide and seek with us" Roshni screamed in frustration as the tears of helplessness make their way

Something was changing. She felt it. The air was changing she can smell it. The fear engulfed her heart as she couldn't understand the thing happening. She took a step ahead and looked around. Something is going to happen.

She saw a strange door in the end of her sight. She was curious. She walked towards it cautiously. It was locked. She looked around and took a small yet heavy statue. It can help her break to break the lock. She striked it harder and harder on the lock. She got tired but the lock was not breaking.

"What is it made off?" Roshni was frustrated on it

She thought for sometime and then came with an idea. She took out the pin from his hairs and start to unlock the door with hairpin.

Click!

And a smile crossed her face as she realized she did it. She quickly open the door and entered the room. The room was empty but it was huge maybe the biggest room of the mansion. Roshni was struck by its beauty. She was in the middle of room when the door got closed itself and she looked at it with jerk. Before she ran to open it, she heared a voice.

"Janna chahty thy na mai kon hon? You want to know right? But first, you have to find the deceiver among you! Go and first find that person" the voice was heavy and there was a strange effect in room

"Do I seem like fool? First you tell me who you are and second stop your crap" Roshni was angry, they are her friends not deceiver like this player

There was a laughing voice " fool! yes you are fool! That person is fooling you from long time. You should be thankful to me for saving you! Remember the knife you saw she was your friend and I saved you from her."

Roshni was shocked. Her friend was trying to killer her? How is it possible?

"Why should I believe you? It could be you trying to kill us" Roshni doubted

"Dead people doesn't kill others living people does" His answer brought a chill down her spine

"De..dead" Roshni asked scared

"Dead from long time killed by her now I want revenge find her give me and you all are free or else live here for ever"

Roshni stood shock and numb. The room was back in its proper condition but Roshni was far from being normal. There was so many emotions going in her.

She touch her forehead. Her foot step backwards involuntarily.

"He was lying no? But what if he was saying the truth?" She was in dilemma "no I should do as he is saying! I should try to find whether he was saying truth or not by trying to find her or else what if she got Siddharth... no no I have to find out the truth"

Roshni rushed outside the room. She looked around, there were two pathways.

"Where to go? Where will be Ritika or Samira?" Roshni was confused

"I came from here so I should go there" Roshni decided and started to find Ritika and Samira

Siddharth was confident. He knew he need to find his love and friends. Even if there was some fear in his heart he didn't let it overpower him. He found that when emotions rule them they got stuck in maze so he did his best to control his emotions.

After walking here and there for so much time he found the room Roshni opened. The room had a strange attraction in it. Roshni has left the door opened in hurry and the open door gave Siddharth idea that someone must have entered the room so he decided to check in there. As soon he entered the door got locked.

"Am surprised to see you here! You found the way smart huh" He heared the heavy voice

The room has turned heavy too, Siddharth was boggled.

"Don't be so shocked and confused just know that you need to save her. Go, find her, she is scared"

"Who? Roshni?" Siddharth couldn't help but question

"Huh! I know you love her but don't be so much mad in love there are people around you who may need you. Am talking about your friend, find her" Siddharth was socked at the words, they hold anger, power and some hidden secrets that he didn't knew or maybe knew but didn't yet noticed

"Which one? And where will I find her?" Siddharth thought he may get some clue

"That's upto you to find" Silence prevailed

The door opened up. The room was light again.

"Are you hearing me? I want to know somethings" Siddharth feared that he will nit get answer and that's what happened

"Damn it!" Siddharth was angry "already am worried for Roshni and this man is saying to find someone else and didn't even told the way! And who was he?" Siddharth was confused and clouded with questions

Precap : killer

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So so so here's the update, a lovely update no? Yes! After all you guys got to know about the key of mystery.
The key of mystery is killer but who is killer will be revealed in next update as one revelation at a time. But you guys can guess it now. And and the next update maybe the end of story.
Enjoy

Asshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow super but ho the killer is ritika Sam and that mysterious voice warning I'd and roshni uwrote it very well I loved it to the core superb 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: prathe

Wow super but ho the killer is ritika Sam and that mysterious voice warning I'd and roshni uwrote it very well I loved it to the core superb👏


You have to guess that I had given the hints who the kiler is from start now you guess that or wait for my next update 😉
Thanks am glad you liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Asshi...


You have to guess that I had given the hints who the kiler is from start now you guess that or wait for my next update 😉
Thanks am glad you liked it

yoyo will try to guess and yes ofcourse u r update😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very well written!! 😃❤️👍🏼
The suspense was just 👏👏 Can't wait for the next update!! 😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow amazing update loved it thank you for pm sorry for late reply.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Woah! What a mystery! A real Maze. Who is that friend? Will Sid find Roshni? Which friend is a murderer? I am waiting to know more Pari. Pls update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vijaya138

suspense thriller

continue soon dear


Thanks dear 😊

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