SidNi 5S: A Fantasy Wedding (Epilogue pg 42) *25/07* - Page 30

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

OMG R?? Maaf kar dijiye my god hindi and that too correct?? how come?😆


How cum i write hindi correctly??😲 Hehe all bcoz of that Google..mere hindi dictionary hai..😳😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww...myyy. Gawddd...
What an update..

Read wedding bidaai and epilogue at once...

Can't describe how I felt by reading the update...its outstanding...

Liked how sid was searching for the sherwani and how he chose the sherwani...

And the naughty things happened while welcoming the bharaat..

And naughty sid very fast n in hurry to marry roshni...

Badai was lil emotional... how nicely u described all the persons feelings...

Liked how sid assured dd.

And epilogue was aww...how cute... Roshni gift was outstanding and sid s gift was out of the world...

He just expressed how much he love her in just one action..

Congratulations for this 5S

Looking forward for this kind of works of urs
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Posted: 10 years ago
very well written epilogue and the dialogue jo chandiniroshni deti hai woh mere paas hai😳😉 was superb and the song and the scenario u put up also matched very well
beautifully written starry👏 and u presented it in a subtle way i loved it and enjoyes reading starry⭐️👏😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zoopassion

Aww😳😳 That was such a cute and beautiful update and a perfect ending to the 5S😳 Loved it, keep writing more😊

thank u so much..I am happy u liked the end!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank you..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sowiee

Awww...myyy. Gawddd...

What an update..

Read wedding bidaai and epilogue at once...

Can't describe how I felt by reading the update...its outstanding...

Liked how sid was searching for the sherwani and how he chose the sherwani...

And the naughty things happened while welcoming the bharaat..

And naughty sid very fast n in hurry to marry roshni...

Badai was lil emotional... how nicely u described all the persons feelings...

Liked how sid assured dd.

And epilogue was aww...how cute... Roshni gift was outstanding and sid s gift was out of the world...

He just expressed how much he love her in just one action..

Congratulations for this 5S

Looking forward for this kind of works of urs

Thank u so much..for not being able to describe but still describing it so well😆
Happy u liked sherwani scene and I thought bidaai one was totally off but happy that u liked it too..
glad you liked the gifts!😳
Happy i could entertain u with this 5S..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: prathe

very well written epilogue and the dialogue jo chandiniroshni deti hai woh mere paas hai😳😉 was superb and the song and the scenario u put up also matched very well

beautifully written starry👏 and u presented it in a subtle way i loved it and enjoyes reading starry⭐️👏😳

happy u liked that dialogue..😊
glad u liked the whole setup i gave , i tried tk give my best..I am so sorry if it didn't match ur expectations!
Thanks for all the appreciation!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

happy u liked that dialogue..😊
glad u liked the whole setup i gave , i tried tk give my best..I am so sorry if it didn't match ur expectations!
Thanks for all the appreciation!

starry no sry and all ok 😃 u wrote it very well to be honest am nt comfortable in reading ott romantic scenes so in that sense i loved how u presented it 👏⭐️ cheers starry🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: prathe

starry no sry and all ok 😃 u wrote it very well to be honest am nt comfortable in reading ott romantic scenes so in that sense i loved how u presented it 👏⭐️ cheers starry🤗

Okay and to be honest I have read much much more when it comes to these type of scenes but just didn't have it in me to write like that!
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Posted: 10 years ago
@starry u write wat u can write and in which u rr comfartable rest all falls into place automatically😊

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