TS: Habits (Part 2/2 Updated Pg 5) - Page 3

Originally posted by: MansurKhan56

Nidhi this is sweet stuff👏

I am toh just speechless😳. Totally beautiful and perfect👏

Simply fantastic. Superb explanation of memories.

It was all nice to read Ragini's POV anytime😳

Thanks for writing and can we have N POV too😛

Originally posted by: loveleen3

I read it yesterday and ever since then I've been trying to come up with words that would do justice to appreciate this write-up.

I had felt something when I read it. I didn't know what at that time. Happens a lot of time with me. I have figured it out a bit now. Although I am not sure if it makes sense.

This write-up wasn't written in the first person, but it was personal. Extremely personal. Personal to the point that I felt I was invading someone's privacy. Like I had read someone's personal journal which I wasn't supposed to. This has been going on in my mind since yesterday. I think the individual who said we shouldn't read other person's journal because that is invading someone's privacy was lying. I am pretty sure he had read someone's personal diary. And when he had read it, it had scared the shit out of him. Being aware of the pain the other person is in, is a scary thing.

When I read this line- The night she could no longer bring his scent to mind,

This sentence terrified me. I imagined her pain and I wanted to unread this whole thing. I can not think of a better compliment for you.

Terrific writing, Nidhi! 👏

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi

WOW piece!

Habits couldn't be described more beautifully! Each and every habit.. Put me into a trance! They are so beautiful! My heart warmed! And the last part.. His eyes still spoke to hers..and in his heart, she still heard her name.. Ethereal!

You made me realize once again why I love them ❤️

Thanks a lot! Perfect birthday gift❤️

Originally posted by: metoyou

No no, I would like to believe you didn't made that up matlab yes smell makes one of our strongest memories 😉😳

Haww... how can I make it up to you then? Why are you being so difficult 😕😛

Originally posted by: ronitfan

This is the most beautiful habit.. Nidhi..

Thank you so much for this amazingly sensitive and vivid description of what love is - these small things that define us and become our rituals when we change that something in us to make space for the 'one' - *SIGH*

This was heavenly gorgeous and such a beautiful birthday gift..

Your writing is tremendous, dear.

Thank you so much!!

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Thanks so much Ragini!! ❤️ Obviously it means a great deal that you enjoyed this so much 😳

Hope your birthday was a great one...don't party TOO hard though young lady 😛

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi

Haha! What's partying hard all about? 😉 Ask Narges, I'm such an innocent soul😛

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Well if you've been hanging out with Narges then you're definitely not so innocent anymore...😉

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Mansur, thanks so very much! 😳 Sach mein your praise is too much but really happy you liked this especially since your stories make me laugh all the time 😊

No N's POV for now (I am hopelessly on R's side all the time 😆)

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Thank you so much Sukhi ❤️

So glad you liked it...in fact your feedback is always a gift in return 😳

And Charlie Brown/Peanuts is one of my most favoritest things in the world, thank you 🤗