SidNi FF||The Dark Side of Light|| Pt.3-Pg.12 01/23 - Page 3

Originally posted by: taahir004

Wow that was just amazing . Sweety has cancer and she is still just a little girl but she understood the logic of beauty when Siddarth had

explained her .

So seems like Sid has an ex lover Priya ...is she dead or does Sid

consider her dead

Ms Patel works in the hospital

Originally posted by: Guruvishva

Interesting 😳😳😳

A wonderful start dear 😳😳😳

I just lo ed the flaw on your writing 😳😳😳

The way you brought out the characters Sid , Roshini, Sweety & Priya was really so lovely dear 👏👏👏

Wow so Sid is helping a small girl Sweety ...really a lovey character sketch for Sid 😳

Sweety the cute little child who has cancer 😳😭😳

Roshini Sweety lovey sissy who wishes to give her sister a surprise 😳😳😳

I hope that Priya was Sid's ex-lover and both Roshini's & Priya's voice are ye same which creates a doubt in Sid's mind whether still Priya is alive 😛

Or due to voice when Sid meets Roshini and their friendship grows which will lead to a new love story 😆

I'm sorry for the assumptions dear 😛

I couldn't control my curiosity 😆

I'm waiting to the story to wrap out fully 😆

Loved this part dear 😳😳😳

When Re you going to update Part 2 ? 😆😆😆

I can't wait longer 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: p_OO_ja

that was nice...😳😳

my keyboard is half dead..

will edit wen i get a new one😆😆

Originally posted by: p_OO_ja

that was nice...😳😳

*******unres*******

it was good..👏👏

ok initially i thot tht sweety is sid's sis in real-real sense

and then came dhamaka😆😆

then i thot tht she(sweety) is a orphan..

and again came dhama ki she's roshni's sis😲😲

then i thot sid is faking the care for sweety..😡

again was proved wrong with him being with her all the while🤗

then finally i thot end of surprises...

tabb aaya sid-roshni phone call😲😲

and sid going to past...😕

for past i thought they broke up or something...

bt i got PRIYAA 😲😲😲

and the dhoka thing😕😕

in all it was a complete surprize package for me😆😆

which thankfully i could digest😳😳

will b waiting for more😆😆

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Outstanding start dear. ...
Love whole idea...and the frst chapter. ..
The way u expressed n described sid n sweety 's bonding ...its awsm...
Feel sad for sweety...poor girl. ...Suffering sooo much in this tender age. ...
But the way sid care n love her its priceless. ...
So sweety is roshani's sis...n sid didn't met her wd yet..
Its going to read intrsting frst meet of sidni...
But wt abt priya ????
Is she related wd Roshni's or something else ???
So much questions na ??
But Egrly waiting for next chapter. ..
Its going very interesting ...

Thanks alot for pm dea. ...
Plzzz pmme regular. ..
Keep rocking. .
Tc