SidNi TS : Love In A Metro (Last part pg18) 02/06* - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
I know u guys have forgot the story..
Sorry for such a late update!!
This is from Roshni's POV!!
Part-3

Ok too long a wait right??

Well our love story is worth the wait right?

So what happened today?

Why am I so happy?

Lets do this why doesn't Roshni tell u about today's events!!

How the truth came in front of her and the consequences it had..

So I'll tell u then coz u guys might be bored of my Sid's nonsense commentary.!!

Ok so it had been 4 months since we started dating and we were both super happy.

I waited everyday thinking he will propose me one day.

And then one day ;

"BF!!" some girl called out and I don't know why Sid turned around.

We were holding hands when I saw a girl approaching us.

"Rhea?" Sid asked surprised and left my hand.

He went and hugged that girl.

OMG!! I'll kill him today..

What , was she some disney princess?

Why was he hugging her so tight?

He never hugged me like this.

I didn't realize when they both had started talking and Sid introduced me as his girl-friend.

'Ha in your face u poor woman!' I mentally thought.

"Hi Rh.." I said while she just cut me and started talking to Sid!!

'What the hell? This girl? Is she Ms. World??' I was just devising of ways to kill this new best-friend of Sid..

'Should I kill her by a gun? Nah Sid will not like it.

Then knife? Huh nope..

Bomb??' I thought and then a bomb dropped on me.

"Sid how come u are in this tacky place btw?" she said referring to the restaurant.

'Oh wow this girl has so many problems? First she busts on our date and now trying to get close to my boy-friend!' I was bubbling like a volcano.

"I mean u can literally own this place?" asked that witch.

"What?" I asked surprised.

I looked at Sid and he had an expression of guilt on his face.
"Sid?" I asked him trying to know what was the matter!

"Excuse us Rhea." he said to her and told me he was not poor infact he was a rich hotelier.

My anger had no limit..

Again I was betrayed by someone I love.

My eyes glistened with tears..

I started moving and he came behind me but I was not gonna stop!!

And then crash...

Lets fast-forward to the metro again!

I saw him entering in the train and cursed myself for leaving behind my bag.

His hands were in a cast and he had a plaster on his leg!

What was this guy thinking?

He strided towards me and was gonna fall when I caught him.
Oh yay I caught him this time around..I am a superman now oh oh super-woman!!

He smiled at me but I left him when I was sure he could stand properly!!

I was still angry at him. Ofcourse I was unhappy and sad due to his accident.

I never wanted him to get hurt because of me!!

"So u came to see me at the hospital?" he asked smiling.

I was sure he had a disease to smile by now!!

"I freaking got u to the hospital!" I said louder than I should have.

"Ok why?" he asked.

Oh No what do I say now?

"I.. U..!" I fumbled and he suddenly knelt in front of me.

"Siddharth? What are u doing? We are inside a metro!!" I was embarrassed to say the least.

"I am so sorry Roshni! How u got to know the truth was not the way I wanted u to know it..Please forgive me! I know I did wrong but as soon as I was about to tell u about myself u said u hated rich guys." he said.

I was taken back to our first conversation.

"I really love u! Will u marry me?" he asked taking out a ring.

I got him up and said " I know u are hurting ur leg , don't put strain on it."

"I have been carrying this ring with me since I first met u..Please keep it!" he said and I was touched.

This superman loved me since the day he met me!!

He kept it in my hand and said "When u forgive me and wanna accept my proposal I'll meet u again!"

I saw him go away and knew he was the one for me.

I just did coz when its right its right.

And I proposed him!

"Siddharth Khurrana will u marry me?"

And any guesses for if he accepted?

"Nah !"said Sid kissing on her cheek.

"I love you.." said Roshni and hugged him.

"Oww!" he shriecked in pain.

"Is it paining?" she asked worried.

"No when u are with me nothing pains." he said smiling!!

"Disease-guy." she laughed and hit his head.
So no two thoughts on why he is so happy today even after having a near-death experience..
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So i know a realy bad end please give ur views!
Edited by Starsfireflies - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
aayu can this get any cuter?
"How should i kill her?" - that was hilarious! 😆😆
i love this TS. . It was the cutest one ever.. superman and superwoman couple.. fantastic ending to this story!! 😳😳
Edited by skinnypal - 10 years ago
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I loved it aayu, seriously..😉 It was so cute from roshni's pov and the dialogues are so funny, Ms. world,Disney princess🤣.. Gun, knife, bomb oh my poor girl confused how to kill her..Rhea, all i can say i was imagine misha/nisha in her place...😛This is not fair na how can she forgive him just for that ring and he loves her on the day he met her..😳 How kissely he accepted her proposal..😛

P.s: I was typing for this cmnt and lost my position n "tu mera humdard"..😭😭
Edited by rachana10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it😃 I was waiting efor this update of urs.. I love both Sid and Roshni's narration.. It was so cute😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: skinnypal

aayu can this get any cuter?

"How should i kill her?" - that was hilarious! 😆😆
i love this TS. . It was the cutest one ever.. superman and superwoman couple.. fantastic ending to this story!! 😳😳

thanks😉
glad u liked it..😃
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I loved it aayu, seriously..😉 It was so cute from roshni's pov and the dialogues are so funny, Ms. world,Disney princess🤣.. Gun, knife, bomb oh my poor girl confused how to kill her..Rhea, all i can say i was imagine misha/nisha in her place...😛This is not fair na how can she forgive him just for that ring and he loves her on the day he met her..😳 How kissely he accepted her proposal..😛

P.s: I was typing for this cmnt and lost my position n "tu mera humdard"..😭😭

thank u..😉
even I imagined that girl after I had posted it n read it again😆
Sorry u lost ur position..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zoopassion

Loved it😃 I was waiting efor this update of urs.. I love both Sid and Roshni's narration.. It was so cute😳

thank u..
i m happy to know u were waiting fr it n liked it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Os...😳...Aww...Jealous Rosh...😉& Thanks for the Pm...😊
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Originally posted by: arshi00

Awesome Os...😳...Aww...Jealous Rosh...😉& Thanks for the Pm...😊

thank u m glad u like it😃
jealousy is the best medicine😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank u fr the appreciation😊

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