TS: Habits (Part 2/2 Updated Pg 5)

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imagine43

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Pretty!! Pretty and amazing.

First of all a big YAY!! we got the second part.. and double YAY! YAY!, we got Nachiket's POV. 🥳

This was subtle and warm, beautifully flowing from part 1.

I loved the newspaper part.. I means so many things.. perfectly written, kudos!!👏

And this line.. "she had told him how many strokes before" .. unrealistic.. yet so true to people who love each other out of this world.. Aptly signifies their boundless love! ❤️

Finally, it leaves you with a smile.. on the face and in the heart..

Thanks again..

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Mansur Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

I am speechless and totally spellbound by Nachiket's POV...😳

Damn... I am short on words to describe how much I loved this narration👏

I'll come back later with proper comments. Loved it😳

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AsEnAth

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Nidhi All can i say is amazing speechless wonderfull beautiful etc

This OS of your well be always one of my fev OS and i bookmark it

Thankz for 2part Nidhi

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ShyNomad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: imagine43
Pretty!! Pretty and amazing.
First of all a big YAY!! we got the second part.. and double YAY! YAY!, we got Nachiket's POV. 🥳
This was subtle and warm, beautifully flowing from part 1.

I loved the newspaper part.. I means so many things.. perfectly written, kudos!!👏

And this line.. "she had told him how many strokes before" .. unrealistic.. yet so true to people who love each other out of this world.. Aptly signifies their boundless love! ❤️

Finally, it leaves you with a smile.. on the face and in the heart..

Thanks again..

Thank you Imagine, truly from the bottom of my heart... Your comment too left me with a smile :)

Looking forward to the next part of your wonderful story!

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ShyNomad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: MansurKhan56

I am speechless and totally spellbound by Nachiket's POV...😳

Damn... I am short on words to describe how much I loved this narration👏

I'll come back later with proper comments. Loved it😳

Thank you Mansur!! It is enough for me to know that you liked it :)

Especially since N's POV is often difficult for me to understand it means a lot that you enjoyed it.

Meanwhile I hope your NR are not in the water too long...

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ShyNomad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: zuss
Nidhi All can i say is amazing speechless wonderfull beautiful etc

This OS of your well be always one of my fev OS and i bookmark it

Thankz for 2part Nidhi

Thank you Zuss! That is quite enough praise :)

Thank you for reading and bookmarking... That is one of the best compliments a writer can ask for 😳

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shabana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

How did i miss this just read it nidhi and loved it nachikets POV.

Beautifully written how he notices the changes.

Wonderful writing

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neiralove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Oh Nidhi! Thank you SO SO SO much for this wonderful continuation! 🤗

But as he squeezed back the tension left her frame. It dawned on him that some wounds would need more than promises and phere to heal.
This is so true for them and you described it just perfectly--her possessiveness over him that she has waited for so long to assert and the way he lets her claim him in the subtlest of ways 😳

Sometime in the middle of the night he awoke to find her feet sandwiched between his once more, her perpetually icy skin seeking comfort and warmth.
As someone whose feet are always freezing...

Nidhi, once again, this was just phenomenal. The little details that you have Nachiket pick up on are so exquisite and so divine and it brings the whole story together perfectly. You are such a talented writer and I'm so happy that you wrote this, especially despite your busy work schedule! Thank you thank you thank you! ❤️ 🤗 ❤️

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Mansur Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Nidhi... I am back to re-read this POV once again...😆...Utna thoda sa feedback kaise enough hoga😆...

This update was so sweet, delicate and brilliant👏... Thank you for writing Nachi Baba's POV... It was amazing and very subtle...😳...A perfect flow of narration from N's point of view😳

My Favorite parts... 😃

he heard humming and found her in front of their mirror, putting on her earrings (the left one first, always) before dabbing on her perfume (her delicate wrists, the pulse point on her neck he knew all too well). His heart rejoiced at the clink and rustle of her bangles, the soothing sound filling a void that had been carved out during years of silent days and nights...

Sometime in the middle of the night he awoke to find her feet sandwiched between his once more, her perpetually icy skin seeking comfort and warmth...

And when she caught his eye, lips turning up into a smile, her countenance blossoming...

These lovely parts got me in a spot imagining RR & PKN nailing it with all their bountless talent ...Beautiful explanation of Neira's delicate yet infinite love😳... Totally exquisite👏

I am toh floored and totally speechless😳 ...This P.O.V is a total MASTERPIECE⭐️

Coming to the N/R of my filmy story Nidhi.. You and others will know soon what exactly happened to N/R in a couple of days...😉

Edited by MansurKhan56 - 9 years ago